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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: zoozoo123

Pls...............................Continue ......................soon


Thanku ... I will update by tommorrow....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ttrrss

plzzz..continue....seems to be interesting...

Thanku ... I will update by tommorrow....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aromal

hey well written it give tears in my eyes 😭

well waiting for your next update !!!
love it so much !!👏


Thankuuu really i was awaited for your comments ... Really am thankful ..🤗Will update by tommorrow...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ridwana1234

PLZ CONTINUE ITZ AWESOME

Thankuu will update by tommorrow 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i loved it why dont you make it into a ff and continue seriously its awesome do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok friends Thankss a lot for all your comments..... 😛

So am updating next part for you.....😊 Hope you enjoy ...

Pia enters into his room and calls "Abhay !! "

Abhay turns and sees Pia and feels like giving her a hug at once ..🤗

He approaches anxiously .. with a happiness tuned in his heart... 😳

But Pia turns aside and she doesnt want to face Abhay.... She says "Abhay ... Why are doing this?" "Why this happening to me only.. "
Abhay left with tears 😭 " Pia what did I do? I am not reason for anything that had happened "
Pia turns to Abhay and says " Why? I dont know why I am thinking about you?"
"Why did you havent said me before about the reality of ur life ? Kyun Mujse chupana? "
" Do u think That how can I do this Abhay... I even cant imagine... 😡"
But still I dont know..

"I dont know why .. I want to go away from you ... But I cant ... "
"I dont know why ... I hate you ... But I need you too... 🤔"
"I dont know why ... I was really really missing you when I am away from you.."😔
"Why all this is happening to me Abhay ? "😲

Abhay in a frustrating manner...😡
"Bhuul Jao Pia...
Sub kuch Bhuul Jao...
Jus forget me... "
Pia interrupts "But I cant Abhay ! "
Abhay shouts " U should .... Bcoz I am not the correct one for you .. 😭"
"Jus leave me ... or I only go away from you .... 😔"

Pia sees the same Love in Abhay's fiercing eyes ... which She had seen before when she wore Maithili dress ....

Abhay : "Pia ... for many long years ...
or else even after centuries ...
Only Maithili can be my soulmate...😔 But she was not there with me now...
I am not the Human that you want ... I am not the one you expect ...
This world is unreal pia ... The persons live here are unreal... I think you know that by many instances...
I am real to myself ... I am real to my heart ..
May be I am not as sweet as you think... But I am what I am ..."

Pia stand still in confused state ... 😕 Abhay approaches her and holds her in his arms and seeing into her eyes says..
"Apna khyal rakho"🤗

Abhay says "Pia ... I never ever face you again ... Sorry if I did anything wrong "
"Never try to talk with me again ... Bye... "😭

Pia is left in a depressed and confused state ... 🤔 She even wants to stop Abhay
But he leaves away......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: koyal-kajal

i loved it why dont you make it into a ff and continue seriously its awesome do continue


Thank you... I will try it for sure if you want ... 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Friends Please press like button ... If u like..
and comment any thing I would be really delighted ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mostly awaited for your comments plsss..... 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res!
wil comnt aftr reading!😊

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