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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ka7eela


thanks for the info very enlightening ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† so now i know, i will never use the word Mohbbat in my FF๐Ÿ˜› or people will make fun of the dialogs ๐Ÿ˜†

@blue woooooooo! he confessed his love for you!๐Ÿ˜ฒ

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†depends on how you use it.....it looks okay while reading....but hearing it being said lover-to-beloved or vice versa seems a li'l weird. Tongue
er...nooo!!! my poor Hindi teacher was trying to make me spell the word correctly. it was her favourite trick - sheTongue knew what words I am definitely going to spell wrong, and then she would tell me about its etymology to get me interested and ensure that I won't forget the spellings. ๐Ÿ˜† she did give me roses on my birthday once though. ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yes, I Agree with u. The things she said were illogical. BUT, she is in no stage to think logically. She is in shock, and at this point, the only thing that matters to her is that abhay is a blood sucking vampire. He isn't even a person! So I feel that the writers have not done anything wrong by giving piya illogical dialouges. She is in no state to think clearly about all the things abhay has done for her!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: amail1601

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†depends on how you use it.....it looks okay while reading....but hearing it being said lover-to-beloved or vice versa seems a li'l weird. ๐Ÿ˜›
er...nooo!!! my poor Hindi teacher was trying to make me spell the word correctly. it was her favourite trick - she๐Ÿ˜› knew what words I am definitely going to spell wrong, and then she would tell me about its etymology to get me interested and ensure that I won't forget the spellings. ๐Ÿ˜† she did give me roses on my birthday once though. ๐Ÿ˜‰


i see, so the teacher is a she and not a he my bad๐Ÿ˜›

@ bold now you sound like a Hindi teacher your self๐Ÿ˜†
@ blue oh thats ok ๐Ÿ˜›unless she gave you something more then roses like half heart of a pendant for example๐Ÿ˜‰!๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: baby_doll_2305

yes, I Agree with u. The things she said were illogical. BUT, she is in no stage to think logically. She is in shock, and at this point, the only thing that matters to her is that abhay is a blood sucking vampire. He isn't even a person! So I feel that the writers have not done anything wrong by giving piya illogical dialouges. She is in no state to think clearly about all the things abhay has done for her!


I feel i am repeating my self, see being shocked and angry is different then being just shocked!

her dialogs would have been justified if Abhay was attacking her or abusing her so she gets shocked and angry! but he has just saved her life from fire and she sees him and says bachao bachao , help me!! DUH!

and then runs and feels disgusted and calls him a beast, tell me when did he behaved in a beastly manner with her? he was always like an angel to her and she has seen his heroic acts and loving care

i still say its illogical and nonsensical dialogs!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ka7eela


i see, so the teacher is a she and not a he my bad๐Ÿ˜›

@ bold now you sound like a Hindi teacher your self๐Ÿ˜†
@ blue oh thats ok ๐Ÿ˜›unless she gave you something more then roses like half heart of a pendant for example๐Ÿ˜‰!๐Ÿ˜†

it's ok...happens. ๐Ÿ˜†
๐Ÿ˜ฒHindi teacher? ma'am will commit suicide if that ever happened. ๐Ÿคฃ
lol...no pendants. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† actually, someone had given her a bouquet for new year's...and she was feeling bad coz I was roaming around alone on my birthday coz normally the birthday person gets chamchas to hang out with, so she gave it to me. ๐Ÿคฃ
waise it's so weird about the language - someone said 'vichitra praani' in the college the other day, and everyone was asking what's that....it was something like it's cool not to know Hindi. one wrong word and they come eat you up. Tongue
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
completely agree...the writers need to pay attention to the dialogues they write and the impact those dialogues could have
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: mahi0809

completely agree...the writers need to pay attention to the dialogues they write and the impact those dialogues could have


@ bold so true! the dialogs have a major impact on the whole story and how it proceeds!


Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Kaheela,
Sorry for replying a little late. I hadn't seen the episode yet so, I watched the episode first and then came running to reply in your post. ๐Ÿ˜‰
I completely agree with you. Even though Piya was horrified, or in a state of shock that still didn't give her any reason to call him "Darindsa" (monster) in spite of everything that he has done for her. ๐Ÿ˜•
First of all, let us not forget that she already thought that he might be a vampire and had her doubts which was why she was doing all that research and experiments on him with silver and everything. So, she was already aware of the fact that this guy is not a normal human being and he might possibly be a vampire. So, why the hell wasn't she afraid then and kept herself away from him at that point??? She had done all that research on vampires and thought of him as one so, she should've known what to expect and what she was getting herself into!
Why was she so after him to reveal his identity and admit that he is a vampire...............isn't this what she wanted!!!! So, why the hell is she cursing him of being a monster when she herself already saw so many signs of him being a vampire and yet in spite of him trying to keep her away from him she still kept interfering in his life.
He kept telling her that she didn't have the ability to bear his truth and he was damn right but, the girl still didn't understand and kept pushing him. In spite of her stupidity to put fire around her the guy was forced against his will to show her his real identity just to save her. I don't know what she was expecting him to be if not a vampire, was she expecting him to be some glittery superman?? Didn't her research tell her what a vampire looks like?
You know when I saw the movie, "Nosferatu" when I was little.........now those are the real damn vampires before Stephanie Myers changed vampires' image by showing Edward Cullen like a every girls' fantasy type lover.
Anywayz, the movie, "Nosferatu" scared the shit out of me especially how the way the vampire used to walk and stare at people like a mentally retared psycho!
I remember going to sleep at night with the fear that a vampire might pop out and suck my neck out ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I was just a kid. ๐Ÿ˜† I used to hate vampires and didn't watch any vampire movie after that until Twilight came out! So, if I was in Piya's position and I feared some guy being a vampire I would stay away from him as much as possible in the very beginning especially after what I have seen of vampires to be. He wouldn't need to tell me to stay away. ๐Ÿ˜† But, since, he saved her life so many times, never harmed her, and she knows somewhere that he cares for her, he loves her, and never lets any harm come to her then I don't find any reason for her to call him a monster, there should still be a sense of respect towards him becuz, of all that he has done for her not for what he is.
I mean I would've probably mellowed down to understand that if he was indeed a monster he wouldn't have saved my life so many times.
What is ironic is that she kept saying that "her life is his amanat" and in that span of a second, all of a sudden he is a monster that she regrets loving?? And she herself told Kabir, that he "has a good heart." How is he a monster who saved her and friends lives so many times? How is a person a monster who has the compassion to feel others' pain?
I feel bad for Abhay becuz, from the precap it seems like he was crying with agony to see her being disgusted by him like this. ๐Ÿ˜ญ
I think this show has the most lousiest dialogues ever and many of the dialogues are repeated in every episode! Abhay's parents are always flexing their neck muscles and always hissing while Abhay is always shushing by putting his finger on Piya's lips! ๐Ÿคฃ
And I noticed that the vampires always have to say something in english and repeat it in hindi! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I don't know how many times I have heard Abhay say "Aag hoon mein jal jao gi" or "tumne mere ander ke jaanwar ko jaagya hai" ๐Ÿ˜†LOL and Haseena after lecturing Abhay she always ends her lecture with, "You understand that!" hisssss LOL ๐Ÿ˜†
And Piya, she uses the word "Why" like a million times in every episode. She is always gasping, "Why Abhay Why?" Whyyyyy?" ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
Edited by lighteningbuzz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: ka7eela



ok guys i have seen topics bashing Piya and few other defending Piya for her reaction in the precap!

So my topic isn't about that, its different,๐Ÿ˜‰ this one is addressed to the writer, who wrote Piya's dialogs๐Ÿ˜†

i can understand if you show her shocked after witnessing Abhay's horrifying transformation, i can justify her initial shock and being terrified, horrified, scared, frightened, traumatized..etc ( i can still bring other words but i think you got the point๐Ÿ˜†)

It also would have been justified if she fainted from the shock or even ran away from him at that point.

However Piya calling Abhay darindsa aka a beast, a monster! that can never be justified, seriously what were you thinking?!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜•

let me explain my self, i will remind you of your own story track!

Piya never saw him act beastly with her, though he had so many chances of being alone with her!

Moreover he saved her life umpteen times from life threating situations and from Danish and mobs, if it wasn't for him she would have been dead by now!, and he saved the lives of her friends too, as he has rescued Maya twice and stood by her without any hidden agendas, and he had rescued Misha and tracker too, and Piya knows all these facts!

She also has experienced Abhay's tender, loving and caring side, when he carried her and cured her ankle in the woods, when he kissed away her wounds in the class, when he revived her back to life in the hospital, and when he tucked her in the bed! and reassured her that he would be there for her and nothing could happen to her on his watch!

So to show Piya callng him a beast, a monster after all this, after she has experienced and witnessed by her own eyes all of Abhay's heroic acts and his tender, caring and loving side is very illogical! it goes against the human nature!

Again i say her initial shock is justified but her dialogs are not, she was shown doubting him and was disgusted about how could she fall in love with a monster?!, have she forgotten, if it wasn't for the monster aka Abhay she wouldn't have been alive nor her friends too! have she forgotten that he has asked her time and time again to stay away from him!!

so dear creative team please pay attention on the dialogs more, its an advice you can take it or leave it, your choice!๐Ÿ˜Š


you have exactly said that yesterday I said little bit in Pocu's post..
I totally agree with you.. I also did not like the word "Darinda"... ๐Ÿ˜ก
Kind of felt bad word for Piya to use for her love..
Abhay never harmed her or anyone.. He always helped her when she needed.. he infact helped others too when they needed breaking his vampire clan rules to save Human..
He saved Misha during earth quake, he saved Tracker, he helped Piya to expose Danish.. he has helped others .. never harmed anyone (only bad people like Danish or those three goondas in Jungle incident..)
How can piya call him Darinda and repent on her love.. I understand from her POV, she is in shock that she saw him as a vampire,... But she had many clues that he is not normal or human.. he is extra ordinary.. wasn't she doing research on vampires.. she had strong doubt that vampire might be vapire as he is allergic to silver.. then how can she react so badly that she was not at all expecting this... kind of hype...
Again i say her initial shock is justified but her dialogs are not, she was shown doubting him and was disgusted about how could she fall in love with a monster?!, have she forgotten, if it wasn't for the monster aka Abhay she wouldn't have been alive nor her friends too! have she forgotten that he has asked her time and time again to stay away from him!!
I very well agree with you on this.. If her love is strong, shock is enough.. but she should not disgust for loving him.. I felt bad for that part... not bashing for Piya.. but to CVs to pay more attention on dialogs...
thanks for creating post... although I was bit late today on replying....
Edited by purva_j - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ka7eela



@ blue๐Ÿ˜† thats what happens when you have a team of writers who don't agree with each other or don't contact each other ( just my guess)๐Ÿ˜†

@ brown true when we are angry at someone or someone hurt us we become very emotional and end up blurting out awful things that we don't mean, but Piya's case is different! Abhay didn't hurt her and he wasn't attacking her! if he was then i could understand!

on the contrary he has saved her life so what she says is not justified even if she was in a shock state of mind

@red i have seen the precap twice , and i am sure she wasnt cursing the situation she was disgused from her own self for falling for a beast and she called him a monster, tell me when did he behave with her in a beastly manner ?, how could she
, moreover she suspected him to be a vampire so now she knows she behaves so badly!

@black, true but they felt disgusted before they knew them well, for example Beauty fell for beast after knowing him well how good an caring he was

but Piya already knows Abhay very well, as she has seen his good side, his tender and loving side so how can she still feel disgusted!!

@ pink i beg to differ an infatuation doesn't make a girl behave like Piya was behaving, from whatever we have seen, she is already madly and deeply in love with him

@purple yepe it will go stronger for sure as it is an immortal love between two who belong to different worlds


I don't disagree with you Kaheela. I don't even know why I defending Pia. May be just for Abhay's sake. May be just in the hope that she is his future immortal love and may be I don't want to develop any disliking for her.

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