Kabir-Pia-Abhay OS: My life would suck without you - Page 2

This is excellent. I love the whole torn thing going on inside Piya. Kabir's character was awesome. Out of this world.

Originally posted by: matwamango

This is excellent. I love the whole torn thing going on inside Piya. Kabir's character was awesome. Out of this world.

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701

Thank youuu. 🤗

I love your FF, and it feels great, compliment coming from a wonderful writer itself. 😳

Trust me U R great. There is so much depth in these characters. I wish the show was injected with some of this rather than childish pranks. Piya has a huge problem which guy to choose. U have hit the nail on the head. I can tell U wrote this from Ur heart

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701

Kawaii, criticism is most welcome. And btw, I am just about to edit the post and include the fact that the kiss part was inspired from Kawaii's 'Whispers of Silence' OS. 😳 And, the story was supposed to be inspired from Twilight. I'm sorry I didn't include that, but that's how it was supposed to be. But I welcome your criticism, and I will write a 'original' story soon. 😊

I was actually wondering about the kiss y'know! But didn't write that, thought it'd be rude. But the kiss made me go, "Is it somehow inspired by my story 😕?" But chal be! We are fraaandzzz! Chalta hai! all for KaPi! 😉

Beautifully written, keep it up dear👍🏼

BEAUTIFUL ! 👏

Originally posted by: radt

Is this y u were not writing the FF?

This is just so amazingggggggggggggg..........

I am literally speechless........ WOWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!

P.S. I loved this doesnt mean i am not waiting for ur FF update.....😡

Originally posted by: kawaii hime

I was actually wondering about the kiss y'know! But didn't write that, thought it'd be rude. But the kiss made me go, "Is it somehow inspired by my story 😕?" But chal be! We are fraaandzzz! Chalta hai! all for KaPi! 😉

Originally posted by: Nabi.ARti

Beautifully written, keep it up dear👍🏼