FF:Still waitin 4 u(chapt 6 pg 40)

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srija

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Deepi20
Awesome update! I hope Abhay finds out soon that Priya is Piya! And I hope Abhiya meet again soon! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

thanks deepi.he wil nt find out abt dat bt they wil meet often.

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srija

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: moonlitnisha
Sad Update...Am feeling so sry for ABHIYA awww kab Pia ki Memory Wapas aayegi cant see them separated...thanx for the PM and Continue soon

thanks nisha.they wil meet again dear.dnt worry.wil continue asap.

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srija

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: bellaaa
really nice update plzzz add me in ur pm list plzzz

thanks dear.u r added.

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srija

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Posted: 14 years ago

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@akshi nd prerna

i m updating nw.

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srija

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Posted: 14 years ago

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chapter 6 part 1

abhay sat down on an armchair n opened the drawer 2 look 4 his fav photographs bt they weqe missing.he searched his whole room bt those photos were nowhere 2 be seen.then he remembered dat he had kept those photos on the P&P book.he searched the book bt 2 his utter dismay those photos were nt in dat book as well.he cldnt bear 2 loose those photographs thus he blamed god 4 doing dis all to him.
"was it nt enough dat u snatched piya away frm me dat u want 2 snatch her memories as well.and dat gal priya...what was dat...was it 2 torture me?"
FLASHBACK
Piya n abhay came out of the library after their detention.misha n kabir ran 2wards piya seeing her.
Misha:hey piya detention on da 1st day hun.u broke ma record sis.mujge toh 2nd day me mila thha.
P:shut up mish.just imagine my detention wid him(pointing 2wards abhay.)
A:oh ya.u irritated the hell out of me.no wonder u r da sis of this jangli.
M:hey moron m better than u ok.atleast m nt so proudy nd arrogant like u.
Kabir:leave it champ.y do u waste ur time taking wid him.
M:ya piya lets go.
Abhay n piya were still glaring at each other.
P:y r u standing here.u said i irritate u den y dnt u leave.
A:excuse me madam look ur car is blocking my way.wil u do me a favour by moving ur car so dat i can go home.and remember the damage u did 2 y car.
Abhay nd piya were shooting draggers at each other wen misha snapped their photo.
P:what is this mish?
M:i jst wanted 2 take a picture of 2 enemies abt 2 kill 1 another.dats it.

Next morning wen abhay was abt 2 leave 4 clg he rcvd a parcel.he opened da parcel nd found a photograph wid a note.he turned da photo nd found sth written in it.
'Abhay Raichand and Piya Dobriyal-ENEMIES 4EVER.'
abhay opened the note nd read it.
''hey mr. Arrogant.i thought of reminding u dat u can never win the challange.so i sent dis photo 2 u so dat u can see it n remember ur defeat."
abhay laughed sarcastically.
"dats so silly."
Haseena:wats so silly abhay nd wats dat in ur hand?
A:nth mom.its just a part of stupidity of dat stupid gal.
H:let me c it.
A:its nth mom.
Bt haseena managed 2 take it frm abhay's hand.c read da note n laughed looking at the photograph.
"aww...its so cute"
"mom there's nothing cute abt this photo"
"no really c looks so cute like a child.and abhay...wen did u start glaring at gals.u jst avoid dem na?"
"i dnt know mom.dis gal get on my nerves.yesterday was the worst day of my life.nt only in da park,i had to tolerate her whole day even at college."
"oh so c was the 1 who called u arrogant,brave gal.i want 2 meet her."
"MOOOM"
"watever u say c is cute n beautiful"
abhay glanced at the photograph n smiled remembering piya's expression wen c had fallen down at the library nd her constant muttering.
A:aur bohot bolti vi hai.
Haseena looked at abhay n was surprised 2 c him smiling.
H:abhay u r smiling.i cant biliv it.
A:mom nt again.u say it as if i nvr smile.
H:u do bt nt in dis way.
A:mom u r confusing me a lot.m late.m leaving nw.bye.
H:u will nvr change.hope dat gal wil change u.
FLASHBACK ENDS.

a phonecall disturbed abhay's thoughts.he saw kabir's number on da screen.he rcvd da call.
A:hey kabir.
K:abhay hw r u?
A:m fine.how is U.S?
K:m so bored here.wish i cld return 2 my own country.wel i called u talk abt a project.
A:ya go on.
K:wel our company wants 2 work wid urs 4 the delhi project nd so if u want den we can discuss abt it.son of our boss works in delhi n he wil visit u in ur delhi branch.so if u want 2...
A:ok i wil think abt it n inform u.
K:think abt it abhay.
A:i will.
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part 2 posted below.

Edited by -srija- - 14 years ago

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srija

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Posted: 14 years ago

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chapter 6 part 2

"its me.its my photograph"
priya searched da book n found another photograph.c was surprised 2 find abhay in dat photo.c turned da photograph nd read wat was written there.
'Abhay Raichand and Piya Dobriyal-ENEMIES 4EVER.'
Bt that 'enemies 4ever' was corrected nd written 'love 4ever.'c touched the photo wid her fingers nd smiled.
"so dis is piya,da one he was looking 4.how is dis possible.c looks exactly like me dats y he mistook me 4 her.in dis photo it seems as if they were abt 2 kill each other."
priya tried 2 sleep bt cldnt.c took da photo n looked at it 4 hrs.c didnt know y bt c cldnt take her eyes of da image of abhay.
"wats happening 2 me.i jst met him 2day.i know nth abt him bt y m i thinking abt him so much.y m i so desperate 2 c him."
it was nearly dawn wex c closed her eyes bt c was disturbed by the knock on her door.c took her mobile 2 c the time n saw 13 missed calls of jeh.jeh was knocking at her door nd calling her name.priya opened da door yawning.
P:wat is dis jeh.y r u disturbing me early in da morning?
J:early?look at da time priya its 9 o clock u sleepy head.wake up n get ready.
P:let me sleep na.
J:no priya we av 2 return delhi 2day.
P:y jeh..i mean wats da hurry.we can return 2maro na.
J:no priya its urgent.
P:wats so urgent.
J:well...um...maasi is sick.
P:WHAT??ok ok i'll be ready.just wait a bit.
Priya got ready in 10 minutes,packed her things n was abt 2 leave wen c remembered da book nd photographs.c looked 4 jeh bt cldnt find him.grabbing dis opportunity c sneaked out of da hotel nd rushed 2wards the library.

Abhay wasnt able 2 decide whether 2 accept the proposal or nt coz he didnt want 2 leave dehradun bt chadeena urged him 2 accept the proposal nd convinced him.they wanted him 2 work on da delhi project as it wld distract him frm his lamentation nd sadness.
He was all set 2 go 2 da airport wen he rcvd a call.
A:hello
p:hello mr. Abhay Raichand.
When abhay heard dis voice his heart skipped a beat.the same was da case wid priya.
A:who...who r u?
P:its me priya.remember we met at da library.abhay recalled da incident in da library.it pinched him 2 remember dat da 1 he had met wasnt piya bt priya.
A:ya...ya i remember.
P:actually i av something,wel some photographs.i think dat belongs 2 u.i think our books were exchanged.
A:thank god i thought i lost dem.plz dnt giv dat book 2 da librarian.
P:m in da library nw.i took ur number frm the register n called.dat book is still wid me.
A:plz do wait 4 me.i wil be there in a minute.
P:plz do it fast.m in hurry.

Abhay hung up n rushed 2wards the library.priya was tensed.c was afraid dat if jeh found out abt her roaming around alone he wld scold her.abhay reached the library n approached her.priya looked up at him n 4 a moment c 4got 2 breathe.they both satred at each other.
P:woh...um...heres the book.
A:oh!...thanks.here is ur book.
P:thanks.
Priya returned dat book 2 da library n turned 2 look at abhay who was looking at da book n touching it lovingly.
P:dis book seems very important 2 u.
A:ya its her fav nd the last 1 c read.i can still feel her in the pages of dis book.
Priya's eyes filled wid tears looking at da expression of abhay n knowing da extent of his love n devotion 2wards piya.c didnt know how mch time c spent jst looking at him.c was brought back 2 reality by da cal frm jeh.
"hello jeh"
"hey priya where r u?"
"m in da library.i came 2 return da book."
"u sld av told me.wait m coming 2 pick u up"
"i can come jeh.no need 2 pick me up.i wil be there in 5 minutes."
c hung up nd turned 2wards abhay n found him looking at her.
P:sorry...i..i..hav 2 go now.
A:ok...
P:it was nice..2 meet u.
A:i was glad 2 meet u as well.
P:b..bye.
A:bye.

Her heart was heaving gudbye 2 abhay.c felt as if c was leaving sth precious behind.c felt like crying.c was finding it difficult 2 leave dat place,leave abhay.abhay stared at her back till c was out of sight.
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chapter 6 completed.m reli very sorry 4 being late par ande tamatar maat marna plz.hope u guys like it n 4give me.
Xoxo
srija.

Edited by -srija- - 14 years ago

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Monkey

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Posted: 14 years ago

#257

Flashback ws lovely.poor abhay.dey r gnna work together in delhi,right?great.

Edited by TISA07 - 14 years ago

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Peehu24

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Posted: 14 years ago

#258

awesome update...loved it...

the flashback was cho chweet..i was smiling reading it...felt really bad for abhay..i could feel the love he has for piya...that photograph part was so sweet..m still smiling...abhiya met...again...now priya is leaving..so i guess..abhay will meet piya in delhi and that person with whom abhay has to do deal is jeh...i guess..that means more abhiya meet...dontknow if piya will get her memory soon..but i think she will fall in love with abhay all over again..and i think abhay will also fall for her..and soon will realise that she is piya..hope m right..continue soon...

Edited by peehu24 - 14 years ago

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sandeep

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Posted: 14 years ago

#259

awesome update sriju!!!!!
i loved it yr !!!
So priya has started to feeling towards abhay... 😃 dats great sign!!!
Loved the flashback scene... Specially abhiya fight👍🏼 that was simply superb...
So i think its jeh wid whom abhay is gona do the project...hana
So abhay & pia will meet in Delhi... yipeee. this time kuch to damake dar hoga delhi mein !!!!
Plz make pia remember her past soon... Cnt c abhay sad like this 😭
waiting for next part . lvu take care .

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Akshita

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Posted: 14 years ago

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amazing dr!!!! flashback is so sweet yr!!!! i can feel abhays pain!!!! n his love for pia is really very deep!!!! n his attachment with those photograph!!!! dat was so sweet...

pia cant sleep remembering about abhay!!!! hope her heart gave her some sign dat she loves abhay!!!!

so abhay is also going 2 delhi!!! dats cool!!! it meaans abhay pia meets more often!!!!

i hope she falls 4 abhay soon n finds out dat she is piya nt priya!!!

cont soon n thanks 4 d pm!!!

Edited by Akshi0019 - 14 years ago