|Tum Mile | AR,AA,RM,AN // DMG FF

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heeellooo guuys!
Yashi here!
I had this FF written a LONGG time ago, its not complete yet, but hopefully with your comments and encouragement i might get more ideas to continue it! 😳❤️

It is a DMG ff, and im sooo sorry, but the writing is pretty weird, since i was 14 when i wrote it. 🤢
DO bear with me, and ill try editing the chees-iness out of it as much as possible 😃

ENJOOY!



Character Sketch

Dr. Armaan Mallik and Dr. Riddhima Gupta - He is the sweet, handsome, muscular and flirtatious, grey-eyed devil, while she is the innocent, pretty, funny and quiet hazel-eyed angel! Her angel-like features and his daring devil looks, make this the heavenly couple in love!

<3 : Engagement day coming soon! Finally...the time they can call each other fiances!

Dr. Rahul Grewal and Dr. Muskaan Grewal - Two lovers made for each other. Rahul is a cute, intelligent and hardworking munda and Muskaan is a bubbly, hot-headed yet sweet and pretty kudi.This typical punjabi couple always fight, yet they cannot bear to be apart from each other even for a second!

<3: Recently happily married! Planning their honeymoon

Dr. Atul Joshi and Dr. Anjali Gupta- As you all know, Atul is the sweet, funny and bubbly guy who his head-over-heels for his premika-Anjali. On the other hand, Anjali, who is a typical fashion diva, also fell for her dream boy, Atul!

<3: Just had their fabulous engagement party! Shaadi ka din aa raha hai!



Dr. Abhimanyu Modi (Abhi) and Dr. Nikita Modi (Nikki) - Love birds that can't live without each other! They spend as much time together as they can, whether it be at Sanjeevani or at home. Abhi is the hardworking type, and Nikki is the hardcore fun type! An example of opposites attracting...

<3: Married on the same day as Rahul-Muskaan; also planning their honeymoon.

Doctors' parents: Only Armaan's and Riddhima's parents will be mentioned a bit in this ff. :)

Mr. Billy Mallik and Mrs. Ananya Mallik - Armaan's parents.



Mr. Shashank Gupta and Mrs. Padma Gupta -Riddhima and Anjali's parents.


DOO tell me what you think, and whether i should post the next part or not! 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Imma just post Part 1 noow :P 😊
Plus, this FF is supposed to be like a romantic comedy :)

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Sanjeevani morning - In the Meeting room

All the doctors are waiting for Dr. Kirti to assign them their daily cases. Till then, they start to chat.

Armaan: "Arrey..adha gante se wait kar rahe hai hum, kaha hai Hitler?" *checks watch*

Rahul: "Hehe..patience rak, woh shayad kisi aur ko saza de rahi hai!" *chuckles*

Armaan and Rahul snickered and hi-fived each other.

Anjali: "Guys! You are too much! Thoda sa sharam karo...woh humari senior doctor hain!"

Armaan:" Anjali, you are three much! Aur, hume kya farak padta hai ki woh senior ho ya na ho? We're still older than her...Hain na Rahul? " (He looks at Rahul who gives him an uncertain look.)

Rahul:"I dunno yaar... is she older than us? How old do u guys think she is?"

Muskaan: "Hogi, apne 30's mein...hume kya lena dena?"

Anjali: "Correct! Let's change the subject! Aaj, duties ke baad hum shopping jaayenge!"

(Armaan and Rahul groaned)

Atul: "Tikhe Anjali, agar tum kaho!"

Armaan: "This is not fair Champ, tu hamesha inn Ladkiyon ki side leta hain...I understand Anjie is going to be ur wife- par c'mon! Tu abhi bhi ek mard hai! A proud man!"

Atul: *thinks for a while* "Haan! You know what?! I AM a proud man! Anjali, mein ab aur tumhare ishaaron pe nahi nach ne wala!"

*awkward slience*

Rahul: "Tu nachta hai?!"

Armaan: *rolls eyes* "haan...aur gaata bhi hai..."

Riddhima: "Guys, you know what? Hum log-"

Dr. K- "Ahemm...agar aap logon ki yeh personal chat katham ho tho kya mein shurwad kar sakti hoon??"

Riddhima: *bows head down in embarassment* "Sorry Dr. Kirti..".

Dr.K- "That's okay. Anyways, I will assign u ur wards now. Dr. Atul and Dr. Muskaan, you will work in the CHC (Chilld Health Care) unit. Dr. Anjali and Dr. Armaan, your ward for the day is the Surgery Department and Dr. Rahul and Dr. Riddhima, you will work in the Intensive Care unit. Everyone clear? Please attend to your duties now."

(Dr. Kirti leaves the meeting room.)

While the doctors were getting ready to depart to their wards, Armaan came behind Riddhima, and wrapped his arms around her while keeping his chin on her shoulder.

(Rahul and Atul started to snicker.)

Rahul: "Abhay, ek minute kiliye bhi nahi chod sakta Riddhima ko!" -chuckles-

Armaan: *gives Rahul a look* Ab toh yeh meri hai! Ek minute toh kya, ek second kiliye bhi nahi chodonga!"

Riddhima: *struggles to get out of his arms* "Armaaann!!! Chodho! Dr. Kirti phirse aa gayi toh?! chodo Armaaan!!! Pleeeasseee?!?!"

No matter how hard she tried to get out, her little body was no match to Armaan's strong arms. She gave up and pouted like a little kid. Armaan looked at her and cupped her face with his hands. She looked so cute with her puppy dog eyes and the cute pout on her face.

Armaan: "I love you Riddhima.."

Riddhima: " Hmphh...I don't love you Armaan!"

Armaan: "Jhooti!!" *Leaves her and turns around pouting*

Riddhima: "Hehe..Ok im sorry baba! I love you too!"

Muskaan: "Ok ok, hogaya tum dono ka love story? Ab chalein Atul?"

Atul: "Haan...Par pehle mein bhi Anjali ko bye kehna chatha hoon!"

Muskaan: "Ughhh! Jaldi Kar!"

Rahul: "uh...Muskaan...woh, tum mujhse bye nahi kehna chahti?"

Muskaan: *mad* "Kya?!?! Kyun kahoon? Hum log hamesha kiliye thodi na ja rahe hai! Jaa yahan se! Hmph, mujhse bye kehna chahta hai!"

Rahul: *mutters* "Arrey yaar...kaise patni mili!! God help me!"

Dr. Shubankar: "Doctors! Aap log abhi bhi yahaan? Please leave now before i have to call Kirti..I mean Dr. Kirti!"

All : "Ok Dr. Shubankar."

They all depart to their wards.

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Intensive Care unit

Rahul was checking a patient's blood pressure, while Riddhima was reading another patient's report.

Rahul: "Riddhima, woh...mujhe batao mein aur Muskaan humare honeymoon kiliye kahan jaaye?" (His eyes were still fixed at the blood pressure device.)

Riddhima: *looks up from the reports and smiles* "Tumne aur Muskaan ne koi places choose nahi ki hai?"*

Rahul: *keeps the device away and stands up* "You know Muskaan and me...Mujhe ek jaga pasand hai aur use koi dusra...-sigh-"

Riddhima: *giggles* "Hmm...theek hai, mein shayad kuch soch sakti hoon...uhh...how about Paris?"

Rahul: *sighs* Wohi mera pehla choice tha...and Muskaan ne seedha...Reject!"

Riddhima: "Chalo, hum sab cafeteria mein betkar decide kareinge! Chalo Raouull"! *She playfully pulled him*

Rahul: "Aa raha hoon! Thoda patiencee madaam!!" *gets dragged by Ridzy*

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Cafeteria

(Abhi and Nikki enter the cafeteria, only to be greeted by their friends.)

Muskaan: "Nikkiii! Kahan thi thu?!?" *gives her a hug*

Nikki: *giggles* Muskiii!!!! I missed u soo much...!"

Armaan: *frowns* "Aur mujhe?? Miss nahi kiya hoga na?? I see how it is!" *turns back to her*

Nikki: *giggles and taps him on the shoulder* Of course i missed u Ammy!"

Armaan: "Okay good! Pehle bata kahan gaye thay tum dono??"

Abhi: "Hum log ko half day mila tha na aaj? Isi liye hum dono ne dher saara planning ki hai...!"

Atul: "Achha? Kis liye??"

Abhi: "Humari honeymoon ke liye!" *smiles big*

(Rahul and Muskaan look at each other.)

Muskaan: *angry tone* "Wah wah! Hum dono ki shaadi bhi tum dono ke sath hi same day par ho gayi...par is kamine ne ab tak kuch socha nahi!" *gives him a glare*

Rahul: *returns the glare back to her* Excuse me?!?! Sirf mein jaa raha hoon kya honeymoon ke liye????? Main hi kyun sab plan karoon?"

Riddhima and Armaan smile at each other. They knew this pair would never stop arguing.

Armaan: *puts both hands in the air to stop them* "Okay Okay...kyun na hum sab bhi tum dono ko help karein??? But...Pehle khaana khathe he... kitni bhook lagi hai.."

Muskaan: *forgets the fight* "Haan yaar! Sahi baat kahi tune! Chal khaate hein!"

Rahul: *still mad* Haan haan...tu kha! Bhes (buffalo) ki tara tu kha! Shayad hum honeymoon ek restaurant mein hi manayenge!!" *sarcastically*

Muskaan: *her temperature rises again* "Kya??!? Mein...ek bhes?!? Tujhe toh mein abhi dekh loongi!!" *takes off her chappal and gets ready to throw it at him.*

Armaan: *hands on his ears* STOP!!! Yeh batao...tum dono ki shaadi kaise hui???Huh??"

Armaan: "Mujhe khaana hai..mein jaa raha hoon...Riddhima chalo!"

Riddhima: *playful smile* "Armaan..mujhe bhook nahi lag rahi! (She did this beause she loves seeing Armaan getting angry for no reason...and one thing he gets very frustrated about is when she doesn't eat.)

Ar: *voice rising* Riddhima!! I am SO not listening...chalo! *Grabs her hand and drags her to the cafeteria line*

Ra: "Mein bhi jaa raha hoon!" *leaves madly*

Mu: *started follwing him* Mein bhi aa rahi hoon kuthe!"

Atul and Anjali just shrugged and followed them.

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Cafeteria line.

Ri: Armaan! Ah!! Chodo...dard ho raha hai!

Armaan quickly stopped in his tracks and let loose of her hand, only to find her hand turning cherry red.

Ar: "Oh my god Riddhima! Im soo sorry! Main abhi aata hoon!!"

Armaan gets a pack of ice and gently puts it over her palm, which was turning purple. He cursed himself for holding her so tightly. He seats her on the bench and quietly rubs the ice pack. He looked at her palm again, and bent down to kiss it. Riddhima looks down at her worried, soon-to-be fiance. He looked up at her, his grey eyes filled with concern and apologies. Armaan looked at her hazel-green eyes, filled with love and care. They were trapped in a mesmerizing eyelock for some time.

Meanwhile, Rahul and Muskaan, fill their plates with the canteen food and rush to the table only to find one seat. Rahul quickly sat down before Muskaan, while she was abusing him and telling him to get of the chair. After a while, she understood that Rahul was not going to budge. She figured that she will have to get the chair... her way. At that time, Rahul got up to straighten out his pants. Muskaan saw the perfect opportunity and tried to pull the leg of the chair with her foot, but her foot slipped and she ended up falling in his arms. They both also share a wonderful eyelock.

Atul and Anjali were happily feeding each other. They were having a perfet eyelock, both smiling big. Atul was so lost in her, that he mistakely took a bite of one of Anjali's fingers.

An: "AAAHH!! Attuuulll!!!!!" *mad face while moving her hand up and down quickly.*

At: "Im so sorry Anjali!!! Mein..Me-Mein..woh..woh...haan!..ICE leke aatha hoon! Kahin mat jaana, teekhe Anjali!" *panics and runs to find ice.*

Atul runs aroud trying to find ice, when he spots a few ice packs lying on the cafeteria counter. He quickly grabs one and heads towards his table. There, he finds Anjali, her eyes all red and flowing with tears, her face turning a crimson red and her finger slightly bleeding. Atul wraps the ice pack around her bleeding finger and apologizes more than 50 times.

At: *mutters* "Im really sorry Anjali! I didnt mean to! Woh..woh..tum itni beautiful dhik rahi thi na, isi liye main woh..woh..kho gaya tha...!"

An: *stops wailing and looks at him lovingly* Atul...Why?? Why r u so nice?? *she smiles at him*

At: "Me-Mein kaise..? Tu-Tumne mera dil jeet liya Anjali..I love you sooo much!" *gives an adorable smile*

An: "Awww Atul!!! I love you too!! *both envelope in a bear hug*

Abhi was in a situation- To eat his favorite chicken curry, or to eat bhindi ki sabzi, which everyone says is good. He was looking over each one, thinking what to put on his plate, when he felt a tap on his shoulder. He turned around to find his beautiful wife, wearing a green and pink, one-finger strap top with a pair of blue jeans. He looked at her gleaming face. Her smile always made his day...he thanked god for giving him such a wonderful wife.

Ni: "Kya aakhe phaad phaad ke dhekre ho mujhe?!? Are you like, checking me out?? (line from Dhoom 2) *giggles*

Ab: "Nahi toh! What r u saying? woh-woh mein bas..aise hi..." *looks away*

Ni: "Acchha...teekhe...toh phir kaunsa dish choose kiya aapne, mere pati parmeshwar?"

Ab: "I dunno yaaar Nikki, tum hi batao mujhe..im stuck..."

Ni: *laughs and ruffles his hair* Teekhe...uhh...thoda chicken curry le lo or thoda bhindi bhi le na!" *turns to leave when Abhi grabs her hand and pulls her closer*

Ni: "Abhi, tum kya...sab log dhek rahi hai...chodo abhi...please!" *blushes*

Ab: "I love you Nikki...a lot..."

Ni: *smiles* I love you too Abhi..."

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Locker rooms - End of the day

Everyone was taking their lab coats off and arranging their folders and files. Armaan's phone rang.

Ar: "Hello? Yeah...Really??... Kabhi?? ...Pakki ho gayi hai?!?... Yesss! Thanks..yea ok..bye!" *switches off phone and puts on a goofy grin*

Everyone looks at him, waiting for him to break the news.

Ri: "Armaan...kya hua? batao na!"

Ar: *playful tone* "Guess watt?! humari engagement ki date pakki hogayi haii!!!!!"

Ri: *gasps* Oh my god Armaan!!! Sacchii?!?! *hugs him tightly*

Ra: "Oh wow! That's really good news yaar!"

Ar: "I knoow rite? *goes to Riddhima and grasps her hands together* Sirf 2 hafte baad Riddhima, hum log doh nahi, ek honge..." *looks at her lovingly and puts a strand of hair behind her ear*

Everyone smiles at this madly-in-love couple.

Everyone took turns hugging them and congratulating them. Dr. Kirti enters with a smile on her face.

Dr.K: "I heard about your engagement! Congratulations Dr. Armaan and Dr. Riddhima!"

Riddhima blushes while Armaan smiles big. They both thank Dr. Kirti and their friends.

Dr.K: "Main yahaan aayi hoon isi liye kyun ki, hum ne decide kiya hai ki aap log Goa jaane wale ho, ek week kiliye. Wahan bohoth malaria aur typhoid ki cases aa rahe hai.Bacche aur Bade log, bhimar hothe jaa rahe hai aur unhe acche doctors ki zaroorat hai. *flips over papers* Isi liye, hum log ne 4 rooms book ki hai. You will be put with parters, and you will know further more tomorrow.Please pack your neccesary files,tools and other stuff that you might need on this trip. You will leave tomorrow at 11 in the morning and return next Friday at 8pm. *closes the file and smiles at them* Remember, make Sanjeevani proud and also have some fun on your trip! Mein abh chalti hoon... Have a nice day, doctors!" Saying this, Dr. Kirti left.

The doctors immediately left the hospital building and met at the parking lot. All the doctors looked at each other disbelivingly. In 2 seconds, the guys all were hyper, jumping up and down, hooting and screaming loudly.

Ar: *still jumping* Yaar Raaaoouulll!!! Tunne suna??? Hum log Goa jaa rahe hai!!! *whistles* EK PURE HAFTE KE LIYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *woots*

Ra: *stops jumping and breathes heavily* Haan yaar! *pause* I ca-can't believe it! *pause*1 week! Aur woh bhi rooms meh!!"

Everybody looked at Rahul like he had suddenly grown another head.

Ar: "Abhey Rahul, of course hum rooms meh rehenge...tune kya soccha...hum log saddak (road) pe bete rahenge???? *gives him a look*

Ra: *just realised what he said* Huh...Ohhh tum log bhi na!! Mera matlab tha ki hum log shayad bade, shandhar rooms mein rahenge...ek jacuzzi aur hot tub ke sath, *dreamy eyes* aur ek large king mattress ke sath, and maybe side mein a big flat screen TV..."

Everyone pictures Rahul's words...they were all lost in DreamWorld, until Armaan's phone rang. Armaan wondered to himself, Hamesha MERA hi phone, GALAT time pe hi kyu bajtha hai?! Godd...

Ar: *picks up the phone angrily* "Hello?? *hears his mom's voice and calms down* Haan Maa...mein abhi sanjeevani se nikla...haan...mein sab (referring to his group) ke sath hoon...yup...teekhe...no problem...mein unse poochta hoon...yea sure..ok, mom...bye..i love you...Kya? tamatar or gajar chahiye...*makes a face*ABHI???? *groans* *everybody giggles* ..fine...bye.."

Ar: *turns off the phone* "Okay guys...so here is the plan, my momm has invited u all to dinner...Mana mat karna!!!"

Ri: *smiles* Mujhe aur Anjie di ko poochne ki zarrorat nahi hain...papa ne already ha kahan tha...bas mujhe unhe phone karna..ek minute.." *excuses herself and dials her house number*

Ra: "We can come yaar..." *goes beside muskaan and puts his hand on her shoulder*

Mu: *looks at him and gives an approving smile* "Haan..hum log aayenge...dont worry..*mutters* ghar mein aur kuch karne ke liye hota nahi...sirf Kaam, Kaam aur kaam." *makes a face*

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Hey, wrong forum! Post in the Fan Fiction Forum! This is the PKYEK Forum!
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Oopss sorry! How do i delete a forumm? :O
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Pm the mods to close the topic, then open another in the ff forum.
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