FF : Love's not the name of fear;Update8 on page20 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice start and do continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari_smart

Continue sooon n plaese please add me to ur pm list



thnx pari, it feels gud that sum1 is eager 2 know wat will happen in my FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good update!!😊
do continue soon...
thanks for the pm!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
@all : Thanks for all your support and comments guys. It means a lot.😃

Next update will be up in a few minutes.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Update 2

Abhay comes to save me every time I'm in a danger. I dunno why I keep attracting problems since I'm in Dehradun, like a trouble magnet. But then the black uniformed guy has always appeared as my saviour. I know it was him who saved me in the very unusual rappelling accident. His arms strong enough to take my weight so easily, was even a greater shock. Now I'm convinced that he has certain abilities; Abilities that aren't human, I guess. I have to find it now and here I have a perfect plan. I'll thank princess Maithili for it.

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"Hey guys, I suggest we go to the Pandher palace near the cliff. You know the partly burnt princess's palace near Dehradun, where the princess fell off the cliff after being being burnt and thrown through the broken wall," suggested Piya.

"Yes, that's one good idea Piya. I never imagined you too can give a good idea after our breakup," said Kabir.

"Well it's okay with me, atleast I'll get a day off this college." supported Misha.

"I'm well to go there. I think I was the helpless princess in my last birth," overacted Ruhi.

"I'll go where Ruhi wants to go." supported Angad.

"Oh sweetu, thanks baby."

"No problem Ruhi, anything for you dear."

"Stop this nonsense, Tracker," said an irritated Misha.

T '"I'm way Ok, atleast it's better than that zoo. I mean people paying for watching animals!!"

Misha -"Yes they are bewakoof. They can watch you for no cost."

Panchi -"Okay then it's finalized. We will go to the Pandher palace then. It is a good idea Piya."

Abhay '"No way are we going to that stupid palace."

Panchi '"Nothing can now be done Abhay, Pandher has a majority."

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Piya '" Stop flirting with me Kabir. It's not going to work. I'm fed up with these cheesy lines of yours. And most importantly, we are O.V.E.R. now."

Kabir '"Your wish, my command dear Princess 😉. Just don't sentence me to death, I pray!!"

Piya '"Okay you are forgiven for the last time. Now just shut up, we are almost there."

The bus screeched to a halt.

Panchi '"Okay guys, come out of the bus. We have reached the Pandher palace."

The first years' of Mount College got down from the bus and were awestruck by the grandeur of the splendid palace of Pandher.

They proceeded towards the entrance of the palace and were greeted by a man in his late fifties.

"Hello dear students. I'm Raman, your guide for today." said the man. "Now please follow me," he added.

Kabir '"Hey Mish. Please help me yaar. I want to take Piya in my car on the way back, Dad's sending it."

Misha '"Kabir I'm not going to help you anymore. Stop it."

Kabir '"Piya only hinted me for it."

Misha '"Then I have an idea. You have come to this palace before, haven't you Kabir?"

Kabir '"Yeah."

Misha '"Then become her guide, man. Show her the palace around and ask her."

Kabir '"Thanks Champ! You really are a lifesaver!!"

With this, Kabir ran away.

Kabir '"Hey Piya, leave this stupid guide. I've come here before and I can be a better guide for you, not boring you know." winked Kabir.

Piya said giggling '"Okay Kabir. Let's go."

"Why are you carrying this bag Piya? What's in it?" asked Kabir.

"It's nothing Kabir." told Piya.

"But it looks heavy."

"Don't worry Kabir. I'm fine."

They ran up the stairs in the palace.

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Edited by atulya96 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
thats so sweet

i luv abhiya here
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
Hey, nice update...!!! The gang's convo was awesome!
What's in the bag??
Update soon..
Luv,
Nidhi. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
Hey Dear Nice Update.. Loved Kabir-Piya's short talk.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lolz.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
Super interestng..do update soon & pm me..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
nice part!!😊
do continue soon.
thanks for the pm!!😃

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