OS: O Re Piya - Page 3

Originally posted by: CT247

Kanky!!! that was brilliant!!! I loved it completely!! I got so engrossed it in I didn't want it to end!!! Keep it up!! and thanks for the pm!!

Originally posted by: sugaryanu

Arey I did't mean it like that. It's just that you write so beautifully and your words have deep meaning. And all this at such a young age. Its a compliment. 😳

Oh silly me. I just felt there was a story there similar to AP so...And so it proves I didnot understand the OS right. :P

You are welcome hon. :)

Originally posted by: amail1601

@kanky...I updated my post on page 1. honestly, I didn't know what to write, since very emotional things just make me go all speechless or jokey.......and that's how this story was - extremely intense..brilliant!

Originally posted by: sanjna4

hey it is beautiully written and all emotions were pen downed perfectly............. bt at last part i ws literally crying............ it was indeed very trageic end

Originally posted by: havokhotline

That was just so beautiful, Kanky. You make me wonder sometimes, forgive me if this offends you, what sad incident in your life propells you to write so emotionally.

That was very well described and well written too. Writers like me resort to humour and sarcasm but you're just emotion through and through.

Words cannot describe how well that was written. I really want to see you publish someday. Brilliant.

:)

Originally posted by: kritishah3

Wow Kanky this is truly Amazing....I m Spell bound reading this OS...U are a Brilliant writer Sweetz....Simply Wonderful......I loved how u have connected the O re Piya song with the story.....Keep Going!!! Thanks for the PM dear...❤️

I wud love reading ur write ups in future as well do pm me in future as well ❤️ ❤️

Originally posted by: MagicalKash

Wow.Really wow. This is one of the most deep piece of writing I have ever read on this forum.You really went inside that tomboyish, lost in the teenage world girl's head and strangely enough I could understand each of her emotion. I could perfectly makes sense of all the thoughts running through her head, why she did, what she did even the cutting habit of her made sense. To me this girl in your story wasn't being insane but she was very much like me or anyone I know. You have really beautifully sketched this character and her emotions. You write beautifully and I just read you are only 14 ! Wow you know you should think about writing professionally like seriously!
I would really love to read your future one shots. Plz pm me if you write more!:)

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

Thank you very much, I am elated. 😊

P.S. I am sorry, you cried!

Originally posted by: abhaylove

Beautiful post , so intense , breathtaking.U went deep down the feeling as if it is real as it is hard to take it.

U are very good writer with such depth.

Love it !!