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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: tiger_lily

HEENAAA...!!


*Kiara dusting her hands and clearing her throat...*

aahhaaannn!!

yeah ... crazzy woman ..!!
ok ok, kiara i understood , how much angry u r, look i m holding my ears, sryy dear

I even voted for this FF i guess i EVEN told u TO PM ME in ur previous Book...! did u, sry yaar, i think i forgot!!😭😭😭😭😭
Sheesh .. and I was under the ilussion that u didnot Update..! n i though u just read first part n still reading d rest one's😕
Crazzy woman ... Completed once whole BOOK..!! in the comments it was like JEH IS TAKING CARE OF ANGEL AND PIYA..!!
WHAT HAPPENED TO ABHAY..!!soon u wl come to knw abt this part!!!
Kiara STOP diverting back to focus..!!

Sheesh that day I was ready to scream at u fully..! i knw, i knw, i m getting through ur post , how much u r despirate to kill me😉
but 1. was tru fone that was annoying..!
2. Pata nahi kya anab shanab bol deti..!
koi nai, main sab sun leti, bt plss mujhe maaf kar de yaar,
Kill you the next time u don PM me dekho kya karti hoon ..! i swear, main kabhi sapne me tujhe pm karan nai bholungi😉
EKTA KO CHOK KE TUMHE SUE KARDUNGI..!!
AAYE SHAPPAT..!! u will be dead..!! hila itna gussa,
Chal now gotta go and catch up... (to self)Kiara are u crazzy ...! until Ena(m calling u dat from nw on u cn call me wat ever u want kiara) Pm's you you wont even open her thread..!
wl try to comment yaar

Now Pm fast..! ure w wl get my pm tonight😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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part-23

abhay-pia landed at INDIRA GANDHI INTERNATIONAL AIRPORT!!!

their journey was quite long n all in silence, there were only two reasons behind dat painfull silence, pia was feeling all sick during their whole journey n abhay was nt ready to deal wid pia's questioning n suspecious eyes, regarding his decision ,on d other hand, pia was sure dat abhay was hiding something frm him or might be , he was worried abt angel's unxpected growth syndromes!! she was confused bt sure there was something which was hell wrong!!!

they hired a cab frm Delhi to dehradun!!

pia was confused whether she should b happy day she was back to her land or upset coz d reason behind their return was nt a happy one n above dat abhay's quick decision , didn't give her a chance to inform kabir at her own, although she was nt dat much worried, coz kabir was all aware of d circumstances nw!!!

pia was resting her head on abhay's shoulder!!

abhay looked at her pale face, wid all concerned- pia, how r u feeling nw??

pia while closing her eyes- much better!!! bt i m hungry!!!

abhay smiled a little n said-wat my princess is demanding this time!!!

pia while entwining her fingers in his- i think she wants to taste something of real India!!!

pia was thinking at dat moment(abhay i dunno wat is going in ur mind, bt i cn feel it, there is something wrong, bt still watever d reason is, i m happy dat u r wid me coz i cn bear ny pain n to ny xtent, till d time u r wid me!!!

abhay on d other hand was thinking- thanx pia for giving dat smile back to me, coz i don't knw for how long i wl b able to c dat smile on ur lips!!!

abhay told driver to stop cab at some restaurant!!!

abhay-pia was waiting for their order, when pia finally asked- abhay r u hiding something frm me!!

abhay knew this question was coming, while looking into baby brown questioning eyes, he lied again, while taking her hands in his- pia, there is nthing , i m hiding frm u, its all i m worried abt u n angel's vampire instincts, u knw na!!

pia was trying 2 read his blue hypnotic eyes n then she tried to connect herself wid abhay, bt to her utter shock, she realised abhay was blocking his thoughts!!!

pia kept looking at him n he found those hurt looks in her eyes, he remained quiet, he wanted her to say something, bt meanwhile food arrived n pia took away her gaze frm him, abhay knew she was hurt, bt there was nthing wid him, which he could av xplained her at dat moment!!!

pia started eating silently, she didn't say n ask nything else!!

her silent treatment was killing abhay, bt by breaking his silence on her questions, won't b a solution of d things at dat moment!!

after some time they started their journey again, pia took her seat n kept looking outside d window, she was fighting wid her own thoughts, she wanted to talk to him, she wanted to ask him , dat wat happened in a day, dat he kept him away frm his own thoughts n pain!!!

on d other hand, abhay was still thinking, dat how to make her believe dat he was nt hiding nything frm her, bt damaged has already done, so finally he took her hands in his n pia who was looking outside turned around n found those two eyes were guilty of something!!!

abhay-pia, i m sorry, i knw i av hurt u, bt cn i ask something frm u??

pia's heart felt d pain , of seeing him in such a condition, she simply nodded in yes!!!

abhay- pls trust me n give me some time!!!

pia kept looking at him for sometime n then she said- i trust u abhay n its nt abt trust, its abt u, i knw there is something running inside u, which is breaking u inside n its nt just abt angel!!!

abhay gaze fell down, coz he knew he won't b able to lie more, bt then pia replied- take ur time abhay, i m always here wid u!!!

abhay again looked at him , bt didn't say nything this time!!!

after sometime pia dozed off, her head was lying on abhay's shoulder, bt abhay noticed she was very restless during her sleep, so he connected himself to angel!!!

abhay- hey my princess, how r u??

angel- nt good dad!!

abhay(gt worried)- wat happened to my angel??

angel- dad, nw these days, i feel so different, watever mommy av, i don't like it, dunno y??

abhay's xpressions changed , listening his daughters words, he asked in a polite tone, angel,do u feel like hurting ur mom nw these days??

angel(wid almost not hearable tone, like she was sobbing, she replied)- hmmm daddy, sometimes i feel!!

abhay found it hard to swallow his daughter words, bt again when he heard angels sobs- he said- angel,i knw its nt ur fault, so don't cry , i promise dad wl find out some way soon n i trust u, just give me few days!!!

angel(while sobbing)- bt dad, wat if i won't b able to control myself , i don't want to hurt mom!!!

abhay- i knw my princess cn never think of hurting her mom, just for few days, everything wl get fine !!!

angel- i love u both dad!!

abhay- v luv u too dad!!

...

after a long journey of 8 hours abhay-pia finally reached dehradoon

abhay took pia to their room , meanwhile servants brought their luggage inside, abhay also told them to cook some food for pia!!!

pia was feeling home, she was admiring abhay's room, which was nw her's also, she never been to abhay's place when they were in india, it was beautiful , exotic villa, some where far away frm d main city of dehradoon, lying near d dense forests of dehradoon!!!

pia opened d windows of d room n started feeling d cold wind on her face!!!

abhay looked at her n smiled while sliding his arms around her waist n covering her frm back- feeling gud??

pia- its good to b back here, how much things av changed na abhay, when i left this place, i lost everything n when today i av come back, i m aving everything in my life, nt just my love bt also a sign of dat love n nw u wl always b there wid me na!!!

abhay knew y she said dat last line, it was nt something she was telling him, it was more like q question, which she was asking frm him!!!

abhay thought- i don't knw pia wat future has stored for us or should i say wat mathali has stored for us??

pia(gt reli disappointed when abhay didn't reply, bt she finally said)-- abhay where r u lost, r u listening to me??

abhay-pia, its u, where i m lost, he said this while rubbing his cold lips on her neck!!!

pia smiled shyly n said- abhay, u never miss a single chance na!!!

abhay while kissing her earlobes- how cn i , when u r so near to me, abhay slid d shoulder part of her dress n put his lips passionately on her shoulder, giving chills to pia!!!

pia closed her eyes, frm last 3 days, she was missing this abhay,abhay was there wid her all d time physically, bt his heart n mind, both were somewhere else!!!abhay slowly moved his hands to her back n opened d zip of her dress , starting giving wet kisses to her, pia was moaning in pleasure, when they heard a knock on d door, pia opened her eyes n moved a little while abhay was cursing d person on d door under his breath,he slolwy closed d zip of her dress n whispered in her ear- i wl b back soon!!!

pia smiled n turned around,he winked at her n left ,to open d door n pia slowly made her way to washroom, bt bf4 she enetered it,abhay came there n said wid all sencerity let me help u pia, he knew nw these days , pia even found her day to day activities quite difficult to do!!!

he took her inside n helped her in changing n took her back to d table, where food was kept, he made pia 2 av it, although he noticed nw these days, she doesn't feel like eating much like d few days back she used to!!!

...

nxt day pia woke up around 8 a.m n found abhay nxt to her, she smiled n wished him-g'mrng, abhay while kissing her forehead wished her same!!!!

they kept lying there in each other arms for some more time , when finally abhay said- pia, today v r going to meet someone!!!

pia looked at him n asked- jay???

abhay-no, v r going to meet someone else!!!

pia- who else abhay??

abhay-misha!!!

pia gt shocked hearing misha's name n replied- misha bt!!

abhay-i want u to meet her

pia still looking at him -bt abhay i don't knw how wl she react after knwing abt our truth, she knew dat i was in new jersey, bt d way i left, widout informing her , she was totally shocked, it took me so many months to convince her to forgive me, bt still she doesn't knw abt u, abt my pregnancy,!!!

abhay - don't worry pia, she loves u a lot, she wl understand, i knw!!!

pia- bt wat if she won't!!

abhay- i av talked to her n this is her plan, she wanna see us!!!

pia took a long deep breath n replied while smiling- i also want to c her!!!!

after 2 hours, abhay-pia reached to d place, which misha decided, pia was all xcited n nervous to meet misha!!!

finally they entered d cafe n to their surprise misha was already sitting there (dat was nt a normal sign, coz misha was one of those ppl, who didn't hold d word "punctuality" in their dictionary)

as soon as misha saw her, she ran towards her n hugged her tightly, abhay was holding pia frm her shoulder, held her more tightly at d moment misha hugged her, coz he was nt sure, dat whether she would b able to hold herself or nt!!!

pia found tears made their way through her eyes n b/w her tears she said- slowly misha!!!

misha was holding her wid all strength, misha d famous tomboy also found her eyes getting wetty,

abhay was smiling silently looking at them, finally misha separated herself frm pia n looked at her frm top to bottom n said- omg pia, look at u, wat has happened to u, i mean y r u looking so...

pia while smiling a little- misha, its all normal, i m pregnant na!!

misha- opssy!! sry would b mom!!!! bt u dummb, stupid, idiot gal, how dare u leave me, u didn't even bother to tel me n u both , wat is all this, u got married to this attitude boy n nw look u r pregnant!!! at wat speed did u manage all this haan?? tel me

abhay-pia both smiled n then pia said- i m sry misha!!! pls forgive me!!!

misha- nt so easily pia, u av hurt me alot!!! n if u reli want me to forgive u, then u av to promise me "dat u won't leave me again "!!

pia said- awww misha, i promise u, i won't leave u again n she hugged her again!

abhay silently said thanx to misha n misha said-welcome !!

again separating herself frm pia, misha said- u two dumb heads, u should av told me na dat she has turned into a balloon, i would av come to ur house to meet her, y u av brought her here!!

abhay- its ok misha, pia also need some fresh air !!!

pia looked at him for once, she was unsure abt his answer, bt then she let it go!!!

after talking for a while abhay decided to leave!!

abhay-pia , i av to go somehwere, u both carry on n i wl pick u up frm here only after 1 an hour!!

pia gave him confused looks , coz she this was something reli unxpected!!!

abhay understood her confusion n while creasing her cheek, he said- don't worry, i wl b back soon!!!

pia still was nt satisfied, bt then she didn't av ny other option also n above dat misha also said- pia, do i gift u a fevi-col or fevi quick. let him go yaar, he wl b back soon n i m nt going to eat u up!!!

pia smiled forecfully at misha's words n gave a last glance to him, which was showing how difficult it was for her, to let him go like this!!!

...

soon abhay reached d same place where his life took a complete change, where he realised his love for pia, where he found true face of mathali, frm where everything has started, today he was standing at dat same place only!!!

abhay was standing n lost in his own thoughts, when he found a shadow coming out frm dark !!

soon abhay saw her wid her signature smile, he closed eyes for a while n thought of pia's face, her smile, her innocence, her unconditional love for him bt then again he saw mathali's face n opened his eyes, holding just hatred n pain in them!!!

mathali was standing near a tree dat was around 20 steps away frm him, her black attire , skinnny black jeans, wid black spaghetti n black jacket ,wid perfect black high boots, matching her evil personality, her black staight silky hair, falling down her back, no one could look more perfect , like she was looking!!

abhay kept looking at her !!

finally mathali broke dat ultimate silenece n said- welcome back to home abhay!!feeling so good to c u here, remember how v used to spend so many hours here lying in each other arms, feeling each others presence n touch, u knw i still remember d day u kissed me for d first time, dat lingering n wet feel is still there on my lips n i would love to feel it once again!!!

abhay felt reli sick at her words n shouted- stop it mathali, i aven't come here to listen ur shit, come directly to d point, where is d ring???

mathali- oh!!!abhay u should learn some manners !!! i m d owner of dat ring n u r d one who is in need of it , nt d vice-versa, so better keep ur attitude wid urself!!!

abhay(controlling himself)- mathali pls tel me, wat do u want??

nw mathali standing infront of him n while moving her slim, long finger on his face in a seducive way she said- abhay how well u knw me, dat shows how much u loved me or u still do??

abhay-mathali, don't test my patience, tel me wat do u want???

mathali showing her evil smile- ummm, actually abhay i m confused !!! so need some more time to decide, bt i cn give u a hint, abhay looked at her wid suspicious eyes n asked- wat hint??

mathali-i want back..., something which was always mine or may b i want someone who is here indirectly coz of me!!!

abhay looked at him n said- mathali, cn u pls stop playing games wid me, i need dat ring!!!

mathali- oh!! my darling abhay, first n d most important thing, ppl never take their gifts back , bt if u want to take it back, so atleast av some patience, trust me, i won't let ur pia die, so easily, she has to pay a lot either bf4 dying or becoming walking dead like us!!!

abhay-mathali, i wish i cn kill u!!

mathali still holding dat evil smirk - n i wish , i cn kill ur little pia!!!

abhay eyes changed color frm deep blue cool one to blood red!!!

mathali while rasising her eyebrows- calm down abhay, i m nt scared of u, u should b scared of me, v wl b meeting soon abhay n this time i would love to c ur little pia n mind it ball is in my court, so i wl play my short, don't u dare mess wid me!!!

abhay-mathali, seriously u were my love, how cn u b so evil n heartless!!

mathali(this time her xpressions changed , some where some pain was there on her face)- firstly abhay , v both were heartless wen v fell for each other n still v r n watever i was aving wid me love or pain, u took away wid u, when u left me for her, u taught me to love abhay n ur dat love taught me to hate !!!

abhay- bt u were d one who used me n pia , i was always urs, u were d one for whom, power was more important than her love, i didn;t leave u, u were d one who lost me!!!

mathali(this time mathali looked into abhay;s eyes, suddenly her own eyes got filled wid love for him, while moving her hand on his cheek)- wl u come back to me, if i say i m sry for wat i did!!!!

abhay went all blank, he suddenly moved back n a word which came out of his mouth was - NOOO!!!

mathali was hurt by his reply, bt then again dat was something xpected, she said-bt abhay love is all abt forgiveness!! cn't u forgive me n come back!!!

abhay was still looking at her , was all confused n helpless- i cn forgive u mathali, bt coming back, its too late nw, pia, she loves me n i love her, he closed his eyes in pain!! he never wanted to face this situation!!

then he heard mathali's voice close to his ear-same way abhay, its too late for me to return n one thing more abhay , love has both d powers , one of survival n other of desturction, pia's love for u is d reason of ur survival n my love for u wl become d reason of her destruction !!!

she just gt vansihed leaving abhay behind, her words were hammering all around in his mind!!!

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Edited by heena_mehta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Me 1st K u dont know my name i guess its rashmi u can call me rashu fab update loved it abhiya were cute but why is abhay hiding truth from piya loved the sister convo and maithili she is so irritating always troubling abhiya hope to see her end soon piya was so worried by the thought that abhay was leaving her and going for 1 hour i almost cried for that part.thanks for pm
Edited by strawberryrashu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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tense update. hope maithali realises her errors and end up with jay.
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superbbb update... 👏
I will start with Maithli today...OMG the way you described about her she looks just like my Katherine 😃 You know how much I love Katherine 😆Metz dialogues were very good Heena 👏 👏
Love..hatred...obsessions and revenge...very closely related if you think about them deeply. She is hell bent on destroying Abhiya... deep down she loves Abhay or I sud say obsessed with Abhay...
Poor Abhay...in so much trouble because of the mess which is partially created by him 😕 I hope he could stay atleast to take care of Piya... I suppose Metz wont hurt Piya now because she wants the baby...
the ring seems to be the key to everything which cant be conquered unless and until Abhay surrender himself to Metz...i guess he will even do that to save Piya
Misha and Piya reunion was very cute 😳
Abhiya scenes were cute but heart breaking... Piya knows abhay too well so no wonder she could sense his worry and Abhay poor Abhay...he's in such mess
waiting for Jeh's entry and to know what part he would play in the story...
update soon 🤗
Edited by princess_xeelan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heena..that was a fab and awesome update...i just loved it...

abhiya were as usual cute...but i wish pia knew the truth what abhay is doing...and misha-pia scene was so cute...finally they made up...glad to know...and that metz...always ready to create troubles...i hope piya remains safe and abhay takes care of her..rather kill her...

btw...plz update soon...thanks for pm...
Edited by peehu24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res ..!! BTW heena I READ ALL..!! m that an awsum and superfast READER..!

sheesh..!! angel craving for bloof..!!
goin back to dehradhun .. wait ill comment later

u still din PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dear...fab updt...⭐️so de r bk to india...😛bt d journey ws so gloomy n tnsd...lvd pia's understandng ways...awww...😳abhay s upto smthng big i gs?????😕my angel s sooo sad...😭i want hr to b happy always...😃lvd dlil romance...☺️chalo jtna romanc karna ai kar lo cz thore dino ke lie de wl b separatd...😉misha ws so sweet n caring...😛lvd d way u portrayd hr char...😳so metz s bk huh..????...😡i dnt no bt i sw a soft side to hr n ds upst...i hope c realizes hr mistakes n corrects dm b4 its too late...😕awww...abhay ws n sch a dilemma...m so glad finally pia hs taken ovr hs soul n heart entirely...😳n d best part being he realizd ds...😛cha.o cont soon...m prepard 4 dr separation nw...😒love u loadsss...🤗
Edited by purple_shadoz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely Update!!👏

Aww...I'm feeling bad for both Abhay and Pia. Pia got him back with much difficulty and if he leaves her again, she will die!😭 Poor Abhay😔 ...He too is helpless. Angel won't be able to control herself for long. I hope soon they get some solution to this problem too. Loved Misha -Pia's convo. I always loved their bond.❤️ You express emotions of each and every character beautifully that a reader gets attached to the characters of your FF and starts feeling for them. Hope soon Maithali realises that love is all about giving...Thanks a lot for Pm Heena.😃 Continue soon. Good Luck!👍🏼

Edited by prerna26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG u n tanzie r just awesome👏 though u r sumtimes a bit late to update but make us happy wid such fab updates👏 n i don't have any prob wid ff sucker's corner😳 . i was actually waiting for this update coz i knew that metz would be there n i m a big fan of her n if i had to play a role so i would play hers 😳. it was an awesome update n i luved the way metz was seducing abhay though others would not like my this line but i like her😆 . thanks for such a fab update n i think jeh is cuming back in next part . btw u r an awesome writer n i luv ur ff n thanks for the pm aur jaldi update karna next part😆
take care
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good night (achhe - achhe dreams lena n give us more lovely updates dear )
Edited by cuteteddy - 13 years ago

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