Abhay-Piya FF: And I will be waiting.Book 1 Ended. - Page 104

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ritz93

Ooh - the cute exchange between Abhay and Pia was so good. Abhay can be naughty 😉.


The best part was Mish observing the whole scene between Sam and T. I mean I liked the convo between Sam and T which clearly shows the soft side of Sam. But why he is never able to let this side in front of Mish? I think, T, unknowingly, will help Mish see this soft side hiding behind the monster. That will make Sam less scary for Mish and bring out the woman in her. I really can't believe that you make me think so deeply about other characters of the story. I almost never felt for other characters in the show. I enjoyed them but never felt them. But in your story, I can feel for them. Thanks for making me understand the characters better.



Thank you, Ritzie.😳 Yeah, Abhay has a soft and naughty side , like we all have. He is in a happy state for the time being and Piya's love is bringing out the soft side in him. Its fun to see them behave like a couple.

Sam connects to T because of their common monster status and he understands what T is going through – he feels responsible towards her because her insane mental pressure and dramatic pathos gets to him. On the other hand , Misha sees him as nothing more than a horror film , and that has affected Sam a lot. He wants to reinstate the faith in himself that he is not just a werewolf , he is a human being as well.


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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part ! 😛
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: koyal-kajal

awesome ...................and majesty nahinnnnnnnnnn

truly your ff really looks like a dark story
but still it was awesome




Thank you. i am glad that you are enjoying the story.😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sumadear13

the AP naughty SMSs were too good n loved the way Abhay could feel Pia's eyes on him....... thank u Pocu



I loved writing that scene as well. i think it was pretty hot even though they were not together in that scene.



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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the naughty abhay and pia sms😉. and also misha calling them ninja turtles. 🤣update soon dear..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Edited on pg140. Yayie, Poco! You're about to finish this thread!!🥳 I don't know why I'm finding that so exciting but I am!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy, great update... awesome really.... Poor T.... n what's this promise that Chaand and Haseena are talking about????
Edited by Antara106 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
fealing nervous abt Abhiya.. pls update that track..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update Pocho..I really liked the small nok jhok between abhiya but the sam-T-misha part was just too mesmerising to read....please continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely one dear
abhay pia were very sweet felkt bad for T and misha and sam are going to rocky
do continue
bye sumi

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