~my first ff~'Eternal Love'2st part updated on pg3

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devina..:)

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey abhiyans...

after reading all ur superb ffs....i have decided to give myself a chance and write an ff.....hope u all like it....and as it is my first ff..plz forgive my mistakes......

"ETERNAL LOVE"

~CHARACTERS~

PIA SHARMA~played by sukirti kandpal..

a 17 year old girl.....she is simple, sweet, very charming!!!!! pia is d only daughter of her family..so she is loved by everyone!! she has a reserved nature. believes in family values & she maintains a reasonable distance from boys! she is a resident of delhi but currently lives in dehradun to complete her studies in mount college!

ABHAY RAICHAND~played by vivian d'sena..

he is 18 year old... heartthrob of d college...character reveals as d story unfolds....

ANWESHA RAI~played by priya wal...

she is fashionable girl ...every boy go crazy her...she is one of pia's best frnd....she belongs to a rich family...

KAARTHIKA SEHGAL~played by jennifer winget..

she is bubbly & vivacious girl...fun loving...she loves to play pranks on everyone...

AANCHAL JAIN~played by panchi bora...

she belongs to a middle class family of dehradun..she is an ambitious girl..very shy and conservative...

STORY BACKGROUND~

its a love story of abhay and pia...inspired by d show..its not a regular love story...u have to watch for end...

its also revolves around their frnds....

plz do tell me if u like d story background....☺️

Edited by maaneet_devina - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

wow. .m lukng 4wrd 2 read more. .continue asap 🤗

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Pallavi Sarkar

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Posted: 14 years ago

its nice n interesting i guess

do continue

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Antara Mazumdar

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey luking forward 2 ur story cont soon n pm me on d nxt prt

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Humaira

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello! =D

Nice start. 😃

umm...try including MiYa in it too.. if u can..

like parallel to AbhIya . :-)

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tanya.dsouza

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Posted: 14 years ago

soundz awesum..! aiting for u to start..! cn u plz PM me ur updates..!

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..-Niru-..

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Posted: 14 years ago

write sooon !!loved ur concept !!

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devina..:)

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey abhiya/miya fans....i am here with my ffs 1st part....hope u all like it....

~Eternal Love~

Part -1

first day at college....

pia and kaartihka(kats) enter d college...

kats-hey bhagwaan ....pia itna bda college..apan toh full on masti krenge...yaar iss saal toh bahut maze ayenge.....

pia- voh toh thik hai kats lekin .....

kats-mujhe pata hai tera vahi old "i am so scared"drama....hai na...

pia-vo baat nahi hai...mujhe sahi me darr lag rha hai..pehli baar itne bde college me...yahaan par sb kuch naya hoga...

kats-yaar pia take a chill pill...itna darne ki kya baat hai...jb kats tere saath hai..

pia-ab tu kya saari baatein yahi kregi....chal andar chalte hai ..pehle din class miss nahi honi chahiye...

kats-tere rehte mai class miss krne ke baare me soch bhi kaise sakti hun...let's go inside...

after entering d college..they attend their class...

in their break...

kats- pakaa dala yaar...pehle din bhi nahi choda....

while kats was talking to pia....an ultra mod girl wearing a dazzling skirt-top approached them..

kats saw her...& immediately told pia

kats- hey pia...watch out...koi fashion disaster yaha aa rahi h..

anwesha-hey...i am anwesha..people call me ashi...what abt u?

pia-nice to meet u ashi i am pia..

kats-i am kaarthika...u call me kats...

ashi-hmm...so did u like d college?

kats and pia said together...yes we did...but d class was little boring!!

while they were talking they saw...a simple girl coming who was centre of attraction of d college...not in a positive way rather it was negative...b'coz she belonged to a middle class family..she was ananya...

3 of them felt really bad for her...so they all moved forward to talk with her...

kats-hey..u can join us...my name is kaarthika u can call me kats..

ananya-hello...i am ananya...u all can call me anu...

pia and ashi also introduced themselves.....

ashi- so u have taken ur rooms in hostel??

pia-not yet...

ashi-u better rush babes ...otherwise d best rooms will get reserved....

kats-yes we shld leave for d hostel now.....

the 4 of dem got mix up easily...

ashi leaves for home meanwhile rest of dem go to d hostel...

in their rooms...

kats-yippie!! anu u will be my partner i am glad to know it....yaar ab toh aur bhi zyada maza ayega!!