Mysterious love- Abhiya ff

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Unknownrockstar

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Posted: 14 years ago

Introduction

Mysterious Love

Characters-

Piya jaiswal, a girl of 19,

Aims to become a chef,

She has a family but still lives in Girls hostel,

Abhay Raichand, a boy of 20,

Mysterious boy of the college,

No aim in life.

Misha Dobriyal, a girl of 19,

She is the sister of Piya but doesn't know that,

Tomboy of the college,

Aim to become a Doctor.

Panchi Dobriyal, age 24 years,

Sis of Piya and Misha,

In love with Siddharth Mehra,

Works with Siddharth.

She's totally abnormal.

Kabir S. Rathor, a boy of 20,

Loves Piya,

Aims to be a singer.

Other characters will be enfolded as the story continues.

Index

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Part 2-Page 2

Edited by Unknownrockstar - 14 years ago

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Part 1

I was walking in a Dark jungle, I was not able to locate myself and I heard sound of wolves and someone called me Piya…Piya. I turned no one was there and then someone shook my shoulder and I got up with a jerk and it was none other than sister Catherine.

Sister Catherine-Piya, you alright?

Piya-Oh yes, actually I had a dreadful dream.

Sister Catherine-Oh well, get up it's 8:00 you gotta move fast or you'll miss your college.

Piya-Oh ya! Thank you.

Sister Catherine leaves and Piya goes for her college. When she reached the college she murmered to herself-OMG!! So crowded, koi mile to main class ke bare mein pooch…hey excuse me! Hi I am Piya Jaiswal…Well hi I am Misha Dobriyal…actually I wanted to ask about my commerce class…Oh well I too, class left-side at the corner…ok thanxx…hey kahan jaa rahi ho?...class mein, kyu?...dude class shuru hone mein 20 min bache hai, teachers abhi nahi aay. I was shocked when I heard dude from Misha's mouth. Oh to theek hai…hey chalo na apne bare me batao… oh to main ho Piya Jaiswal, pehele main Nanital mein reheti thi…to tumne Nanital kyu choda? It's a very good place… actually udher mere dad meri mom ko chod diya and he went aur ek din ek car accident mein meri mom ki death ho gayi aur tabse main orphanage mein reheti ho…oh!..achcha ab meri baari…dekho I am Misha dobriyal meri behen ka naam Panchi hai meri mom Madhu Dobriyal aur mere dad Arnav Dobriyal…(Piya murmures to herself) Kya Arnav Dobriyal!! means mere dad..hey piya what are murmuring..nothing..you tell..haan to suno……

Misha tell abt herself and teachers arrive and Misha and PIya were lost in the college.

Misha-Hey! Piya teachers aa gayi chalo class mein.

Piya-Par class, oh no we are lost.

MIsha-Hey don worry let's enjoy.

Piya-Mishaa!!

Misha-Ok..ok.

Piya-Who raha class..u.oh mama a gayi.

Misha-May I comin!

Teacher-Ms. Misha and Piya you are late, par chuki aaj first day hain, I am leaving you. Be careful next time.

Piya sits near a boy named Kabir.

Kabir-Hi! I am Kabir you can call me K.

Piya-Oh well! Hi I am Piya Jaiswal.

Kabir-Hey do you know the girl sitting behind you?

Piya-ummm….ya she's Misha.

Kabir-Naam ladkiyo ka, harkate ladko ki.

Piya-What do you mean?

Kabir-Jab main aaya than a she was a freak, mujhe laga ki koi ladka prank khel raha hai first day, and jab main usse baat karne ki koshish kari then she said-Hey dude! wassup. I said-Cool…Hi Kabir S. Rathor…well hi…when she was going to tell her name any body called her she said-Oh ya babes cumin. I was really shocked phir maine kisi aur se poocha..some ruhi…who next row ki last seat mein she said that who tomboy hai.

Piya-OMG! Aise log bahut rare hote hai…hahahahaha!(giggles)

Teacher-Mr. Kabir S. Rathore and Ms Piya, don't you think ki aaj first day hai to main datoongi nahi.

Piya-Sorry mam, agli baar aisa nahi hoga.

Kabir-y..ye..yy…yes mam.

Teacher-Children kal aapko apni aaj ki assignments submit karni hai is that clear?

All-Yes.

In the canteen, Piya, Kabir, Ruhi, Angad and Misha sit together.

Kabir-Haan to guys milo, ye hai Ruhi and ye hai Angad.

Piya-Hi

Ruhi-Hi

K-Ek min ruhi ko tum tracker bulana. Ok heheheha(giggles)

Ruhi-K!!!!

K-Ok…ok…sorry.

A long chit-chat was going on after the college Piya was walking towards her hostel and somebody came and touched Piya.

Piya-Aaa!!!!!...huff…puff…Misha tumne to mujhe dara hi diya, waise tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho?

Misha-Main tumhe apne ghar le jaa rahi hoon aaj tum wahi ruko gi.

Piya-Par misha…

Misha-Shut up and come.

Piya-Achcha main Sister Catherine ko batadoon or else she will be in trouble.

Misha-Achcha jaao…(5 min later)..aao chalein.

They reach the dobriyal house and Piya is shocked on seeing her father.

Misha-Mom!

Madhu-Oh! Misha…achcha ye hai Piya Jaiswal jiski tum phone par itni tarilf kar rahi thi.

Misha-Haan.

Piya-Hello!

Madhu-Hello bete.

Arnav arrives.

Arnav-Hi Mishes.

Piya turns and is shocked to see Arnav.

Misha-Hi dad!...haan dad ye hai Piya…ye aaj raat yahin ruke gi…koi problem to nahi hai na?

Arnav-Ummm…

Misha-Please dad!

Arnav-Ok fine…achcha haan Panchi raat ki flight se aa rahi hain ok.

Madhu-Theek hai…achcha tum jaao ready ho jaao humne ek party rakhi aakhir misha apne interview ke liye gayi thin a.

Arnav-Haan…haan..theek hai.

Piya(whispers to Misha)-Hey Misha, tumhari behen, Us kyun gayi thi interview ke liye who to yahaan bhi de sakti thi naa.

Misha(replying)-Actually jo interview le rahe the woh ek urgent kaam ke liye Us chale gaye aur interview ki date aage bada nahi sakte the to Pnchi US chali gayi.

Madhu-Eh kya phusphusa rahe ho, chalo meri madat karo.

Piya-Theek hai Aunty.

Madhu-Misha PSP rakho aur Piya ki tarah meri help karo

Misha-Argh!!

Madhu-Misha!!

Misha-Ok mom!

Madhu-Piya beta, dekho agar tumhara man na kare to tum chali jaana.

Piya-Are no Aunty, koi problem nahi hai.(whispers to herself) yeh mujhe ho kya raha hai jabse maine Misha ke father ko dekha mujhe sar dard kyun ho raha hai.

Madhu-Kuch kaha?

Piya-Nahi.

Misha-Hey Piya, kya zaroorat thi help karne ki main Need For Speed ki last race bas khatam hi kar rahi thi and you…Argh!!!!!!!

Piya-Shut up Misha!

Madhu-Misha! Abhi jaao aur apna room saaf koi meheman aaya hai.

Misha-Mom it's Piya.

Madhu-Shut up! And go

Misha-Theek hai.

Precap

A deadly truth

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Guys alll others are sleeping ????

only 2 replies dis is bad.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 2

Madhu was going to her room and a deadly truth she remembers on seeing Arnav's older photographs.

Madhu-Ab Piya ka kya hoga….mujhe use batana hi hoga…Piyaaa….Piyaaa.

Piya-Haan Aunty! Bataiye.

Madhu-Beta jo main batane jaa rahin hoon use dhyaan se sunna…beta tum Arnav ki purani patni Sugandh Jaiswal ki beti ho…

Piya-Kya!

Madhu-…haan beta ye dekho tumhara birth certificate aur ye tumhari photographs.

Piya-…

Madhu-Beta kisi ko na batana.

Piya-…ummm…itna bada sach Mr. Arnav Dobriyal ko nahi pata.

Madhu-Haan beta unki nazar me tum aur Sugandh ek car accident me mar gaye.

Piya-Koi baat nahi aunty main ye sach kisi ko nahi bataaongi (cries)

Madhu-Beta rona band karo varna koi dekh lega.

After hour Panchi arrives. Piya comes down.

Panchi-Hi Mishes!

Misha-Hi Panchi.

Arnav-Are beta tum…jaldi aa gayin.

Panchi-kyun koi problem hai???

Arnav-Nahi tumhari mummy ne kaha tha ki tumhe der ho sakti hain.

Panchi-Misha ye kon hai?

Misha-Are haan main to bhool hi gayi…Panchi ye Piya hain.

Piya-Hi!

Panchi-Hello….(whispers to herself) new comer good, nice treat.

Misha-Hey Panchi chalo na tum hare liye humne ek party rakhi hai.

Misha and Piya go to the drinks corner with Panchi and they ask Panchi to drink but after all she's *******.

Panchi-No yaar.

Misha-PLzz Panchi.

Panchi-no no Misha.

Misha-Panchi who dekho Sid….(and put the Glass full of Vine in her mouth.)

Panchi-Misha!!!...ye kya kiya…main apne room mein jaa rahi hoon.

Misha-Jaldi aana.

In Panchi's room.

Panchi-Ye Misha bhi na….bottle…bottle…ab ye bottle kahan hai…Sid ko phone karti hoon…hello Sid

Sid-Ya baby.

Panchi-Sid woh blood ki bottle kahan rakhi tumne.

Sid-Tumhare bag ke side pocket..waise hua kya.

Panchi-Misha ne mujhe Vine pila di.

Sid-Ohh!!!! Achcha bye

Panchi puts the phone down.

Panchi-Ab Mujhe ***** ki kami nahi hogi kyunki is ghar mein naya shikaar aaya hai.

Piya heard their conversation and was shocked and then saw that panchi was coming so she ran down.

Madhu-Panchiii… aao beta

Panchi-Yes mom!...Piya tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho????

Piya-Kuch nahi…w-ww-wwa-wwas-washroom jaa rahi thi.

Panchi-Oh…(to herself) isne sun liya kya meri aur Sid ki baatcheet….chodo.

Madhu-Beta Panchi aao.

The party continues and gets over at midnight, Misha and Piya went to their room and were talking.

Misha-Eh Piya tumhe yahaan kaisa laga?

Piya-Mujhe bahut maja aaya…Misha tumhari sister kuch ajeeb sa bartaab kar rahi main washroom jaa rahi thi aur maine uski baate suni abt blood and all.

Misha-Are ye Misha ko kabhi kabhi daure padte hain.

Piya-Right…kyunki koi insaan vampires ki tarah blood ki baat thode karenge.

Misha-hey tumhe pata chala ki college ki ek ladki jungle me maari gayi aur uske gale me 2 holes they police kehe rahi hai ki kisi vampire ya animal ka hai.

Piya-Haan ruhi ne bataya.

Misha-Kya Ruhi ne?

Piya-Haan kyun?

Misha-OMG…ha…ruhi jo kabhi news nahi dekhti usne tumhe ye bataya….miracle.

They all keep talking till 5 in the morning and then sleep till 12 o'clock.

Madhu-Mishaaa…Piyaaa…utho dekho college miss ho gaya na.

Misha-no mom aaj chutti hai.

Madhu-Misha Piya chalo utho ab.

Piya-Ok Aunty.

At the lunch table.

Arnav-Misha…Piya aaj tumlog itni der tak kyun sor rahe thay???

Misha-Who hume man kar raha tha.

Piya(thinking)-Ye Panchi kar kya rahi…who kuch kha bhi nahi rahi…kya who….nahi ye sab to sirf fiction hai…par use problem kya hai jabse aayi hai tabse who khane ke samay apne room me jaati hai who bottle peeti hai whats the problem…mujhe aaj check karma hoga.

After the lunch Misha was playing PSP and Madhu and Panchi were seeing TV. Piya went to Panchi's room for checking.

Piya-Woh bottle kahaan hain jo Panchi ne Sid se lit hi….ye rahi…kya (reads the tag) pure human blood for vampires…what!... means Panchi vampire hai…par vamps. To exist hi nahi karte...(a perfume bottle falls down and on hearing it Panchi comes.) oh shit Panchi aa rahi hai kya karo…haan yahaan chup jaati hoon.

Panchi-Kya gira mere kamre mein…oh! Ye to bottle hai par ye meri Blood ki bottle kahaan hain…kya kisi ne le to nahi li…Piya nahi par piya aisa kyun karegi.

Madhu-Panchiii…Panchi beta kuch toota to nahi na.

Panchi-No mom chaliye.

Madhu-Chalo.

After all went Piya kept the bottle and she also came down.

Next day-

In Mount college.

Misha-Hi Piya! To tumne assignment pura kar liya….

Piya-Ummm….haan!

Misha-Pleaze for god sake de do varna mam mujhe chodengi nahi plzzz..

Piya-Ok ok calm down…ye low.

Misha-uff! Thank God

K-Hi Guys! Misha as usual assignment nahi complete kari hogi…

Piya-Ya! Right.

Tun-tun-tun-tun

Piya-Chalo bell baj gayi.

K-haan chalo.

In the class-

Teacher-Assignments ho gayi?...as usual Misha tumne to nahi ki hogi…right.

Misha-Jus chill dude kal weekend main Monday ko de doongi.

Teacher-You'll never change achcha chodo baaki log submit karo.

Piya-Misha do you believe in vampires?

Misha-No yaar they don exists but still papa belienve in them aur inhone to puri library khol rakhi hai vampires ke baare mein….hey ab tum bhi shuru na ho jaana.

Piya-Ok…(to herself) ab mujhe uncle se poochna hoga.

In the evening, Piya was going to Dobriyal house alone. There she stopped for a while and sat on a bench…after few secs. She felt like a man ran quickly behind her…as she turned there wa no one except the Pandher Fort. After a while she heard some thing coming from the fort-Maithali….Abhay….Maithali….

Then she saw a black line passing quickly in front of her then suddenly Misha came.

Misha-Piya tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho? You know na ki is jungle mein recently ek ladki ki mauth hui hai…achcha cha…

Piya(Stopping in between.)-Misha u-uu-us fort se koi chilla raha tha Maithali…Maithali…Abhay…Abhay.

Misha-Piya ab tum bhi na shuru ho jaao…sab log kehete hai ki usme Maithali ka Boot rehete hai.

Piya-Ye Maithali kaun hai??

Misha-Dad se poocho.

They reach the house and Piya asks about Maithali.

Arnav-Beta ye ek princess thi jiski death ho gayi.

Piya-Mujhe bataiye na puri kahaani.

Arnav-Bahut saalo pehele…….

Madhu-Ho gaya…lo juice piyo aur haan ghante me aajana khana lagne wala hai….Mishaaa….Mishaaa….kahan hai ye ladki.

Madhu goes to Misha's room.

Madhu-Misha utho aur yeh juice piyo…aur haan ghante mein neeche aajaana agar Butter Chicken khana hai.

Misha-Kya!!!! Butter chicken main abhi baith jaati hoon….bye main chali.

Madhu-Misha…rukho pehele yeh juice khatam karo phir jaao.

Misha-Theek hai.

Panchi arrives.

Panchi-Mom mujhe 3 hafto ke liye US jaana hai who kuch kaam hai aur business meeting bhi hai to main kal subhe ki flight se ok.

Madhu-Theek hai…chalo main tumhara saaman pack kar deti hoon.

Panchi(to herself)_Oh no agar mom ne bottle dekh li nahi nahi….Mom aap jaaiye khana lagaiye main pack kar leti hoon.

Madhu-Theek hai…patanahi yeh chote-chote bachche kab bade ho gaye….tumhe yaad hai bachpan me koi kaam apne aap nahi karte thay aur aaj apne aap hi karte hai…achcha chalo Misha chalo…stop it ab kal tumhe yeh PSP nahi milega chalo neeche.

In Dinning table.

Piya-Aunty maine suna hai ki aap bahut achcha gana gati hai…

Madhu-Haan bachpan mein maine bahut singing shows me part liya hai.

Piya-To chaliye na ek gana sunaiye.

A log chit chat goes on.

Precap

Exit Panchi Enter Abhay