Abhay-Piya FF: And I will be waiting.Book 1 Ended. - Page 2

Originally posted by: Pocahontas

Thank you so much.😃.......Abhay had to make Piya forget everything because she shouldn't know that Abhay healed all her wounds. Piya forgets everything when she looks into Abhay's eyes, anyway.😆😆😆😆😆😆.... i will update it tonight. Are you still guessing whose dress is it? 😉

Loved it......Please can u pm me when u update

Originally posted by: -fsn-

me loved it

Thank you, Fattoo.😃

Originally posted by: Chill_Out

This is the first OS I've ever read! Its giving me goosebumps!! Please continue asap!!

Thank you, Chilloo.😳😳😳😳😳😳😳.... i will update it in sometime.

Originally posted by: pakindmuziq

WOAHHH so well written and described! Each moment was like right infront of me. Brilliantly written. U gotta continue this soon. I cannot wait and seriously i wud be the happiest person if this kinda scene came in PKYEK. BUT BUT BUT like in VD i liked tht Damon and Steffan nvr used the hypnosis on Elena and evn in this i don't want Abhay to use it, i want Piya to remember each moment whether it's bad or not.

Thank you so much.😃.....I hope we get such scenes in PKYEK. 😳....I will try and refrain Abhay from using mind cleansing on Piya.😊

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701

Oh Mi Gosh, Poco. The OS is BEAUTIFUL! 😳

I loved it.. I never knew, that apart from analysis, you could do stories that well! Like.. SUPER DUPER AWESOME! 👏👏

I could imagine everything..picture everything, like it's happening right in front of me! Kudos, girl. 😃

Thank you so much, Akkoo. I have been writing fan fics for a long time.😆... I am glad you liked this OS.😳

Originally posted by: NIDIZ

Poccaaaaa....
I culd totally imagine each n every action forming into reality infront of me that was written in u're O.S..OMG OMG OMG..!!It was just lyk sooooo so perfect..!!*Bravao*..
Can't wait for the next part..

Thank you. I shall try to continue it ASAP.😊

Originally posted by: 211su

O-M-G 👍🏼.

And OS from you after soo long .

This is goooooooood. Update soooooon. I could actually picture Abhay Piya. Awesome !!

Thank you, Suppzie.😳....shall be continuing it soon.😃

Originally posted by: Pocahontas

Thank you, Chilloo.😳.... i will update it in sometime.

ahhh.... just loved it... if Ekta kills us with her slow progress in their story at least ur posts nd FF's will calm us down a bit=D
nd well u did full justice to the character part.... lol loved piyas line for the dialogue.... plz continue real fast:)