a small poem regarding yesterday's episode

Frequent Posters

nizza

@lakshyasss

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: janu1610

jazz cute poem...
from piya to Abhay.

Tumhare in khoobsoorat aankhon ne mujh pe jaado kya chalaya
samhaj mein nahi aata ye kaisa jaam tumhne pilaya
din ke ujhale mein bhi na jane kahan kho jati hoon mein
samandar se gheri in band aankho mein bhi doob jati hoon mein'😳

😃u write better than me and amaze me... why don't u write ure owm post it will rock...this poem is amazing...👏..

Quote

Raybika or u can call reeyana too

@Reeyana

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

you made a gr8 poem, it absoulatly told yesterday's episode.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

ritu

@janu1610

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: dolma.rose
😃u write better than me and amaze me... why don't u write ure owm post it will rock...this poem is amazing...👏..

Thanks a lot sweetie i m ghazal writer .😃

Quote

shafaq

@shafaq_abhiya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

lovely poem jaaz loved it...

Quote

abhayarsh

@abhayarsh

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

hey that was so awesome. . Dear

Quote

maria

@Maria-capri

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

great Jazz 👏

Quote

Priya Iyer

@priya_1234

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: dolma.rose
😊Guys yesterday's episode was rocking...i loved every inch of it...and

so i tht to write everything in a poetic form...hope u like it

Kal kii pyaar kii ye ek kahani

Thi barri suhani

Aur ab wo suniye meri zubani

Jahan Abhay ne apna attitude dikhaya

Wahin Chandeena ne Apna Gussa Ugaya

Jaan Marri ke is khel mein

Alina aur Jeh ke is sambandh mein

Jahan hamara Abhay hua Pia ke karan leadership chorne ko raazi

Wahin Hypnotisement ne marri baazi

Kahan se chale the hum

Aur kahan aa gaye

Jahan Pia ne aath saal (8) kii umar mein Apni maa ko khoya

Wahin usne sulanh saal(16) kii umar kaa racha itehaas phir se duharaya

Jahan pia ne dekhi apni zindagani

Wahin hamari aankhon ne dekhi Pia kii monh boli zubani

Ab aage kya hoga koi na jane

Is raaz se abhay kaise pia ko nikale

AAj kii Pia kaise apne aap ko sambhale

Koi na jane

Koi na jane -jasmine😊