~~~~~~ANGLE MY LOVE ~~~~~ - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
awesome start to the ff
all chapters were gr8
it seems like i m reading a fairytale😃
update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
hey nice update I loved it.Gud work😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Sry i was late 2 comment.
Awsm update dear.
Like a fairytale.
Ancient setting loved it.
Thanks 4 pm.
Continue son.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
thanks guys for liking the story
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Nice updates! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
wow...luved this part😃 abhay luks a little scary😉 pls PM me ur next update as well😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17

Part 4


Aur kuch din ho jaate hain piya ko wahan village mein rehte rehte

She is sittin inside her hut & thingin abt the incident of how she reached here

How abhay saved her live

Then she feels tht she is an angel & he has saved her life, its her duty to thank him & perform the ritual tht is to be done when some1 saves an angel's life.yes, how can she forget tht, she shld do it, its her duty as an angel, warna koi usko angel community mein respect nahi karega

She comes out of her hut & asks as to whr is abhay I wanna meet him

The villager says tht she cant meet him, its sir's order

piya-sir ne kuch bhi kaha ho mujhe milna hai

villager-sir said its risky 4 u

piya-i can tak care of myself , tak me to him its very important

villager-i cant, ur not supposed to go

piya-ok fine!

She goes back inside her hut gusse se

Raat ho jaati hai

All villagers are asleep, she decides to sneak out of the village to meet him & thank him

Par usko to to raasta hi nahi pata vampire ke mansion tak ka a

She decides ki saamne wale bade wale hill pe chadke she will find his house jahan se pura villaga dikhta hai

To village se nikalke she climbs up the hill

Uss hill ki chotti se usko dikh jaata hai vampire ka bada sa mansion jo ki thodi durr hai

Par wahan tak pohonchne ke lie she has to cross a dark forest

She decides ki she will surely cross the forest to & thank him , aft all she is an angel its her duty & y she shld be scared of a small dark forest she is an warrior angel, she is brave & powerful she can handle anything

To aisa sochke wo nikal padti hai

She is crossin the forest which is very dark & creepy

Kahin kahin se ajeeb ajeeb janwaaron ki awaazein aur pikarein sunayi de rahi hain

But she is unwavered by these voices , apni masti mein chal rahi hai

Tabhi ruffling of some bushes & shrubs r heard

Something his shinin behind the bush

As if some1 was following her

She becomes alert

piya-whos thr?

Ruffling of bushes

piya-come out, whos thre..or i'

3 dangerous lookin vampires come out frm the bush

her smell is so strng & alluring tht wo khinche chale aaye

she gets a bit frightened, they look scary with thr shinin fangs & dangerous glee in thr eyes, eyein her as thr prey they r movin twrds her

wo peeche ho rahi hai, her heart is beatin fast

piya-d..dont u..u don't knw me..i can'

3 of them give triumphed wicked wali laugh

wo khudko bachane ke lie, ek vampire ke mooh pe ghumake laat maarti hai

paar uski angelish powers kamm ho chuki hai aur vampires bohot strng hain, to unko lagti hi nahi

aur vampires r very sophisticated creatures, & in thr society physical abuse ko bohot bura maana jaata hai

to teeno vampires get really angry, they tak it as an insult

bhadak jaate hain, they will not spare her 4 the insult

abb teeno ek saath jhapat padte hain piya paar

piya ghabra jaati hai strts cryin 4 help

teeno vampires ne usko jaakda hua hai, she cant escape

tabhi kahin andhere se a manly deep voice comes

STOP !

Wo job hi hai wo andhere ke peeche hai, islie no can c tht person

Every1 including piya is surprised,

piya to is lik ki ye kaun aa gaya , whos it?

& all the vampires r lik, ki who is it jismein itni himmat hai to order us

all vampires pehle to laugh

vamp-hey ! who r u? go away! Dnt u value ur life, v r the vampires, 1 go & ur killed. So get lost. She is our prey

the very nxt moment kuch nahi hota hai bass, uss andhere bass ek haath nikalta hua nazar aata hai

wo haath bass upar uthta hai

to saare vampires apne aap hawa mein upar uth jaate hain, hawa mein taang jate hain

wo haath bass, ek muththi banata hai, fists up, to saare vampires aapas mein hawa mein hi aapas mein hed on collide karke gir jaate hain

abb the vampires can guess who is it, to dumm dabake bhaag nikalte hain

piya is seeing at the direction of the hand, she is wonderin who is this who has so much power

andhere se abhay nikalta hai

abhay-r u ok?

piya-uuu??????????????????


abhay-y r u here. Don't u knw its dangerous 4 u

he moves forward frowning a bit

piya-well..i..

he suddenly grabs her by her waist

& wooosh he jumps high & they reach the top of a tree

piya-hey..wht r u doin??????????????

abhay-shhh..i am checkin if thrs any other vampire or not..[he is holdin her safely by her waist]

he is very alert, lookin here thr makin sure no1 is thr to harm her

jab usko tasalli ho jaati hai

to phir wooosh jump karke usko leke

piya-wooow ! u can fly!

abhay-no [expressionlessly]

piya-then wht was it?

abhay-jump

piya-oh

abhay-y did u come here. I asked u to stay thr. Come I'l tak u to the village, & then I'l leave

he strts to walk

piya-hey stp! Tumhe hamesha bhaagne ki hamesha itni jaldi kyun rehti hai

he jst wants to escape her smell some how, being in control is difficult

she stnds in frnt of him,almost kundti hai uske saamne in an excited bubbly manner

piya-u knw I jst came to thank u, tht u saved my life [she gives a big grin] thanku sooo much!

She kisses him on his left cheek, then reight cheek & then gives a small peck on his lip

abhay is baffled by her actions, he is freezed at his positions

piya-thanku [an excited smile]

{ actually kya hai naa jahan piya rehti hai naa 7th heaven mein tht r only ladies, & no male is thr, all men live in 3rd heaven, & they r not allowed to come to 7th heaven, so she doesn't knw how to act with men & all, kya karna chahie kya nahi karna chahie}

{ & here the vampires r prime & proper & ultra sophisticated}

& during this process, distance btw the angel & the vampire r negligible, they r so close to each other tht her additive smell r chockin his senses & thinking

piya-u knw wht, when some1 saves an angel naa, so thr is a ritual tht has to be done, so u hav saved me naa so u ask 4 anythin frm me, any wish & I'l hav to give it u

wo side hatke jaane lagta hai, to escape her smell , it was difficult 4 him to control himself but now she is making it impossible

abhay-i don't want anything frm u , u cant give me wht I want

she grabs his arm

piya-ask naa, I'k give it to u. I promise, jst as, ask 4 anythin u want

abhay-i want nothing

haath chudaata hai

she quickly stnds in frnt of him

she is very close to him, her smell is maddenin him, makin his controls loose

he is sniffin her

piya-thts not possible, every1 wants something.u mst also wantt something, thr must be something tht u really want

abhay-in vampires too thrs a ritual [lookin at her with lustful eyes]

piya-wht is it? [curiously]

abhay-it is, when a vampire saves any1 then tht person owes his/her blood to the vampire, the vampire becomes the owner of its blood. The blood only belongs to the vampire

she is is listenin wide eyed

abhay-u belong to me, ur blood belongs to me [eyeing her greedily]

piya-ewww''..nooo'.yaaakk

abhay closes his eyes 4 a min & balls his fist to control himself, & act normal

he looks at her who looks a bit scared & gives a smirks & looks away

abhay-i told u

piya-fine! I am an angel, I will fulfil my promise. Take my blood [in a determined manner]

he looks at her & frowns in surprise

piya-i promised & I'l not back off, no matter wht . no matter if it costs my life too

abhay-wht do u mean?

piya-i am an angel & ur a vampire. Angel is the most purest form of being. My body cannot take any form of impurity if u cut my skin for my blood, some of ur body liquid will mix with my blood makin it impure. So, to take off the impurity frm my body my body will react in a matter so tht my body hets purified, in the process my body will strt bleedin without stp, till the last drop of the blood is out of my body. Ultimately, killing me. Bcoz no being can live without blood.[she gives a deep sigh] have it, I give u ur wish

abhay is lookin directly into her eyes

his eyes r full of intense & overflowin passion

he steps twrds her

she is freezed at her place

again steps twrds her

till he is extremely close to her

his breath is brushing her skin, & her breath is also felt in his skin

she shuts her eyes tight , she doesn't wanna ven think of whts coming













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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
No comment and i wont send u my ff pm
Edited by strawberryrashu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
hi preet, i like this concept but i remeber i read this concept someware
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
hey its nice yaar update soon :)

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