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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: wooo23

add me to ur pm your ff is great😃

thanx dear.. i'll pm u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sunu123

awesome ff...nice concept...plz cont soon...n pm me...luv u...sunita

thanx sunita..
n i'll pm u😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
hy guys, sorry for late update cz i was buzzy, preparing for my tsts, now i got time, so here it is
ch:2
(pia in a hospital room)
slowly nerves of her mind awakened, restoring the consious
a slight moment,
rise of curtain of eyes slowly
her mind was blank...
nthng at that instant
wht happened?? where m i?? , she adress herself with weak voice
a reply came, "oh! u r awake, let me get the doctor"
she found herself in a bed, white painted simple room
needle of drip were injected in her hand to recover loss of blood
still, she was dizzy,weak
nurse arrive back with doctor
doctor checked her, she didnt protest, let him check her
pia adressed "how i get here?"
doctor: " a young man bring u here, u were unconsious and badly bleeding wrist, if he had not bring u here, v wont be able to save you"
she looked with expressionless eyes
then she saw a sophisticated dressed,handsome amn entered through door
nurse:here he is, he's ur life saver
then doctor n nurse left
she looked towards him, a strange look, there was no gratitude for life saver
"he put me in this hell of life again" she thought
he came near, holding boquette of flowers, n put it aside at table
he gently smiled
"r u feeling any better now??"
there was anger in her eyes
she blurted out "WHO THE HELL U THINK U R?? SUPER MAN?
SPIDER MAN? Y THE HELL U BRING ME HERE? DO U THINK U R A SUPER HERO, SAVING EVERY1'S UR RESPONSIBILITY"
abhay: " OH! plz give it a break, first i save u,is this how u show ur gratitude?, i followed u to return ur purse to cementry n then bring u here, cz of u my baby is angry with me, i didnt get to go on a date, stuck in this bloody hospital with u, GRANDMA!!!!!!"
pia:r u dumb?? r u fool, wht r u trying to pretend, dun u hv these 2 eyes or these r buttons, i wounded my wrist myself n u ruined it.. u b****"
abhay:ok now thats the limit (angrily)
pia:whtever!!
abahy:let me undo my mistake,u worth dying,
he fetch the knife from fron table,placed for cuttinng fruits for patients
he held knife n came forward..
abhay:ooo... m going to kill u.. (making fun of her)
pia: ah! u r got to be kidding with me (annoyed)
door opened,
an elegant dressed, gracful, white haired man in his 50's, entered with a gently dressed young man in black suit
pia caught sight of that young man, a fierceness mounted in her eyes
both men were moving toward her
pia snatched the knife from abahy's hand,in instant, n jerked her arm, to get herself rid of drip needle,n pounced on that young man to stab him
she was shouting: i will kill, u kill him b***
abhay stepped forward and gripped her,she was wild as caged loiness
the old man and the young man looked surprise n worried
3rd man entered from door, he was blessed with intellect filled features and young
he rushed towards pia, n pushed abhay aside
pia was sobbing, she hugged him
"Aron u r here, look no 1s beliving me,i know the truth"
aron: pia calm down m here, dun worry
abhay now take a hard a look of that old man and recognised him
he knw him,he was one of his dad bussiness partners
owner of doberial companies
rich and known
and the man entered with him was kabir,son of mr doberial KABIR DOBERIAL
wht r they doing here?
how they r related to this girl?
wht is all happening here?
mr doberial and kabir went out
abhay also went out to figure out wht going on here
scene(hospital of corridor)
abhay looked for mr doberial,kabir was gone
abhay moved towards doberial,mr doberial looked at him with the recoginizing glimpse
abhay:hye uncle
mr doberial:abhay!son,i apologize for the trouble u get in becoz of my daughter pia.it was so helpful of u to bring her to hospital,i really appreciate ur help
abhay:that girl...she is ur daughter (in conforming tone)
mr doberial:she is my loved and only daughter.
abhay:why she is doing all this?
mr doberial:actually son,shez been through rough trauma.she loved a backstabbing poor guy jia.he wants to get our money through her.he got killed smhow n now she blames her brother kabir for jia death.God knws
wht the blindfold that bas***d jia tied on our innocent pia eyes.
abhay:oh...that really is a serious issue.if u cud use my help m ready anytym mr doberial.
mr doberial:thanx abhy.i ll let u knw if any.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
hey..that was a good update...kabir and pia are bro-sis...too good...😆..
i loved ur update...i hope abhay and pia become frnds soon...update soon..thanks for pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
wow dear awesome update so pia is going through trauma.Poor Abhay bachane ka yeh sila mila hahaha😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
superb update dear...
loved it...
my ff will be updated within 2 hours...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Nice Update!!!😊
So who killed Jeh?Kabir is behind all this?Thanks a lot for Pm.Continue soon.Good Luck!👍🏼

Edited by prerna26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

pia - kabir, sis & bro... thats interesting... nice update!!!!!

thnx 4 da pm 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: peehu24

hey..that was a good update...kabir and pia are bro-sis...too good...😆..

i loved ur update...i hope abhay and pia become frnds soon...update soon..thanks for pm..

haha!.. main na socha drama main to sab pia ka pecha laga rahta hain. main kisis ko to bf ki jaga bhai banao😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow dear awesome update so pia is going through trauma.Poor Abhay bachane ka yeh sila mila hahaha😆😆

hahaha... ya😊

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