Abhiya FF Together, Forever N always Chapter6,PG 5

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Hally

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Posted: 14 years ago

GUYS THIS IS MY FIRST TIME I HOPE U LYK IT!!!

CHAPTER 1

Abhay is home alone watching TV when he hears the door bell ringin. He goes to open the door...

Abhay: You??? How did you know where we live??

Sid: Oh come on baby bro. We are vampires. I followed you. I can't leave you alone little bro. I love you(siddarth said jokingly)

Abhay: It's great 2 c u bro. How have you been?

Sid: I'm fine tell me what about you?

Abhay: I don't know man I mean 2morro is my first day at mount college and we moved here just 2 days ago.

Sid: If you are scared everything will be fine

Abhay:We Will c

the morning comes of when abhay goes 2 school. He is at home on his way 2 school.

Misha and Pia are running late 2 class so they are running out of the house in a hurry

Misha: Birdie dumbo you didnt wake me up!!!! Normally your sutpid singing in the morning wakes me up. Why no singing today?

Panchi: I found something new to do - I got a job so I had 2 wake up early

Pia: Mish, we are getting late and yet you are still chattin 2 our sis!! R U STUPID?? LETS GO!!

on the way to school pia and misha are ruwalking whil abhay comes up in his black car. He looks out of the window and stops his car. He does the car window down and looks. There was walking a beautiful girl, who was wearing a pink top with black jeans. Pia stopped when she saw abhay looking at him. She looks at his eyes and just gazes at them, it was like this man had just touched her hearet as she had butterflies in her stomach

Misha: HELLO!!! who are you? and why are you staring at my sister and now she looks like a zombie???

Abhay(breaks out of pias beautifulness) I'm Abhay, Abhay Raichand, And you are(looking at Pia

Pia is still looking at him and can not say a word

Misha: I' Misha and thanks for asking who I am, and this is my sister Pia We are on our way to Mount Colege RIght?? PIAAA!!!!

Pia breaks out of abhays handsomeness

Pia: Right

Abhay: Great: I will see you there

Pia: Wait we are getting late. Can you drop us off?

Abhay: You should have got up earlier then it is not my fault so bye

Abhay drives off while Pia thinks to herself, sich a handsome guy but yet and arrogant person!!!

Mount College: Misha and Pia get there late and walk into class

Dasgupta: Oi dobriyals. Why are you late for??

Misha: O maam Pia woke up late and I was about to leave to go to school when she said wait for me!!! It's all her fault Give her detention not me!!!

Dasgupta: O realli??? Your sister already foned me and told me not 2 believe your stupid story so what's the truth?

Pia: Well maam we were getting late but that man ther mr ABHAY RAICHAND saw us getting late and we asked him to drop us off but they do say newcomers make a fiest impression and he really has made an impression on me111 and it is he is an arrogant person!!!

Abhay: Think what you want pia im here 2 learn not 2 herar wah u think of me!!!

End of college and Pia is in the woods walking when she trips on a branch and is about 2 fall when she feels someone grab her and hold them in their arms. She looks at the person and it turns out 2 be abhay!

PRECAP- pia is wondering how abhay new she was in the woods and how he new she was going to trip over the branch!!!

Edited by HallyH - 14 years ago

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Petal_Pose

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Posted: 14 years ago

great job would love to read more

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Deepi20

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice start! The first Abhiya interaction was interesting! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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sonia

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey...awesome start...

college shuru hone se pehle hi jhagra start..great...

do pm me when u update...plz..

continue soon..tc

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sunita satardekar

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Posted: 14 years ago

HEY HALLY😃

GOOD JOB...

I REALY LIKE UR 1ST UPDATE...

PLZ DO CONTINUE SOON

ND PM ME YAAR NEXT TIME

HAV A NICE DAY

LUV

SUNITA

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Hally

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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 2

Abhay is walking with Pia in his arms. Pia was OK but was shocked about what was going to happen to her which is hwy he was holding her. Pia was taking deep breaths which abhay could hear. He stares at her and then she stares at him and Pia is thinking Abhay how did you know I was in the woods and how did you know I was going to fall? You werent behind me cos no1 was so im confused.

Abhay is thinking how do I tell you what I am, Although I just saw you, it is like your the thing I have waited for in my life. Wheneveer I see you Iget restless, I hate seeing you in pain! Abhay breaks the trance and puts Pia on the ground of the woods

Abhay: Pia, Are you OK?

Pia: Erm what happened??? All i remember is I was about to fall when you came and saved me. How did you nkow that by the way?

Abhay: Pia, I was behind you walking but did not speak 2 you cos I was in my oen world until I saw a branch in the way but you did not see it cos you was in your own world which is why I grabbed you.

Pia: You weren't behind me cos I saw no1 behind me.

Abhay: Can't you just be grateful I saved you? I mean although you don't like me and whatever, I still saved you didn't I

Pia: (pia stands up) Well I didn't ask to be saved, I am a big girl I can look after myself

Abhay: Fine, next time I see you in danger or if you are about to fall, I will just walk on

Pia: Fine

Pia walks away leaving abhay in the forest

The na na na tune comes on and abhay is thinking

How can I do that, I wont leave you alone in danger, OK pia you might hate me but I hate seeing you in pain no matter what. If you think that I am going to let you fall then think again cos I will always save you no matter what

Pia's maahiya tune comes on and she is thinking

I will do fine without abhay, he only saved me once but why was it so hard for me to walk away back there. Who are yuo abhay raichand and what is t about you that makes me safe when I'm with you?

PRECAP- The Dobriyals are having a party and EVRYONE is invited

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sunita satardekar

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey hally😃

nice update yaar👏...keep going...

i m sooo happy becoz in ur ff abhay has not started stay away from me mission...

looking forward for the dobriyal party...

hey hally plz try to update long update yaar...2nd chapter was quite short

anyway thnx for the pm

plz update soon

hav a nice day

luv

sunita

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey nice start.Plzzz continue😊

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Hally

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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 3

The Dobriyals are gettin ready for Panchi and Danish's 1 year wedding anniversary and Misha see her Mum walking down the stairs in a green sari

Misha: Wow, Mum you look super HOT!!! If Dad doesn't faint, I'm sure the other Dad's will!!!
Madhu: Misha: Stop this nonsense Mish, you look nice too!!!
Arnab sees Madhu and looks shocked
Arnab: Madhu, Wow you look gorgeous, I didn't know you still have that beauty in you!!!!
Arnab and Misha start laughing
Madhu: You two laugh all you want and Arnab it is not for your benefit
Arnab think, Who is the benefit for then and not me!!!
Madhu just said that to get Arnab to think!!!
Misha understands what her Mum is doing
Misha: Oh Mum , with you looking like that he will fall to the floor!!
Madhu: Thanks, darling
Arnab: Who you talking about?
Madhu: Wait and find out Arnab

Just then Pia walks in looking lost in her thoughts and Madhu runs down
Madhu: Pia, WHY AREN'T YOU DRESSED?? the party stars in 5 minutes!!!!
Pia: Oh Mum , I forgot Sorry
Madhu:Get upstairs now and get dressed!!

Dnaish is wearing a black suit while panchi is wearing a Red Lainga
Danish: You look really beutiful my wifey
Panchi: So do you my hubby
Danish: Happy anniversary, I have got you a present but I will give it to you later
Panchi: I will give you my present later 2

Guests start arriving and congratulate Danish and Panchi on their anniversary. The last people to arrive are the Raichands
Chand: OMG, we look like we have dressed for a funeral!!!
Haseena: Chand, You can talk for yourself, I'm wearing Red because I don't like wearing Black all the time!!
Abhay: Mum, Dad we are in a public place can you please stop arguing for once? Dnaish and Panchi happy anniversary!! i hope you be as happy as my parents are!!!
Danish: Thank you

Abhay: so a year huh, you sure danish you're not bored of Panchi??
Panchi: More like I'm bored of him!!!

Abhay: LOL Panchi you are too funny but still I hope that you have a happy mar-

Abhay looks towards the stairs and see Pia in a white dress. She looks like an angel. AAbhay was mesmerised by her beautifulness

Panchi realises that Abhay is looking at Pia and nudges Danish and tells him to looka t him

Pia looks at Abhays direction and smiles she runs towards him. Abhay looks at her and is about to get her arms out when, Kabir runs past him adnd hugs Pia

Pia gives Kabir a hug

Pia: KABIR, YOU'RE HERE?!!! I missed you soo much!!! Why didn't you call me and tell me you were coming

Kabir: Pia, I wanted to surprise you!!! ANYWAY we need to catch up and I got you a present

Pia: Really??? What is it??

Kabir pulls out from his hand a heart necklace which opens and has a picture of Pia in it and the other side empty

Kabir: The other side is empty for you to fill with the person you love

Pia: Thanks Kabir, you are the best!!!

Pia hugs Kabir and realises Abhay is watching them

Abhay is thinking to himself who is this Kabir, and what is he to Pia, Are they together or are they just friends?? Abhay was getting soo jealous of this and then asks himself Abhay why are you jealous, pia is not your girlfriend so you have no right to ask yourself this

Abhay is so lost in his thoughts he doesn't realise Kabir is behind him who knocks into him with his drink

Kabir: Dude I'm soo sorry I didn't see you there.

Abhay: Sorry? My clothes are ruined and you are saying sorry now?? I will have to go home and change them!!!

Kabir: Chill Dude i said i'm sorry

Abhay was about to leave when Madhu and Arnab stop him

Arnab: Abhay, don't be silly you do not have to go home, you can wear my clothes, I know they are not your size but it saves you the trouble from going home

Abhay: but uncle What about MY clothes?

Madhu: We will wash them and give them to you

Abhay: thank you aunty and uncle

Madhu sees Pia and stops her

Madhu: Show Pia to our room so he can change his clothes

Pia: Mum, he can find it himself

Abhay: Aunty, I can find it myself, there's no need

Arnab: no, you're a guest and besides leave us parents to talk about you guyz!!!

Pia: Ok then, come on

Pia is walking up the stairs with Abhay who is looking at her

Pia is thinking please top looking at me like that, cos then my heart will skip a beat

abhay is thikning to himself I can'ts stop looking at you, you look really beautiful

Pia shows him to the room

Pia: choose what you want and wear it, I am waiting outside

Abhay: Thanks

Abhay is getting change and outside the door Pia is waiting, Pia is tapping her feet to the music, but she accidently steps on her dress which makes her fell and just then Abhay is dressed and wlaks out the room and Pia falls on top of him and they both fall to the floor!!!!

PRECAP - Abhay and Pia are about to KISS!!!