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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Good job Iqra...

Must say the additions have made the update more interesting...
Party at Dobrials means something is gonna happen...
Waiting for that

thank xx yaar n there will something happedning at the party

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Posted: 13 years ago
Heey ths is soo good yaar <3 continue sooon <3 and yeep pm me 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey glad u pm me
love it
piya is so rude to abhay na
waiting to see how they meet again
cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

hey glad u pm me
love it
piya is so rude to abhay na
waiting to see how they meet again
cont soon

thank xx

n yh same .. they meet in very exciting way

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Posted: 13 years ago
chap 11

recap on pg - 22
Dobriyal house

piya's bedroom
panchi has juz came bak from usa and has gone to meet her firends this juz leaves piya to plan an amazing party for panchi .. right piya is in her romm writing the list of piya who are coming to the party!!
DAM "i have soo much too doo " i will ring ppl first ! piya rings misha ..
piya: "hi misha"
misha : "hey piya wats up"?
piya: "nw am juz ring to let u know that there is a party at my house today"
misha: wat for ?
piya:"mish hw can u foget panchi came bak today that why there is a party remeber we were planing it .."
misha:"ho shit yh i totally fogot panchi is gonna kill me if tell her that i forgot that she was coming today"
piya: "hahah poor u misha dont worry i wont tell her i dont want u to be dead not today anyway! right the party is today pass on the message to all our friends and make sure that panchi does not find out beacuse she does not know bwt the surprise party."
misha: "ho soo u can see dead any other bt not today .. thank you very much piya am going to kill my self .."
piya : "NO am only joking u know that right" !!
misha: "yh i know am joking too u know am not like that "
piya : mish i know u very well ok remember dont be late for the party come early coz i might need help ok
misha: i will be early juz for uu
piya:ok bye bye
misha: bye piya see u later

piya finish the call and put her phone on the table and then went to the bed.. when she sat down on the bed she pulled out a wood box from under the bed. the wood box was brown with a golden bow on one conner she carefully put the box on the bed and she opened the bow with care soo the bow stays safe. inside the box piya kept her memories the most memories in her life. in there box was a pictures of a little girl she picked the picture up and held it close to her heart and she started crying..
piya: "why ? why ? why ? why are u not with us today ? we all miss you !!" then she put the pic down and look at the other pictures of the little girl. (talking to the picture ) every one is happy today u know panchi came bak from USA and we are having party! i know u love parties ! i sooo wish u were here today with us with ur family .. i see the look on mum faces when sees me and panchi together she wishes u were with us .. she misses uu .. i can see that her eyes alway missing uu and hoping that u were with us one day !!it feels very different not having u around its like one part of my family is missing .. like a missing charm of a bracelet! i still have hope i wish u i meet uu some day.
i wish u came bak to uu family .. i hope we can find .. uu !!
piya (saying it to her self ) stop it .. dont make this happy day into a sad day.. stop crying .. yh am not gonna cry she wipes her tears and put the picture bak in the box and then put the box backs to where she got it from ..
(piya talking to her self ) less go piya u have lots of work to do !
piya then getts her phone and goes down stair ther living piys mum mudhu is siting in the sofa and writing something down ..
piya: "mum wat u doin?"
madhu: " nothing beta am just writing the list of ppl who r comming i have to invite them u know..
piya: mum u leave everything to mee i have already done that mum .. u dont worry ok u jus go and take some rest and get ready for the party leave everything to mee and i will do it ..
madhu: errmmm bt piya
piya: mum juz leave it to me
madhu: ok piya i will do as u say
piya: yh mum that my good mum
madhu:piya ur mine worlds amazing daughter.
piya: i know mum luv uu
madhu: love uu too piya ... and then she leaves and goes in her room. then piya calls all the house workers and tells them wat to do each of then has a different thing to do..
3 hours later
every thing was done all the house was decorrates and there was nothing to do
piya( talking to her self) well done u done a great job ho shit piya u gonna be late less go and get ready !

madhu came down stairs
piya: mum u look really nice
madhu: thank u beta and u have done amazing job too
piya: thank xx mum n anit i gud .
madhu: yh u r nw go and get ready leave it to mee i will greet the guest ok
piya leves to get ready
misha comes to the party party and goes to piya's room
piya: wow !!!! misha uu look differnet i means its a party n u are dress like normal .. tipcal boy mish!! messy hair .. shorts with a boy top .. misha and why are u alway wearing balck cant u find a different colour?

misha: mmm (misha thinking ) hhmm coz i like black better then any colour n yh yh i know .. wat can i doo .. i am like that i look really .. n i know tht .. piya .. hahah
piya: ok misha no point agruing with uu .. ok tell me hw do i look ?
misha:well piya wat can i say
u look very hott .. watch all boys will be after uu
misha: piya why u wearing white at a party
piya: dont know coz feel like that .. juz plan . white is the clam colour that why
misha: ok piya bt u do look nice
piya: thank xx mish love uu
misha: ur welcome n luv u too nw less go thr party am getting late
both of then went downstair where every one here.. piya walked around talking to different ppl .. and most of the boys came up to her to talk to .. and saying things . like u look hot .. ur pretty .. more .. the person who has not come to party is panchi everyone is waiting for her ..
madhu:piya beta call panchi and see where she is ..coz all teh quest are waiting for her ..
piya: ok
soo piya called panchi ..
piya: panchi were r u ?
panchi :am on my way home be home in 10 mints
piya: ok am going out and mum and dad not a home they have gone for dinner with there firends .. ok juz goo ok bye .. and mum cooked somthing i think juz eat that ..
panchi: ok bye .. dam no cares that am bak form usa .. no one loves .. mee
piya: (talkin to herself )haha panchi i had to do tht
piya cuts the phone and then went to the font where there was a mirc and she went to say somthing bwt her sis
right ladies and gentle men .. this is held for be beloved sister panchi .. and she has juz come from usa today .. after her studies .. soo she will be home 2 mints .. soo i want every one to hide beacuse she does not know that there is a party going on .. ok .. then after hide the light were and then panchi .. came in ..
panchi:wow there is no one at home.. and then suddley there soo much noise as every one was cheering her name ,.. the sounds came as the lights came .. all the ppl in the party were cheering .. then piya hug her ..
piya: welocme bk sis
panchi: this is wow .. i mean really amazing .. this is for me.. n u lied to mee
piya: soz for that sis n yh its all for uu n u
every one met panchi .. misha and panchi had a chat .. she all n the adluts which were her mums .. mates .. the party was a bigh hit .. all the twon came .. and ebveryone really enjoyed it .. piya was happy she forgot all the saddnes inside her and she totally forgot hw much she was missing abbya .. bt she knew that once she is alone again .. she will get upset and miss abbya .. so she tryed to mess about be londs .. to forgot all the sad things ..
3 hours later end of the party
while every one was leaving the party misha was sat on the sofa with a sad face .. soo piya walked over to her and sat next to her ..
piya:( joking to misha) my sweet Darling .. wats wrong with u ya ?
misha was angry and sad
misha: that funny piay .. u think bwt jokes right nw..
piya:no mish and juz trying to get a smile on ur face ..
misha: well it dos not work ..
piya: ok . tell mee wats wrong ?>
misha: piya my bike is broken .. hw am i gonna go home nw ..
piya:( laughing) thats it ..is that why u sad .. mish .. ur a wiedo
misha: oh .. dont say that .. n who am i > tell me
piya: coz ur sad over a little thing .. i will drop u off home .. and it gives us tiem to talk is wll ..
misha: piya ur great .. less gooo
piya: mum am going to drop misha of .
mudhu: ok beta bye
both of then got in the car piay was driving the car .. the were pasing very dark forest which were horrbile green with huge aount of trees .. piya looked at then at she felt as if she knows then .. she want to see then .. but it was too late .. now to looking at a forest which was hunted..
piya: misha have u ever in this forest
misha: yh once i think with collage .. well u were not there .. when we wnt
piya: oh ok .. i alwys wanted to see this forest bt u dad said not to go in the forest so i never wnet ..
misha: yh tht is the right thing for uu .. piya did u know abbya left .. he left the collage .. and moved a diiferent city ..
piya face went empthy .. tears filles her eyes and then she remember that pain .. hw it hurts to lose abbya ... bt she was a strong and she want to look like cry baby front of mish soo she hid her .. tears ..
piya: yh of course i know he left .. wll i dont know ..
misha: well i though u liked him .. u know...
piya: com on mish .. u know me .. i dont like for too long ..
misha: ho yh i know uu .. u never fall in love with any one ..
piya: yh i know.. misha were are here .. ur home...
misha got of the car and then walk over to piya .
misha: come in ..
piya : na .. not now .. i need to go home..
misha : ok bye piya .. take care and drive safely ..
piya: i will .. bye .
piya then drove of as soo now that they was empthy and she was alone she her tears run down her face .. she was missing abbya ..( talkin to herself ) "abbya i dont wants wrong with mee all i do is think bwt uu .. why why ?? ..."" i think am going crazy ... plz come bak .. i want to talk to uu " juz for onces .." her heart was empthy she felt really alone ..sad and really horrible ...
suddley piays car stoped in the misddle of no where she did not know where she was .. the signs were behide bwt 6 miles . and bwt 4 miles ahead.. (piya talkin to her self ) OMG! am lost ..sugar wat am i gonna dooo .. nw .. she got out of the car and looked at car engine .. ohh noo need some wat for the engine. where am i going to get it .. i think ther might be lake ot steam on this forest ..
soo piya crossed the road and went in the dark forest she walked and walked. Time made no sense to her as she pushed slowly through the thick undergrowth. It was hours passing, but also only seconds. it felt like time had frozen
the forest looked the same no matter how far she went. she started to worry that she was traveling in a circle, a very small circle at that, but piya kept going. she stumbled often, and, as itgrew darker and darker, she fell often, too. she wasvery carefull so she does not hurt her self. she though she could see a lake bt it was still far ...Finally, she the tripped over something­it was black now, piya had no idea what caught my foot­ and she stayed down. she was really cold so she rolled onto her side, so that she could breathe, and curled up on the wet bracken.
note: these voices in the forest at the end part .. is piya trying to be aware of wats happning .. some of it .. she is talkin to her self and some bits she is thinking in the head hope u guys understand it.
also there will be new characters coming .. hop u lot can wait ..
wat will happen next ??
wat happened to pia?
where is abbya?

plzzz comment and tell me wat u like nad hw i can prove my FF

sorry for any mistakes...

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INTRO- pg1
part 1-pg 3
part 2-pg 5
part 3-pg 6
part 4-pg 8
part 5-pg 9

part 6-pg 12

part 7-pg 14

part 8-pg17
part 9-pg 19
part 10-pg 22

plz comment ...love read themm 😊
thank uu xxx

iqra xx


Edited by luv_vivian_luv - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesomeee
omg looove the pics of talor lauter looove him sooo much
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vishnudaughter

awesomeee

omg looove the pics of talor lauter looove him sooo much

thank xxx
i love taylor lautner lots n lotss
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_vivian_luv

thank xxx
i love taylor lautner lots n lotss

meee tooo😳
hey who is that in the heart bubble by taylor

Edited by vishnudaughter - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vishnudaughter

meee tooo😳
hey who is that in the heart bubble by taylor

some one whooo loves hime lots why do think she should not be there ? is she ulgy .?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_vivian_luv

some one whooo loves hime lots why do think she should not be there ? is she ulgy .?

awww you looks fabulous.

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