Abhiya Separation OS: Goodbye

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Hi guys!😊 I decided to write a sad OS on Abhiya separation. I am not much of a writer but ah well. Please share your views on how it is. And please press the like button if you liked it.😃

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Kavita

Abhiya Separation OS: Goodbye

Abhay stood at the desolated cliff looking outwardly at the setting sun. Her flowery fragrance reached him before she even came into view. Surprise flickered across his face. Even he had not known that this little venture into the woods would end here. How did she manage to find him always?


He turned slightly. He recognized her silhouette even in the semi-darkness. As her footsteps approached, he turned his back on her. Piya stopped at a little distance from him.


"Leave Piya," said Abhay. "Is it that hard for you to accept that I no longer care for you? You were just a passing affair. How many times will I have to say this to you before it reaches your pea-sized brain?"


"Just this one last time Abhay. I promise," said Piya.


Abhay's body stiffened upon hearing those few words spoken by whom he loved most. He noticed something different in the way she spoke. This moment had come too soon. Sadly, their story had never much time to begin with. It consisted only of a few moments. Moments that he could never forget and would carry till existence's end. The same moments he had forcibly taken away from Piya to allow her to lead a normal life full of light and happiness. He was a man of the shadows and there he would have to return one day. He could not want that for Piya.


He turned to face her. He looked searchingly at her face but she did not give away anything. She seemed to have picked up on this talent of his. He stared into her eyes but no answer. She broke the silence and voiced what he had feared would one day come to pass.


"I am leaving Abhay." "I am going back to Paris."


Each held the other's gaze. Words were lost and silence was welcomed. It seemed as if an eternity would come to pass as the two soul mates continued to look at each other.


No longer able to hold the eye lock, Piya walked past Abhay to look out toward the sunset. She smiled sadly inwardly. The sunset held a distinct resemblance to her life now. All light had gone out of her. She knew it. She felt it with each passing day. As the last few rays of sunlight began to disappear into the clouds, Piya felt the emptiness return to her heart that had vanished for a few brief moments upon seeing Abhay.


"I thought I would be able to put together the pieces of my life that I had lost one year ago Abhay. I failed. And now I am finding it difficult to recognize myself. I don't know where I belong. I am surrounded by my own yet all I see are strangers. I feel alone."


"You are probably wondering why I am telling you this Abhay. My heart tells me that you of all people have a right to know. I have no memories of you, of our past, whether it was good or bad, yet my heart seems to only see you, to feel for you. I wish I could explain it but I can't. I know I no longer have a place in your life and I accept that now."


Abhay stared into the darkness ahead. It tore him apart to see his love so heartbroken, so alone. He tried so hard to protect her but he had failed to protect her from himself. But this was the end of the darkness that had come to envelop Piya's entire existence. This was the final chapter of this dark fairy-tale. They would always belong to each other but could never be with each other.


"Bye Abhay." Her hand reached out for his last touch. He lifted his hand slightly and let her hand slip perfectly into his as if it had always belonged there. She slowly released her hand from his grip lingering on his fingertips momentarily.


As Piya's hand slipped away from his hand, there was a certain twinge in his dead heart.


Hadn't he wanted this all along? Then what was this rising desperation inside his heart to stop her. Always he had walked away from her and decided the course of their story. But today she was leaving him, forever.


She rested her eyes on him one last time. A whirlwind of emotions erupted inside Piya upon looking at him but her face was masked well and did not give away to emotion. As Abhay stole one last look of her angelic face, he saw nothing but determination.


Piya walked past Abhay and her footsteps did not give away once to her heart's pleas to stop. Her eyes finally gave way to the tears long held by them. She let them flow freely. She had to do this. For herself. This was insanity. She had to release herself from this relationship that no longer meant anything to Abhay but meant so much to her. Why did it hurt so much to walk away?


As she walked away, Abhay unconsciously raised his hand to stop her but he had to let her go. Oh, the irony of life. One year ago, he had taken Piya's memories and walked away. Now Piya, his very life itself, his reason for existence, was walking away.


Destiny had brought them together. But the world had rules that needed to be followed to preserve balance. Abhay and Piya could not be one. Their separation was a return to keep that balance.


"I am sorry Piya." "Forgive me."


His words were lost to silence. She was gone. His existence was empty of her presence. Finally, his world had fallen silent.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for your comment😊. Sorry I made you sad but I will follow-up with a happy one hopefully😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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you are separating them in the os😭😭
we all are already sad because of what happening in the show and now u have given us a bigger shock
because this is looks like so real u really wrote well👏 i almost had tears in my eyes 😭
please continue and give it a happy ending please
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Originally posted by: shivanirajput

you are separating them in the os😭😭

we all are already sad because of what happening in the show and now u have given us a bigger shock
because this is looks like so real u really wrote well👏 i almost had tears in my eyes 😭
please continue and give it a happy ending please



I am sorry for making you upset, but what is true love without a few trials and tribulations😳. Who am I to separate two soulmates? They will always come back to each other😃

I appreciate your reply and compliment 🤗and most definitely I will continue with a follow-up.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Omg, this is so sad! 😭
When I see AbhIya yearn for each other, I really wish that their tale wasn't so tragic. They're soulmates, they have to meet one day. Destiny is just being mean to them.
And the irony in your OS is that for once, it is Pia who is walking away from Abhay. It is so beautifully written <33
I specially love these lines you write for Pia. They really sum up her current state.

"I thought I would be able to put together the pieces of my life that I had lost one year ago Abhay. I failed. And now I am finding it difficult to recognize myself. I don't know where I belong. I am surrounded by my own yet all I see are strangers. I feel alone."


"You are probably wondering why I am telling you this Abhay. My heart tells me that you of all people have a right to know. I have no memories of you, of our past, whether it was good or bad, yet my heart seems to only see you, to feel for you. I wish I could explain it but I can't. I know I no longer have a place in your life and I accept that now."

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Dear, You really touched my heart. But can we have a happy ending atleast in the OS. Its this realisation which I wanted to dawn on Abhay that she can never be happy without him.He cannot decide her happiness I wish the CVs end the helplessness feeling of Abhay and Piya show a different turn of events where Piya and Abhay will be the strength of each other.
Could I request you to please write about positive turn of events that has a happy ending. I am really not sure how the CVs are going to go with the story. Atleast this would give some solace.
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::WOW! What a OS man U had me in floods of tears. U depicted Pia's feelings so well it was a heartbreaking departure. Hope U have a second part to this ironic update. Loved it::
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Originally posted by: Chill_Out

Omg, this is so sad! 😭

When I see AbhIya yearn for each other, I really wish that their tale wasn't so tragic. They're soulmates, they have to meet one day. Destiny is just being mean to them.
And the irony in your OS is that for once, it is Pia who is walking away from Abhay. It is so beautifully written <33
I specially love these lines you write for Pia. They really sum up her current state.

"I thought I would be able to put together the pieces of my life that I had lost one year ago Abhay. I failed. And now I am finding it difficult to recognize myself. I don't know where I belong. I am surrounded by my own yet all I see are strangers. I feel alone."


"You are probably wondering why I am telling you this Abhay. My heart tells me that you of all people have a right to know. I have no memories of you, of our past, whether it was good or bad, yet my heart seems to only see you, to feel for you. I wish I could explain it but I can't. I know I no longer have a place in your life and I accept that now."



Thank you😃...Abhiya can never be away from each other for too long..their souls are bound to each other...the way they are yearning for each other in the show has brought upon this OS...especially Piya's current emotional state which flowed into the words I wrote for her.

I understand Abhay's predicament, I do, but he cannot always be the one to decide the course of their love story...that is why Piya left this time. Now, lets see how Abhay brings her back.

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Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Dear, You really touched my heart. But can we have a happy ending atleast in the OS. Its this realisation which I wanted to dawn on Abhay that she can never be happy without him.He cannot decide her happiness I wish the CVs end the helplessness feeling of Abhay and Piya show a different turn of events where Piya and Abhay will be the strength of each other.

Could I request you to please write about positive turn of events that has a happy ending. I am really not sure how the CVs are going to go with the story. Atleast this would give some solace.



Thank you😳...The bolded words written above by you sum up the reason for this OS. The ball is now in Abhay's court. To either allow an alive Piya alongside him or to leave an empty, lifeless Piya without him.

I will surely write another OS with much happier circumstances for the two soulmates.😊

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Originally posted by: matwamango

::WOW! What a OS man U had me in floods of tears. U depicted Pia's feelings so well it was a heartbreaking departure. Hope U have a second part to this ironic update. Loved it::



Thank you for your kind words😳...heartbreaking but hopefully a final realization for our dark knight Abhay that Piya is just a broken image of a girl without him and his love. He can erase her mind of his memories but not her heart of his love.

Yes, there will be another update, this time around, happy.😉

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