Abhiya FF Together, Forever N always Chapter6,PG 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
awesome yaar love it write more.i love reading on abhiya. plz pm me too.😊
Edited by shivanipandit29 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HEY HALLY😃NICE UPDATE YAAR👏...ND LONG ALSO...DEAR PLZ LET THEM KISS YAAR😳😉...I DONT WANT THEM TO DISTURBE BY ANYBOBY...SPECIALY KABIR ND PHONEHEY PLZ UPDATE SOONHAV A NICE DAYLUV SUNITA
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Super awesome update! That's so cute that Abhay is stunned by Piya's beauty and to see Abhay jealous of Piya and Kabir! And precap sounds interesting! Can't wait for the next update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 4
Pia is on top of Abhay and is gazing into his eyes. Abhay is gazing into her eyes too. They both are lost in each other and that is the only thing that matters to them at that time. Pia gets out of the trance and gets up, Abhay gets up too,
Pia: Im sorry...I..I didn't mean to fall on top of you
Pia is about to walk out when Abhay grabs her arm and shuts the door. Abhay leans Pia against the door and puts his arms on either side, so Pia cannot escape. He looks at her eyes and bring his lips close to her cheeks. He kisses her cheeks When abhay kissed Pia cheeks, Pias heart melted, she felt restless. Pia puts her hands on abhays cold chest, which Abhay although he is a vampire, felt it. Abhay leans closer to kiss pia's lips. He kisses her lips softly but then he starts to lose control of himself and kisses her pssionately. While kissing, Pia saw abhay's eyes turning blue and can feel his sharp teeth and whimpers.
Abhay pulls back and realises what he is doing. He turns around so his back is towards Pia while still with the blue eyes and the sharp teeth, realising that Pia is bleeding from her lips.
Pia: Are you okay? It's only a bit of blood
Abhay is trying to control himself as he can smell it and clenches his fist.
Abhay: Erm.. Yeah I just can not stand blood. i'm sorry Pia, I should not have done that, I dont know what came over me!!!!
Pia: It's OK, I better go and clean up
Abhay is controlling himself and turns back to himself which he tells Pia to stop. He goes near her and kisses her lips in which the blood goes.
Pia is confused
Pia: Abhay how did you do that???
Abhay: I didn't do anything, I just kissed you
Pia: Okay
Pia left the room
Abhay is thinking Pia how do I tell you what I am, how do I tell you I am inhuman.
Pia is thinking Abhay what just happened in there, WHAT are you, I know you won't tell me which is why I will find out myself
PRECAP - Pia on her laptop searching for the COLD ONE!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update! Loved the romantic Abhiya scene! I'm sure Piya will find out Abhay's truth in the next update and hopefully she'll accept him for who he is! Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HEY HALLY😃NICE UPDATE YAAR👏👏👏...N THANK U SOOO MUCH...PRECAP SOUNDS INTERESTING YAAR...PLZ DO CONT SOONONCE AGAIN THNX U LET THEM KISS YAAR😳😳😳...HAV A NICE DAYLUVSUNITA
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsum dr...
loved d romantic abhay pia scene...
n pm me next tym u update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 5
The party is finishing at every1 is going home. Chand, Abhay and Haseena are walking out of the house.
Chand: Abhay, What happened upstairs?
Abhay: What are you talking about?
Chand: Oh come on Abhay We sensed what was happening between you and Pia.
Abhay: Ilost control of the situation and I..
Haseena: You what?
Abhay: I bit her lip and she was bleeding.
Chand slaps Abhay
Chand: Abhay: She's a human. Get a grip of yourself!!! You controlled yourself after a while but what would have happened if you didn't?
Abhay: Dad, When I'm with Piya, I don't know what comes over me. I feel like inside me my Heart is beating.
Chand: We don't have hearts
Abhay: But I feel I do when I'm with Piya.
Haseena: Are you falling for the human?
Abhay flashes back to the memory of him kissing Pia and how he felt. He felt like the world was right and for once he actually felt like a human. then coming back to reality haseena is looking at him
Abhay: How could it be? I think I am falling for her!!! But I have to control my feelings for her as I can't tell her WHAT WE are
Chand: That girl could tell everyone what we are and I don't know if we can trust her yet.
Haseena: Abhay, do you trust her?
Abhay: I don't know her well, but I feel like I can trust her with my life.
Chand: YOUR LIFE? abhay you do not have a life anymore. You are a vampire. That is the only life you have. Do you think you can trust Piya with your vampire life?
Abhay: I don't wanna talk about this anymore. Let's just go home.
The raichands are getting into their car and from the window, Pia is watching Abhay get into the car and thinks abhay WHAT ARE YOU? Why don't you tell me anything? I don't know why but I want to know everything about you.
Pia then gets her laptop and goes on google and types in, blue eyes with fangs and cold skin and up comes up a website about THE COLD ONE AKA vampires. Pia reads this and she remembers Abhay has similar characteristics to this and is shocked when she realises that Abhay IS a vampire.
Meanwhile, Abhay is in his room, when he senses that Pia is searching things about vampires and runs. He runs as fast as he can to Pia's room and there Pia is standing.
Abhay: Pia... I wanted to tell you but I couldn't
Pia: Tell me what? That you're a vampire. I knew you was going to come cos I have read all about you.
Abhay: Pia, we only have known each other for a week!!!! Why do you want to know everything about others for?? WHY couldn't you jsut kept what you were thinking to yourself. Do you see me snooping around anywhere looking for things about you. huh?? This is why I didn't tell you about me because You don't know when too stop.
Pia had tears in her eyes and ran into the bathroom. Abhay comes by the bathroom door.
Abhay: Pia, I'm sorry. Open the door.
Pia is leaning against the bathroom door while Abhay is the same. They are both sitting on either side of the bathroom door.
Pia: Abhay, you are right. I shouldn't have looked out for everything about you as it is not my secret to tell. I only looked on google about you because when we kissed and I saw what happened to you I didn't feel scared. I mean deep down I know I should have been but I felt like it didn't matter cos it was you. Abhay are you there?
Abhay didn't answer. Pia got up and opens the door to see if Abhay was there. He wasn't there so she sat the bathroom door and was about to cry when she turned around and Abhay was standing there.
Abhay and Pia are staring at each other.
Abhay: Pia, you have seenthe human me but you have't seen the REAL me. For your sake,
Pia: Show me.
Abhay: What?
Pia: Show me the real you. Abhay I want to be with you no matter what.
Abhay: Pia, by doing this, your life will change forever,but Pia as you know you are going to be in a lot of danger as there is a lot of vampires out there,
Pia: Abhay I don't care as long as I got you. So please show me?
Abhays eyes turn blue and his fangs come out and he shows Pia. Abhay comes close to Pia
Abhay: This is the real ME and if you want me to leave then I will.
Pia walks towards Abhay who has his eyes closed and puts her hands on his face.
Pia: Abhay open your eyes, I am not leaving and I don't want you to leave.
Abhay kisses Pia as his vampire self and lifts Pia into his arms and puts her on her bed. Abhay and Pia are kissing passionately when the someone knocks on Pia's door.
PRECAP - Pia and abhay at mount college walking together HAND IN HAND!!!
Edited by HallyH - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow!!!
awesome...
abhiya confessed...yupppeee!!
i'm so happy that pia accepted abhay for wat he is...
superb update...
continue soon..
eagerly waiting for the students reaction at mount college..
thanks for the pm..
continue soon..
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woh... its gr8... i loved id... so pia acceptabhay with all d truth dat was so cute... n d next part might be romantic... so i m waiting... cont soon...

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