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Posted: 14 years ago
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Woke up today without a soul
woke up today half of a whole
I walk on streets of burning amber
My world has been set aflame
I felt the iron fist of death clutch my soul within it's grip,
To steal my last mortal breath.
--------------Abhay Raichand

"Hhmm, am getting good with words",thought Abhay. He closed his diary and looked out. It was a dark night,Abhay came in front of the window and opened the glass planes as wide as it can go. The cold breeze caressing Abhay's face made him shiver for a second,he chuckled. Abhay thought "Is there anything in this world for which i would trade my soul?...umm wait a minute,I don't have a soul". Taking a deep breath, Abhay took out something from his pockets, a silver chain with a "S" locket. Abhay,touched the locket very softly,remembering the last time, he held Piya in his arms. Abhay had replaced Piya's mom's locket with his locket which still hangs in Piya's neck to protect her from any trouble,but some how she manages to end up in deep shit every time. The only difference is,she doesn't remembers it anymore. Abhay held the chain closed to his heart and thought,"If only I was a human...,if only I had a second chance...". Piya is miles apart from him today,she is changed. And all this,just to protect her. Abhay felt a spam of pain inside him. He knows he have to do it. Have to stay away from her. "Life's so unfair!" exclaimed Abhay. Laughing to himself Abhay thought,"Why the hell am I thinking like a teenage boy? Weird!". Just then his phone rang,"What is it mom?","Abhay, are you alright?" inquired Haseena. "No,am going insane." replied Abhay. "Everything's gonna be alright sweetheart. I know you are strong, I believe in you." assured Haseena. "Thanks mom. I need to go out now,have a check on Piya". and he disconnected the line. Abhay wondered, "Life's not so bad after all. Glad I have parents life Chand and Haseena"
He pulled his coat out, and before heading out of the door, he gave a last glance on the mirror, he smiled,"Yes, If I have a soul, I would trade it for Piya."
And he shut the door tight.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow!!! it was really awesome... the way u portrayed abhay's feelings... it was simply superb
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow...mind blowin'...!!!!!!!! 👏 👍🏌
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rosamale

wow!!! it was really awesome... the way u portrayed abhay's feelings... it was simply superb


Thanks dear...just a moment from Abhay's thoughts😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwtHrt2011

Wow...mind blowin'...!!!!!!!! 👏 👍🏌


Thanks dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: CleviveDsouza

awesome

wow
great
fantastic
continue soon
plz pm me


Thanks...glad you liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fantastic OS! You depicted Abhay's feelings so well! It was simply awesome! Do write more awesome OS's like this in the future! Good job! 👏

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