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pratibha singh

@pratsy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

wooowwwwwwwwwwwww

u r amazing....🤗..............well written

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Rajani-Jadhav

@Rajani-Jadhav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Loved it!!!😊

I think the show will be having the same track...Abhay kidnapping piya and revealing his true identity.

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Ritz93
Yessss... You seem to be in writing mood these days and very creative mood too. You get a line of a news article and you make the whole story out of it. I liked the way you showed Abhay still being in his senses for planing the whole kidnap scene from writing a note for D's to waiting for there call.

He was still nicer, he can't be very harsh to anybody, forget Pia. isn't it?

And Pia, again, the sweet version. She felt bad for all that she did to him. I wish to have this sweet Pia back in the show too. I wish somebody listens.

Loved this one too.

By the way, I didn't get your title...

Thanks a zillion, Ritz!🤗

Ya, even I was like 'Kal toh ek OS likha tha, ab aaj ek aur??" but then, I'm totally jobless for a couple of days because getting back to studies😆

Abhay is a sweetheart! I hope he actually bites Pia in the show😉

Pia, I'm pretty sure we'll get her back! I'm still hoping for Kabir to be back😛

Thanks again!

@Title: I didn't get it either!

Actually, maybe it was like she cares for Abhay but doesn't care who he is, if I make any sense!

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: cutemug
Chillz🤗
u r a dear!!
Loved this one too...⭐️
Since that article,even i've been thinking bout the kidnapping part,😉😆
and you wrote it so well,👍🏼

Again one of my fav's:

"See stopped,but when will you Piya?!" 😆

Thanks, Mugdha!🤗

You're a sweetheart too for appreciating my efforts and encouraging me!

Pia's nosy nature really got on Abhay's nerves didn't it??

Btw, I doubt I'll be taking part in the OS contest. All the characters in 2000 words, I doubt I can handle that😕

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC
👏👏Awesome is the only word..Chilz..God..I think the jungle scene will be same way..!!👏

Thanks a lot!!😃

I don't know, maybe it will, maybe it won't. We can always hope, right?😳

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: 247happy2bme
Wow Neethzy!!! U r in a writing mood... i m loving it..
Simply superb yaar!!! Loved it...... 👏 Just speechless.... 👍🏼
I really wish u remain in this writing mood forever!! waiting for da next one yaar!!! 😛 Keep it up.......

Haha! Thanks a lot, Charu!! You're the best🤗

Let's see how long this 'writing mood' lasts. I get over stuff pretty quickly😆

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ka7eela
wow Neethi this was lovely.. me totally love it😳 i can sense the tension and the pain!

i hope they do it this way in the show and not make it a drag! like the way the show has become nowadays

Thanks, ka7eela, for your lovely comment!😳

Me, too, hopes that they don't drag the show! That'll just ruin the charm!

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Pocahontas
I loved the Abhay that i saw in here! Yes, this is the pain , the grief that we saw in Abhay yesterday and you have translated it so well on paper. This is how he is should logically react today - STUNG and VENOMOUS. I loved how he threatened to dig his fans into Piya's neck and threw her 'love and concern' back in her face.

Piya's sorry is genuine but the state that Abhay is in as depicted in your FF , he is in no position to even consider Piya's side. You underlined Piya's helplessness so well. It is no mean feat loving someone like Abhay.

Love and luck always,❤️
GOD bless everyone. 🤗

Yes, Abhay's reaction is totally natural. He's in no position to even consider Pia's side of the story and even though, one feels bad for Pia because she intended no harm but still, one can't help but side with Abhay. She's luckily that he only 'threatened' to dig his fangs.

Thanks a lot, Poco, for taking time out to read and comment on my work!🤗

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: kaushiki9
its great buddy
wow i was kind of in some dream sequence
like i m seeing d next episode

well written

& u know i think d epi would not b that different from ur post

so 4 u ....
👏

Thanks, Kaushiki! So sweet of you!😃

Episode? Let's wait and watch! It's going to be worth it!

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: aromal
well ur writing this for many days you deserve clap 👏
well written just loved it so much ...
keep writing for me and otherz 😊

love u !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much! I'll definitely write whenever possible! I just need an inspiration, some sort of motivation.

Love you, too!! So nice of you to read and comment!🤗