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Entry #1

abhay ..pia

the magic called love!

Whenever I think about love , I think about my dream boy!! Magical powerful caring lovable handsome and the one who would love me to bits!!

So I think u guys already know what I am gonna say next??

In abhay pia lovestory I see a fairytale!! I girl meeting a boy of her dreams!! A boy who is all those things a normal girl will want to have in her soul mate!! And what was amazing is that abhay reciprocates her feelings with so much sincerity!!

They live they breathe for each other without even knowing! They both may not be selfish for themselves but when it comes to the interest of other , both of them can cross every limit.. Abhay got himself into trouble while helping pia hide her identity ,by stealing the CD misha prepared. And pia got gravely injured while trying to save abhay from the sticky situation!! She even risked the discovery of her true identity by her step sisters!! Not only this she stood up with abhay against her best friend.

Isn't this love simply magical?? So hard to obtain!! And yet seeing these two i feel that each of them had got everything by just being with the other??

Amazing isn't it? whenever abhay touches pia we can literally see the sparks of passion flying between them. And that is so much mesmerizing . I feel a part of their magical world on just seeing them . it feels so great guys!! Also it gives a hope that such love stories do exist . that such love stories can become reality if two right souls meet one another..

Aren't abhay pia a hope for us all?? Seeing them we actually dream about having a fairy lovestory and may be many of us work a little bit more sincerely to make our personal love lives a success..

That's what I feel about abhiya! for me they are the harbingers of magic, of love , of sincerity and of course of some serious steamy passion ..

They say one needs money , stable life to have a feeling of satisfaction..

But abhiya makes me feel that one just needs love to complete one self.

they both suffered from so much pain , regret ,hurt and loss and yet when abhay and pia look into each other's eyes, everything disappears.. what remains is just love.. always love ..

Entry #2

Love turns you magnetic, you move ' they move, you can't part ways because it is against nature. This, I just mentioned shall be only theoretical.

A man bereft of feeling and a lady, essentially alone and reasonably nothing like regular females because of all she's been subjected to in life. He guarantees being entitled to no beating heart whereas she asserts he has gotten a heart of some priceless metal, she believes in his goodness. They are Abhay and Pia, respectively.

They are magnetic too; they just have to be around every moment possible, their togetherness is against nature, their love is forbidden but they do keep falling for each day more for each other, against all olds. That is why I mentioned that theory being completely theoretical.

Not that any of this is true, a two century old man falling for a juvenile female ' fate playing intrinsically the sickest of its games. This is all set up to feed puberty-driven females who go hyper when a fair and hefty man removes his shirt and romances on TV. This is set up for hopeless dreamers who feel they are the same lady who's spooned up in bed, crying to herself inside that dumb TV screen, hoping the hero's on his way to come and kiss away her angst.

Anyway, here it is. I do try to visualize an image sometimes, putting myself into one of the lovers' shoes when I am so useless, I think of TV shows.

Contorted, Abhay is all the time. When I am him, I am pained. My heart, which technically really does not function, beats for just that one lady who gives me everything I need by just surviving. Survives, why? Because even Pia is not one of the happiest fictional characters I have been a viewer to, so when I am her ' my heart which kind of exists now is wrenched, but it is a different dimension of pain.

I wouldn't know what being an orphan is, or what being subjected to so many people's wrath is and still forgiving them and letting go would be like. I wouldn't know what living alone means, when my half-siblings enjoy their father's, my father's riches. What I'd know, as a matter of fact is that the whole world can go to hell when my inhumane man is around me. Just an irrational thought to me, to Pia ' it's the truest truth of her existence.

Kinetic force gets applied on his arrival, the pang of pain in her eyes and the joys he brings along get diffused. Post that, the energy of joy overpowers the pain which is why the pain completely evaporates. Too much science! Basically, Abhay is like Pia's personal gene, which gets her everything she needs ' warmth, protection and support and mostly, like Aladdin's gene ' this fellow doesn't need commands.

I fail to understand why Abhay loves Pia so much, honestly. So I may not throw light on that but alright, she makes him feel alive, helps him feel the rush of anger, his blood-lust and all that. Once he was told by Sid, "Get a life, little brother!" and that was when Pia was born. Since and beyond, she's been giving him life in some way. That counts, maybe! Ha!

It is sheer mirth in the air; they can both feel when they're together and to the worldly issues, they don't give a shit.

Entry #4

Who will not equate AbhIya to unmatched chemistry and intense passion? 'The ultimate forbidden love story of a human and a non-human'. This is exactly how the synopsis of this show describes AbhIya. They're intriguing, they're interesting and above all, they're impossible, they're dark. They're probably the most imperfect people for each other, yet, when they're together, there's no moment more perfect. They are the ultimate wrong couple, yet, when they're with each other, everything seems to be the most right. Isn't this what soulmates are all about? Perfect or not, they complete each other and are incomplete without the other. Why else would Pia risk her life just to know more about Abhay? Why else would Abhay always keep Pia before himself, only concerned about her safety and not his fate? Abhay has lived a life of darkness for 200 years and Pia being his hope, his promise of light has been proven. He might not be able to offer her the 'normal' life she once desired, but now, she desires only him. They're so deep rooted that one can actually sense the intensity and the raw hunger of their feelings towards each other. This is the reason why they're the heart, the soul and the driving force of the show. This is the reason why they keep me hooked and make me want to go back to my TV screen and switch on Star One at 8.30pm every Monday to Saturday.

Entry #6

I like Abhiya coz of many beautiful reasons which are beyond expressible by normal words. First of all , I like the freshness of the couple, in their looks and the wonderful chemistry within them .A complete romance in true sense filled with with thrill, emotion and wonderful expressions. Pia is desirous by any guy ready to fall in love with and Abhay is the dream of every girl.

What I like in Abhay: Abhay is a vampire , a soul-less walking dead among the humans pretending as one of them though more than human . Although he has not got a heart, he has more feelings than one with a heart, feels like an inbuilt heart beating with more efficiency. Always tries to keep him out from humans, yet so close to them, their emotions and pain. Although, he has a legacy to hide, but can't stop himself from helping others.Although he has fierce exterior, he possesses remarkable quality : caring about fellow men.

What I like in pia: Pia ,unfortunate with the term love, never got motherly love nor got fatherly attention ,sweet ,simple and caring. Inspite of such an humble Background, never lost her faith in love. Abhay is the guy of her life. Inspite of so many denials, she managed to understand the bond of their love. She read love in Abhay's eyes .A perfect example of faith in love "pia".