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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys i m writing new ff hope you like it
please comment did you like it
thank u luvd for giving me awesome title but i changed little.
with love
preet

PART1


ok baat hai bohot puraani

wo hai ek pure blood vampire

the lord of the vampires

vampires r lik humans

but they drink blood

aur jiska blood they drink they become vampires

wo hai vampire ka lord

sab vampire usse darte hain

par he is nek

he controls all the vampire

insaano ko nuksaan nahi pohchaane deta

animals ka ya dusre mad ya bad vampire ka blood he drinks, he has controled to control himself

aur wahan gaon walo ko dusre vampires se bachata hai

(IN STORY )aur vampires suraj ki roshni mein 5 sec mein jalke mar jaate hai

islie wo din mein sota hai

raat ko jagta hai

uska badaaa saaa aliishaaan se ghar haiii

akela bade se hall mein he is eatin chup chap

uska naukar cum frnd jo bhi ek vampire hai samne khada hai

toofaani raat hai

bohot bhayanak toofaan hai

paar s ke expression mein koi fark hi nahi

he is eatin normally

par uske servant ko darr lag raha hai ajeeb si raat hai aaj , aisa toofaan kaai saalon mein kabhi nahi aaya

tabhi kahin upar ke kamre mein bohot zor ki awaz aati hai

BAAAMMM !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

servant bhaag ke jaata hai

dekhne ki kya hua

upar jaake kamre mein ghuske dekhta hai

to room ki chatt gir chuki hai

sari jagah malba pada hua hai

wo malba hatane lagta hai

malba hatate hatate

wahan ek khubsurat si ladki ko behosh paata hai

usko samaj nahi aata wo insaan hai ya vampire

jo bhi hai par yahan kaise aai

she has an unusual aura within her

aur itne malbe ke beech hote hue bhi iske tann pe koi chott ke nishaan kaise nahi hai

aas paas uske kuch feathers jaise pade hue hain

aur wo smell

uski blood ki smell is so allurin

nothin lik it

so tempting

to wo bhaagke apne master yaani abhay ke paas jaata hai

n-sir sir

abhay looks at n gusse se, how dare he disturb him while eatin

n-sorry sir, but thr is..emm..somethin..some1...up thr

abhay-cant u check, u chicken

n-s..ssorry sir..
.
abhay-whatever waise bhi u hav diturbed me, i am no more hungry

uthke jaata hai s upar

dekhta hai usko

usko bhi smaajh nahi aa raha wo hai kya

usko uthata hai

nikalta hai malbe se

he can clearly c the feathers attached a bit to her back

baaki feathers white shiny r all over the floor

& tht smell of her blood

its so temptin

it attracts him

tempts him

its iresistable

its lik his very own cocain

its almost lik drugs to him

tht allurin smell

of her blood

he jst wants to bite her once ,taste her sweet blood

no matter how much he controls

how much he knnws its wrng

but he has to control

he dsnt knw wht thing is it

is her blood posonous or not

she is not a human

& she is definately not a vampire

then wht is she

aur aai akise yahan

usko uthake wo apne bedroom ke bed mein leta deta hai

abb jaake wo usko bahar se latch karke goes to his library to find our abt her

par beech mein kuch bhul jaata hai

to wapas aata hai

dekhta hai wo naukar chupke se ghusne ki ksohish kar raha hai room mein

he goes in his vampire wooosh jet speed & stps him

wo naukar falls on his feet

n-plz sir plz forgive me

i knw shldnt drink her blood

but tht smell its so temptin i cant contol myself

plz sir till the time she is here plz lock me somewhr so tht i cant get out

& cause her any harm

to abhay jake uss naukar ko coffin mein nail karke aata hai achche se

phir jaata hai library mein khub dhundta hai, par kuch bhi nahi milta usko

idhar piya ko thoda thoda hosh aa raha hai

she opens her eyes

dekhti hai ek ajeeb sa kamra

she tries to open the window 4 some sunlight as she is so weak

& gets energy frm sunlight , jahan se wo aai hai wahan 3 suraj hain

par wo parde itne bhaari aur bade hain ki

unse na dhup aana mumkin hai naa unki kholna

tabhi peeche se ek bhaari awaaz aati hai

stop

she turns

uske saamne ek handsome sa male khada hai

lookin at her with his narrowed intense eyes

she is full confused as to who is this wht is this

kya hai ye

abhay-dont do it

moves closer

wo wall se chipak jaati hai ghabrake

tryin to make herslf invisible as she usually does when she is scared

but it seems her powers r not in proper workin

she jst manages to become a bot transparent thts it

abhay is also bit confused

kya ye nazron ka dhoka tha ya wo actually thodi transparent ho gai

abhay-who r u?

piya-who r u?

& wht am i doin here?

abhay-i asked u first !

piya-i am the angel of the seventh heaven

abhay-wht??????
wht is tht??????

piya-dont u knw???????

abhay-no

abhay-r these urs? [shows her feathers jo gire pade the aur usne samet lliea the]

she looks at the feather

ooo my

bhagke snatches them frm him

hugs them

myy..myy..sweet feather...:((

abhay-so u hav those things

piya-oh my wings

abhay-so u can fly?

piya-offcourse i can

abhay-gud 4 u, then fly & go to ur 7th wtever place u belong

she looks at him

her angelish eyes r so beutiful, put of this world, yes vampires r very beutiful but he has not seen something lik this ever

how can i fly

they r no more...oh my wingsss:((

abhay- they will grow?

piya-hmm
but where am i???????

abhay-earth

piya-but how did i reach here

abhay-how wld i knw

piya- oh i mst hav fallen frm the heaven durin my fight with a demon
but v dont lose conciousness lik this
i mst hav lost a lot of energy to cross all the 7 levels of heaven & reach here
agar main aur ergy lose karti to i wld hav reached the hell

abhay-hmm, now wht?
how will u go

piya-i am sure my folks will come & take me

abhay-hmm

piya-by the way this is earth right, then u mst be a human

abhay-thr are apart frm humans other creatures also live on the earth

piya-like?

abhay-animal, birds, reptiles,plants & vampires
i am a vampire !

piya-whts tht? u look lik a human
actually u look lik a male

abhay-i am a male
i am a vampire male

piya-wht is this vam..vam..?

abhay-..pire...
v r similiar to humans but v drink blood of other animal & humans

piya -eeewww yaaakkk !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yaak thts bad
yaaakkk parasite
ur baaaddd
its a sin to kill other creature
i knw those cratures r bad
they r deviils
they rot in the hell

he is looking down all calmness & composure on his face

abhay- its not my choice, i am born lik tht
lik ur born as an angel
i dont kill humans, jst feed on animals & mad vampire's blood

bolke chala jaata hai.

end part 1

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey its superb and pm me when yu will ypdate next chapter :)
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hey..i liked it...its different...pm me when u update...
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Wowww Its so different :-) Abhay dhup me nahi ja sakta but pia ko dhup se energy milti hai:-) plz pm me when you update next part and continue soo:-) Loved it:-)
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hey awesome start.Very unique concept.Plzz continue😳
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wow😊it was amazing👏👏 pls PM me when u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 2

he goes out of the room


jaake takes swigs of some 3-4 glasses of blood

he jst normally has 1 thts enuf 4 him

he has to get over the temptation of her blood

he doesnt knw wht is he feeling

he is feeling tempted yet passionate twrds her

so all this is making him confused

he decides ki he cant let her stay thr with him

he can get dangerous 4 her

she is very temptin

so he takes his cloak & goes of to the village

wahan wo villagers se baat karta hai to keep piya with them

villagers respect him a lot as he is their protecter

he instructs them to tak good care of her & protect her frm the other vampires

aur unse kaha ki hamesha k ke saath rahe jisse uski smell dusre vampires se chupi rahe & she is
safe

to aisa instruction deke he goes off

he knks at piya's door

piya-enter

he enters maintain a safe distance frm her

abhay-emm..eh...
well...
i believe tht ur folks r takin time to..to..find u i guess

piya-yes thts wht i was thinkin

abhay-so..u hav to stay in this planet 4 a while...

piya-hmm

abhay- so i thought u may better go & live with the villagers they will tak gud care of urs
be ready i'l escort u to the village

kehke jaane lagta hai

she is all bewildered & confused

pehle to she was tryin 2 get comfortable with the new atmosphere

abb now who r these villagers & all

piya-b..but..no..stop..
i mean

he stps at his place his back facing her

piya-i mean..cant..i stay here

abhay-no..
its too dangerous

piya-yyy

abhay-BCOZ I AM A BLOOD SUCKER MONSTER!!!!!!!! [achanak se facing her]

chillane par k ghabra sa jaati hai

abhay- ur blood , tht smell its so tempting 4 me

piya-wh..wht ..do u mean?

abhay- i dont knw, smell of ur blood i cant resist it, its lik my very own addidive drug
ur not safe
i dont wanna harm u
plz go frm here whr ur safe

abhay-now , get ready i am waitin down

bolke he goes

piya:aft a while dheere dheere comes down

he is tryin hard not to gaze at her


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nice update... u r going tooo gud...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 3

abhay makes her sit inside his carriage

Aur khud aage baithke strts drivin the carriage

They reach the village

abhay bass piya ko villagers ko sop deta hai ye kehke ki, 'here is she, take care'

Aur chala jaata hai

piya strts living in the village

They give her clothes to wear & all

Basically the place she lives naa , the seventh heaven wahan pe bass females hain no men r allowed, she has never met or interacted with a man much, all the men live in the 3rd heaven

& in the seventh heaven thr r 3 sun's , so she gets energy frm suns, but here is only 1 sun, so to complete her energy she needs to eat food also

but being an angel she is a complete vegetarian

aise hi kuch din ho jate hai piya ko village mein rehte ho

the villagers tell her abt themselves , the humans, vampire everything in detail

aur saare village ke ladke to piya pe fida hain, lattu hain puri tarike se

all they want is to gain there attention somehow

abb there is a festival in the village

so piya takes part in the welcome dance

& also a play

the play is on romeo & Juliet

piya ko Juliet bana dete hain

she is very fascinated by the story & all the whole concept of 'love'

all the guys in the village r dyin to become the romeo

jisse thosi si line mil jae piya se

par piya to inn sab baton se bekhabar hai

she is awed by everything

to kisi ko bhi romeo bana dete hain

abb at the day of the festival-

abhay ko as a chif guest bulaya hai as he is thr protector

some offerings r given to him

& he is made to sit in a special chair

piya is wearing full traditional dress of villagers

her angelish charm is inescapable

abhay cldnt help but grin, no matter how much he tries to pull a straight face aft seeing her

aft the festival, abhay excuses himself & goes off

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Posted: 14 years ago
#10
awsommm update dont forget to pm me
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