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So my topic isn't about that, its different,😉 this one is addressed to the writer, who wrote Piya's dialogs😆
i can understand if you show her shocked after witnessing Abhay's horrifying transformation, i can justify her initial shock and being terrified, horrified, scared, frightened, traumatized..etc ( i can still bring other words but i think you got the point😆)
It also would have been justified if she fainted from the shock or even ran away from him at that point.
However Piya calling Abhay darindsa aka a beast, a monster! that can never be justified, seriously what were you thinking?!!!!!!!!!!😕
let me explain my self, i will remind you of your own story track!
Piya never saw him act beastly with her, though he had so many chances of being alone with her!
Moreover he saved her life umpteen times from life threating situations and from Danish and mobs, if it wasn't for him she would have been dead by now!, and he saved the lives of her friends too, as he has rescued Maya twice and stood by her without any hidden agendas, and he had rescued Misha and tracker too, and Piya knows all these facts!
She also has experienced Abhay's tender, loving and caring side, when he carried her and cured her ankle in the woods, when he kissed away her wounds in the class, when he revived her back to life in the hospital, and when he tucked her in the bed! and reassured her that he would be there for her and nothing could happen to her on his watch!
So to show Piya callng him a beast, a monster after all this, after she has experienced and witnessed by her own eyes all of Abhay's heroic acts and his tender, caring and loving side is very illogical! it goes against the human nature!
Again i say her initial shock is justified but her dialogs are not, she was shown doubting him and was disgusted about how could she fall in love with a monster?!, have she forgotten, if it wasn't for the monster aka Abhay she wouldn't have been alive nor her friends too! have she forgotten that he has asked her time and time again to stay away from him!!
so dear creative team please pay attention on the dialogs more, its an advice you can take it or leave it, your choice!😊
Cricket
