Abhay-Piya FF: And I will be waiting.Book 1 Ended. - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG....it's so beautiful👏 👏You made me fall in love with AbhiYa even more. Please continue asap😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kritz08

OMG....it's so beautiful👏 👏You made me fall in with love AbhiYa even more. Please continue asap😊

She told me she'll continue. But she's off. Poco, please don't do this! Please continue!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chill_Out

She told me she'll continue. But she's off. Poco, please don't do this! Please continue!

Yeh bhi bahut bada naainsafi hai Lol...this is my last comment here.Don't want to pollute this thread too😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kritz08

Yeh bhi bahut bada naainsafi hai Lol...this is my last comment here.Don't want to pollute this thread too😆

ROFLMAO🤣
No! Not at all!! This thread deserves to be clean and without spams! Can't afford to have Poco mad at me!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Even before reading it, I knew it would be good cuz its written by you Poco😳. You are an amazing writer, loved your Siddhima OSs. Cant wait to read the rest, Continue Soon😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG this so nicely written..i can imagine the whole secen right in front of me..really well writen..cant wait to read more..so please u got to write more..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey *waves*😃.....new reader......it was fabulous OS......loved it....luv AbhiYa🤗........plzzzzzzzz cont sooooooooon..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I love you Nitzi. Seriously, write for this show. I bet the show would move more faster and better if you wrote Abhay-Piya scenes.

This was SO amazing. U gotta continue man. I love ur writing skills!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Abhay was waiting near the car , standing with his back towards Piya and staring at the full moon. His face looked like that of a dark angel who had suddenly been thrust with a beam of white light. His hands in the pockets of his black jacket , he seemed aware of nothing else but the moon. Piya walked out of the Raichand mansion and as she approached Abhay , her head tilted innocently , trying to catch a glimpse of the expression on that rigid and frigid face.

Piya ( walking towards him)- I don't think he finds anything more interesting in this world than the moon. … ( making a face)… he can look nicely even at that white ball but not me. Am I so bad that he can't even say two kind words to me…..( suddenly touches her face)…. Or maybe am not pretty or rich enough to have friends of his stature.

Abhay looks at her talking to herself and walking towards him and the car. He turns towards her – his face still grim but his eyes searching her face.

Abhay ( looking at her )- What's up, Jaiswal?.....Talking to yourself or is there some spirit accompanying you that I cannot see?....( looks at a black gift wrapped box with a red rose in Piya's hands)… and may I know what you are taking away from my house, young lady?

Piya ( defiantly )- I am not taking away anything that is yours. Mrs.Raichand gave it to me.

Abhay ( his eye brows narrowing)- Mom? Mom gave it to you?

Piya nods and Abhay withdraws his hands from the box. He looks perturbed for a few seconds and then, goes towards the driver's seat.

Abhay ( getting into the car )- Get inside, Piya. It is late already and I should be taking you to your hostel.

Piya , her nose up in the air, goes and sits inside the car , next to Abhay. As the car drives out of the huge gates of the ghostly mansion , a beautiful woman with a peach skin and copper hair looks down at the receding car and taps her fingernails on the window pane. Haseena Raichand had set the ball rolling for what she wanted……

The black Mercedes ran on a lonely road in an equally black night under the little lanterns of stars. Abhay's eyes were on the road and it didn't seem like he even acknowledged that someone was sitting next to him. Piya looked very uncomfortable because of the silence between them and it was still a 40 minute distance to the hostel.

Piya ( clearing her throat)- Can I put some music?

Abhay ( changing gears )- No. There is no music in my car. I hate music … ( gives her a side glare)… and singers.

Piya ( taken aback)- You hate music? Abhay! Sometimes I feel like pinching you to make sure that you are human. You hate people. You hate beauty. You hate music…I mean , is there anything you love at all?

Abhay ( nods )- Of course. There is definitely someone I love.

Piya ( curiously )- Who?

Abhay ( with a dark smirk)- Myself. I don't see the need to love someone else.

Piya opens her mouth to argue back but decides against it.

Piya ( muttering )- As if…. What does he think he is ? Gift to mankind?

Abhay ( taking a turn )- And womankind…..

Piya looks surprised but says nothing and chooses to sulk in a corner. Abhay continues to drive.

Piya ( after a moment's silence )- If you are going to sit like a statue for the rest 30 minutes , you can drop me right here . I know the shortcut through the hills.

Abhay ( grimly )- Sure. Why not? So that some wild beasts have you for dinner without ketchup and tomorrow your whole dumb gang of friends screams that Abhay Raichand did something to their precious little Piya…. ( Piya looks angry and Abhay put his hand on the gear)… you really are getting bored , aren't you? Well, am not that bad to my guests…. Let me make this journey EXCITING for you…

With this , Abhay puts the car into the 4th gear and the black monster seems to take off like a chariot. Piya screams.

Piya ( almost jumping in her seat)- Abhay! Are you crazy?????????.... Slow down! We are going to have an accident!...

Abhay ( coolly playing with the steering wheel)- See… now you are entertained, eh?....Don't worry. We are not going to run into any tree or vehicle. Trust me.

Piya ( squealing and shutting her eyes)- Trust you? Over my dead body!....Abhay! Stop the car! Monster! I will die , I am telling you!......

Abhay ( with half a smile )- You are not dying, Jaiswal. I won't let you die…. This easy….

Piya continues screaming and Abhay brings the car to a halt. Everything falls silent. Piya is in tears and literally shaking with fear, her face hidden in her trembling hands.

Abhay ( taking off the seat belt and getting out )- You are home. And you are not dead. Come on , now.

Piya looks up and sees the lights of her hostel and the sleeping watchman. Holding the gift , she slowly gets down and her head is still dizzy. She cannot walk on her feet and she suddenly feels a strong arm around her waist. She looks up and it's Abhay.

Piya ( rubbing her temples )- You are such a monster, Abhay…..i think I died of a heart attack.

Abhay ( making her stand steady )- You are too weak-hearted , Piya. That is another reason I don't like you…. I have this DISGUST for meek crybabies.

Piya ( moving away from him)- Fine, then. Stay DISGUSTED because you are equally disgusting!

Abhay ( his face a shade darker )- Well, then. Let me give you a valid and proper reason to you to call me DISGUSTING.

Piya ( puzzled)- What do you mean?

Abhay ( sternly )- This is what I mean…

With this, he pulls her back into his arms and grabbing her neck gently , he plants a kiss on her cheek as the watchman witnesses wide eyed. Piya , dazed by the sensation of his hand at the back of her neck and the brush of his warm breath against her cheek , looks stunned – too stunned to react. As Abhay looks at her with a devilish grin , she turns on her heels and runs inside the hostel gates , the fragrance of Abhay's balsam and cinnamon still on her skin…..

TO BE CONTINUED……….

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Piya ( muttering )- As if'. What does he think he is ? Gift to mankind?

Abhay ( taking a turn )- And womankind'..


This was the best part!!!🤣 And so true!!!!

And the end! It was amaziinnnnnnnngggggg!!!!!!!! You know what, Poco? I think more than the show, I'll look forward to your updates now!!!❤️


Edited by Chill_Out - 14 years ago

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