ABHIYA-JISHA-SUPERNATURALS-ORIGIN-CHAPTER-4-PART-2 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: BUBLAI

Really liked the update ... It's really good ... would love to know what happens next ...
please continue soon ...
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wow awesome update I loved it.Do continue.Me waiting 4 Abhiya now😊😊
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hey...its nice...start is gud...thanks for pm...looking forward for update
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hey dear😃woww one more ff...i loved the concept...it is quite interesting...awesome start dear👏👏👏...plz do cont soon...me now waiting for abhiya entry...plz cont soonhav a nice dayluvsunita
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gud start Dear.. so Jay is intelligent cool smart.. Multitalented Boy.. Gud gud..😆
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RAICHANDS IN DEHRADOON

Chand Raichand and Haseena Raichand stepped in dehradoon , their birth place n their own territory. They are the descendant of the royal highness maharaja "Samar pratap Raichand" . The king was known for his greatest achievements as a brave, strong n unbeatable warrior of his time . he was also famous for his kindness n fair justice. He was the only hunter, who never hunts for pleasure but for his kingdom. Whenever there is any danger of savage, he was always ready to handle it himself instead of putting someone's in danger. But ones when he was all set for the hunting for an unknown terror, he was vanished forever. No one ever had found any information about him. Many years later his when his youngest son fell ill of some unrecoverable disease , some told that he was there and fix his son to all well. but his family denied that. Around after a century an oracle announced that the royal family is coursed n who ever stay in the palace will be under the course. Only the 4th generation of his youngest son will break the course with help of an enemy clan. They all believe that the course was for maharaja n by Satan's son (vampires, against his father itself) . The enemy clan belong Gabriel's son (werewolf, against God). But maharaja Samar Pratap was trapped by his own uncle. That unknown threat was the most evil vampire (Victor)was against the vampire king n called by maharaja's uncle to kill him on his quest. As maharaja was a great soul n a great warrior he fought till his last breath n almost kill the evil vampire. The vampire king came to know about the fight n his uncle's evil plan. He himself came to the fight place n found the king at the edge of death. The evil vampire bit him n sucked his blood . when thr vamp king touched him he realised how pure n pious Samar patap's soul was, so he cut his wrist vein n drenched his blood to feed maharaja. Maharaja Samar pratap control all the pain occurred in that process of transformation masking his face. But when he completely transferred to the walking dead his first and last victim was his uncle, the master mind behind the scene. After that he was throne as the vampire king of Asia and has the supreme power of control. So when the royal family came across the prophecy they all shifted to other countries. Yah of course the evil vampire was saved by the werewolves n became a hybrid savage n rage against all the other races.(human, vampire n other ancient creatures but werewolves)

After 150 years Raichand family returned dehradoon, unknown about the prophecy. Mr. and Mrs. Raichand (HASEENA AND CHAND) renovate their hawelli and arrange the whole mess once again. They are here only after 2 months, they lost their first son. Their first son Sidharth Raichand was lost when he was just 5 years old. But Haseena was expecting his second child and she want to get away from that place as it remind her of her loving son. She was just shattered and Chand wanted her recovery so they returned to their native place "dehradoon". She gave birth a boy baby and named him Abhay Raichand ( who never fears), after six months when no one in the hawelli and Haseena was in kitchen Abhay fell down from the palankh and seriously injured . the best doctor of dehradoon was called for treatment , they tried all their best but they put their hands down and put him in the hand of god. That night Chand witnessed something which changed his life forever. After that day Abhay was turned to a vampire as per his fate n the prophecy. Chand and Haseena came to know about the truth of Samar Pratap Raichand and were ordered to take care of Abhay as a prince on cost of their life. Over the time Haseena was killed by the evil hybrid vampire known as "Vikrant". Abhay witnessed his mother's death and promised to take revenge .Chand was also trapped by were wolf when they attacked Abhay in the jungle. But fortunately both of them tricked them . on their way they found a baby girl. Haseena always wished for a baby girl child, so she dressed Abhay as a girl when he was a child. Abhay could see his mother in that baby's eye, and they took that baby to home. Though she was a girl neither Abhay nor Chand treated her as a girl. They trained her and put her to toughest training and made her able to safe guard herself. As Abhay has a good vampire blood , he was on normal veg appetite. He has all the quality of a super vampire. He is good looking, smart, intelligent, strong, speed of wind, can read minds and can anticipate . The one bad thing he has is over protective and lost his mind . He and his adopted sister Misha were buddies more than brother and sister. 10 years before when Misha and Chand were on their way to hawelli after morning walk they were attacked by some wired species. Chand fright for both of their lives but being hopeless he called Abhay by telepathy for help. Abhay was out of town but he managed to come there with his lightening speed. On that day Misha knew his brothers identity and all about her and Samar pratap truth. Abhay also knew that the species that was there in a hybrid one but he is enough to control them all . in that fight Chand was rigorously wounded and by all mean couldn't be saved by Samar and Abhay .after that incident Abhay was everything to Misha n vice versa. Abhay had helped Mr. Khurana for his studies of bones of ancient human.

Today

Misha came with his buddy bro for admission in the college , Misha was waiting at the parking area in the car and Abhay enter the college to have a convo with the prinzy. Abhay though not new to dehradoon but totally new to the college. He was just wandering in the corridor searching for principal's office. The class has started and there was a pin drop silence in the college. There is only one sound of rustling shoe of Abhay. Abhay after a long search stand still near the door of a class room rubbing his fore head , talking himself. A cute pair of eyes peeped from the stair case but filled with fear and nervousness. Abhay was so confused that he was just out of his mind when he saw those eyes. Abhay immediately move towards her and grab her hand and felt a 1000 volt of shock.

Abhay- (withdraw his hands then grab her hand once again) come with me to the principal room(but he want to ask her a favour to show him prinzy's office).

Girl- sss...sorry sir !

Abhay- drag her to one side of the corridor without listening her plead..

Girl- sir this is my first ...

Abhay- yah this is my first day in college too(thought that the girl is making any excuse not to help him)

Girl –please listen sir( begging him and pulled by him)

Abhay- (suddenly saw the principal entering his cabin)hello sir! listen sir...(dragging that girl along with him)Abhay and that girl enter the principal room. Abhay still holding her hand tightly and unaware of her discomfort.

Principal to Abhay- hello Abhay! What make you come here?

Abhay –she made me to be here, u know for her admis...

Princy-but she is already here on scholarship.

Abhay- what! she never got above 70% . how come she got a scholarship. She had never told me about that.

Girl(in her mind)- what a liar! He don't even know me properly. And what a professor lying about a student on her first day in college. How i will manage here 3 whole year?

Abhay- i am here for the admission. I have told u over the telephone.

Girl – mind-OMG he is here for his admission LOL, thank god i m not going to b punished being late. I thought he was a professor. But is n't he bit old for graduation. WEIMB he is so handsome rather hot yaar. Then she mentally slapped her ant back to reality)

Princy- oh ! you are talking about Misha, i see.

Abhay- yah! You got me.

Princy- why u drag her here?

Abhay-( realizing his deeds) i am so sorry , i was bit confused and instead of asking her help i drag her here.

Abhay to girl - i am so sorry Miss...

Girl- Miss Piya Jaiswal! ( with a sweet voice)

Abhay – i am really very sorry Miss Jaiswal. i was just out of my mind. Its all becoz of my little sister.

Piya- its ok Mr. Abhay!

Princy- Abhay , she is the girl on scholarship , i am talking about.

Abhay- (giving his hand forward) congratulation! Piya- can i call u piya...

Piya- (shaking hands with him , both felt a shock )thank u . and yah of course u can call me that.

Piya was send to her class by the peon and Abhay done with all the formalities went back to Misha at parking place. Misha was busy with her i-phone in the car.

Abhay- hey mish ur paper work is done . here is ur ID card and other stuffs. Go and join other in the classroom no 143(A).

Misha- hey bro yeh class thoda romantic nahin lag raha kya?i mean room no 143( in her naughty expressions)

Abhay- yah ! love is there for sure ( lost in piya's thought)

Misha- what?

Abhay- nothing yaar! Just go and join the class. And yah be good to others. Don't have fight with others. Specially Kabir , don't fight with him inside the class room. Let his little status be good inside the class room...

Misha- yah yah my dear brother bear (mocking him)

In the class Misha found a lovely angelic girl welcoming her to her seat. The first class was over and no faculty was there. She make Misha sit near her with a heartily broad smile and by the end of the class they became good friends.😃

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nyc dr...
1st meating was awsum... n pia n misha become gud friends dats cool!!!
cont soon n thanks 4 pm...

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