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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

awesome update

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Awesome o.s!
Abhay & pia's daughter. . Wow! U r amazing. . Ur imagination, creativity,writing skills r superb!

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Akshi0019
its beautiful dr... d angel is so cute... n abhay finally save pia... u r a fabulus writer!!!

:::Thank U. I wanted to write a OS where Pia is really dying and have a noble reason for her to turn. Angel is derived from Pia always calling Abhay her Angel so it fit perfectly well for their daughters name.:::

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: mijanur
gr8 work from you.its an excelent os on abhiya.it looks different.i hope you will continue to give us this types of os in future also.thanks for pm.

:::I'll try to keep U entertained in the future with loads more OS's coming my way. Each will have a new flavour. I was thinking of following another section to this One Shot on Pia seeming as the first part belonged to ANGEL:::

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu
beautifu and fantastic. amazing it is

:::This didn't take me an hour to write all my FF's take over 2 hours mostly upto 3 hours:::

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ilove99
its amazing ayesha👏i loved every bit of it!angel i just... am so in love with her😆superb!

:::Angel by name Angel by nature😳::

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: rehanasadique
i wishhh he bites pia in real life too...this bratty pia would be having no prob for becoming a vampire i guese ...she would be happy.it was tht old pia who was upset becoz she wanted to look gud in evry one's eyes.

:::There is plenty of time for her to turn for now just see their story unravel. I want her to see the light:::

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: _Monu_
Omg what a beautiful os
also touching ...angel was cute n intelligent
she went 2 bring her dad back by herself
without saying 2 her misha aunty n jay uncle..lol
she made me smile more
sooo good ...n abhya reunion ...
the ending was deserving ...=)
n loved ur writing a lott
see uuu soon
love yaaa

:::Angel is fearless just like her Father Abhay. She gets the best of both worlds from her parents😃She is also rebellious so will go to any lengths to protect her Mom just like her Dad even going behind her Uncle and Aunties back. The nest part will solely concentrate on Pia. I've had a request to further this OS so i will do it for her but only one update so we understand why Abhay did what he did? Pia's memories flooding back and her transformation. Angel will be present as well reuniting her parents for good. Jisha will have a small part to play.:::

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: missglam

Awesome o.s!
Abhay & pia's daughter. . Wow! U r amazing. . Ur imagination, creativity,writing skills r superb!

:::I thought why not have ABHIYA'S daughter reunite her parents. Its something not done before by me. Most of my FF's have had both Abhiya be together when they are with child. So its something fresh from my side😃:::