~my first ff~'Eternal Love'2st part updated on pg3 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ahaan Intresting
do m me newxt time



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Posted: 14 years ago
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thx destiny...i will surely pm u....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was a very nice chp.I like the way the gang mingled with each other.Even I hope that Pia get's a nice room mate.Looking forward to the next chp.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey....very nice ff...gud job....looking forward for d next part....plz update soon....i love all ur posts!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nyc part. .nxt tym plz make it big. .i wanna read more 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey!
Its really interesting, I am looking forward to the next part. If possible, could you PM me?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey frndzzz thx for liking my ffs first part......thank u all for ur wonderful comments!!!!
here is d second part.......
~ Eternal Love ~
~ Part-2 ~

after kats and anu went away to their room..pia was all alone.she started unpacking her stuff...suddenly....
.....knock..knock...
pia-i think my partner has come..plz bhagwaan koi achi ho!!!
she opens d door ...and finds a girl wearing glittery top and a short skirt...she looked very fake...she was none other dan "tanushree mehra" better known as "T".miss attitude of d college ...(PLAYED BY-shweta gulati).....but she's a sweet girl from heart...
pia-hello...i am pia..i think u r my new room mate!!!!
T-side haato babes!!! and plz pick up my bags whch r outside...i traveled long and now i am tired!!
pia-sure i will pick ur bags but only for this time..don't expect me to do it next time...
after entering d room..
T-oh my god!!! itna saara stuff tumhara h kya babes?? mai mera luggage etc..kahan rakugi?? plz move it...
pia-tanushree it 'OUR' room...we both shld have equal facilities ...and if u have problem with me then u can leave d room and ask warden for new one!!!
T-ok..ok...naraz mat ho babes!!
pia-i am sleeping gud nite!!!
T-yaa...ok gud nite...
next morning....
pia gets up from d bed...and suddenly she giggled..
pia-yeh kya kar rhi ho tanu??
T-babes makeup!!!! after all boys ko impress karna hai...
pia in mind thinks"itne subah subah shuru ho gyi"
In college......
kats-hey pia,gud morning....
anu-hi....how was ur night?? who is ur partner??
pia-gud morning...
yaar room mate ki toh mat pucho....miss makeup box hai ...
they laughed.. ashi joins dem too!!!
while they were sharing some happy moments.....
a handsome dude on his super cool bike enters d college wid attitude on his face.....
kats-omg!!!! yaar udhar dekho ......
d whole college was staring there....
he was abhay raichand...
pia-another attitude piece is here...
ashi-full show off!!
but i am liking it....
kats-chalo isse baad me dekhenge ....pehle class me chalte h...
pia-lets go!!
they all move to their classes...
abhay too comes 2 d same class....
all d girls got gaga over him...
abhay goes and sits next to pia b'coz there was no seat left...
kats-hey dude its my seat..
abhay-(wid attitude) d one who comes first will get d seat..so go from here and find a new one to fight with b'coz i am not going to move from here...
kats-oye yeh faltu baatein mere saamne mat kar nahi toh...
abhay-nahi toh what???
kats-nahi toh...i will not leave u..tum jante nahi ho mai kis family ko belong karti hun..
abhay-kis family ko???
kats-oye meri family ke baare me poochne ki himmat kaise hui???
abhay-mjhse baat krne ka tumhe itna shauk h...ki tum mjhse fight kr rhi ho...u can sit here..i will find a new place...coz i am not interested in fighting wid u!!!
kats-oh sachi me!! gud for u!!!
kats sits near pia..
kats-yaar yeh toh itna attitude vala nikala...
pia-maine toh kaha hi tha...
kats-iska toh kuch krna padega!!!....
to be continued soon...
PRECAP-
kats plans to play a prank on.....😆

thx for reading.....i am waiting for ur comments....plz give suggestion for d further story if u have.hope u like d 2nd part....




Edited by maaneet_devina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thx sweetie......😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dud ur too good
well written ............
love u
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aromal

dud ur too good

well written ............
love u

aww...thx love u too...

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