Abhiya OS : abandon broken log house

piya twisted her ankle and there was no source of water near. Abhay tells piya we will have to spend the night here. Piya says okay but where are we going to stay. Abhay says I think there is a place for us to stay and he says it's pretty far so and he picks her in his arms and starts walking. They reach the log house and he puts piya down. Its start raining thundering piya gets scared meanwhile abhay is walking. piya says where r u going he says I am walking outside to see if I can get some help. Piya says please don't go please its raining abhay says r u scared she is like no. Abhay is like okay and smirks and says in his mind piya I know r u r scared and also care 4 me so u don't want me walk out in the rain. The weather gets worse. Piya out of fear was limping but walks to abhay and hugs him tightly and confesses I am scared, but now I do not care what you may think of me. Please don't leave me. Abhay says I will not leave u alone don't worry I will fix everything. He says this looking into her eyes. She looks into his eyes and says thank you my angel. Piya. Says to herself u r always there for me like an angel, you always protect me how will I ever pay off your debt. I know u r a really sweet guy who acts rude arrogant batamesh all the time, but why am I the only one who you have let come close too you. I know u love Maithili and will never love me and
I remind you of Maithili and bring back the harsh memory of losing her. I promise you my angel I will try my best to stay away from you but whenever I try to be away from you I come twice as closer to u then b4. I do not know how strange that might sound but it's true that taqdeer ya kismat always brings me closer to you even than before. Abhay hearing her mind says I know piya it's not your fault but we can never be together it is impossible it's better if I break your heart now and stop you before it's too late and give you lifetime grief. I know it's seems harsh but it's for your good and for that I am ready to take any pain. I can't see you cry or sad but I have too so I am sorry. Then abhay see's a bucket next to the side of the door. He fills up the rain water n goes to piya n puts her foot inside he yank her foot n she feels relieved n says thanks.

P.S. guys this is my first OS so please pardon my mistakes n i am sorry if it is really bad.

OH MY GOD..My sweetie Pe friend SHIVANI..😲that was cho chweet ..Awww.🤗.log house..aw..please continue whenever free..waiting to read more ..You are Fabulous ..dear..👏

wonderfful beautiful great awesome splendid os

Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC

OH MY GOD..My sweetie Pe friend SHIVANI..😲that was cho chweet ..Awww.🤗.log house..aw..please continue whenever free..waiting to read more ..You are Fabulous ..dear..👏

i will try to continue but it will take awhile. first i gotta come up with ideas. Dhi feel free to send me ideas if you want n you can add to it your own. this was my first attempt to write them n post them. i wrote them awhile ago n posted them now.

thank you guys for liking it . it means alot. i was scared to post it cuz i have read too many good OS and FF that i thought this was really bad. but thanks alot. n her is a hug from me 🤗 and you all can give me ideas to write the next part cuz i did not think i would be thinking about writing a part 2 or more. n feel free to write next part on your own.

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Nice OS! 😊 Will u be writing another part to this?

i am going to but it might take awhile. i am gonna write part 2 for both OS. but i don't know where to start . i am confused😕 maybe you can help me out. 😊.

WOW!!!

I like it Shivani, I didn't know you could write like that

ahan...are u going to continue it ? i mean we want some cute scene too..OMG em so dashh😳 as it seems a cool idea log house