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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
Hey friends, Heres the next part-
Pia soch leti hai ki woh jungle mein jayegi.Woh bas raat hone ka wait karti hai.


In Night-

Raat mein sab logo ke sone ka wait karti hai.Tabhi use Abhay ka sms aata hai-Tumhe aaj sab kuch yaad aa jayega Sukriti.

Sab logo ke so jane ke baad Pia jungle chali jati hai. But Misha use jungle mein jate hue dekh leti hai and woh pia ko follow karne lagti hai.Jaise hi Pia jungle mein entry karti hai, waise use lagta hai ki koi use dekh raha hai.


Raaton ki tanhai mein (woh jungle mein jane lagti hai)
Subhon ki parchayi mein (Misha bhi use follow karti hai)
Chehra hai kya (She is remembering Abhay)
Yeh meri aankhon mein (Pia-I don't know abhay mujhse kya kehna chahta hai)
Khushboo hai kya (Pia jungle mein bahut aage chali jati hai but jungle khatam hi nahi hota)
Yeh meri saasson mein (Pia ko ab dar lagne lagta hai but woh phir bhi nahi rukti)

Kaisa yeh raaz hai (Misha-Oh god, yeh sis itne raat ko jungle mein kyun ja rahi hai?)
Jo ke khulta nahi (Jab Pia jungle mein bahut aage chali jati hai tab use darkness mein kuch dikhayi nahi deta)
Kyun mere zehen mein (aur darkness mein Misha ko Pia dikhayi nahi deti.)
Tu hai aye ajnabee (Pia dar jati hai aur charon taraf dekhne lagti hai)

Hota hai jo sawaalo mein (Tabhi use samne se bahut sare bats aate hue dikhte hai)
Milta nahi Jawabon mein (Par woh un bats ko bina dare dekhti rehti hai)
Rehta hai jo khayalo mein (Tabhi use yaad aata hai ki Abhay ke hath par bhi ek bat ka tatoo tha)
Ab tak hai woh hijabo mein (Par woh wapas confuse ho jati hai ki abhay use kya batana chahta tha)
Hai dil ka yeh (woh ghabrakar charon aur dekhne lagti hai)
Kaisa mausam (Pia (crying) -Help me...Help)
Na Dhoop Hai (Misha Pia ki aawaz sun leti hai and aawaz ke direction mein jane lagti hai)
Na hai Shabnam (Pia ko kisike chalne ki aawaz sunai deti hai)

Kaisa Yeh raaz hai (jab woh piche mudti hai to abhay ko samne dekhti hai)
Jo ke khulta nahi (Woh bas uske ankhon mein kho jati hai)
Kyun mere zehen mein (Tabhi wehan bahut sare bats aate hai and Abhay gayab ho jata hai)
Tu hai aye ajnabee (Pia achanak faint ho jati hai and tabhi misha wehan pahuch jati hai.)


Pia's Room-

Pia ko hosh aa jata hai.Jab woh eyes open karti hai tab dekhti ki Misha and harshad bahut tension mein hai.

Pia-dad what happened? Aap itne tension mein kyun ho?

Harshad-Pia,tum thik to ho?

Misha-sis tum itni raat ko jungle mein kyun gayi thi?

Pia-aise hi...Mujhe nind nahi aa rahi thi isliye ghumne gayi thi.

Misha-aur tum chillayi kyun thi and behosh kaise ho gayi?

Pia-mujhe kuch yaad nahi hai misha. Please mujhe ab nind aa rahi hai. Kya hum is barien mein kal baat kare?

Harshad-ok.Good Night.

Pia-Good night dad.Good night misha

Misha-Good night sis.


Raichand Villa-

Avantika-Abhay aaj tumhari is harkat ki wajah se pia humara sach jaan chuki hai.

Abhay-mom woh pia nahi hai.Woh sukriti hai, jo humara sach pehle se janti hai.

Avantika-aur ager woh pia hi hai to humein yeh shehar bhi chodna hoga.

Alisha-don't worry mom. I am sure ki woh Sukriti hi hai. Werna woh baar baar abhay se baat karne ki koshish nahi karti

Avantika-tum dono ko jo karna hai karo. Bus ek baat yaad rakhna, humara yeh raaz kisiko bhi nahi pata chalna chahiye.

Sameer-humara raaz kisiko pata nahi chalega Avantika

Avantika-Oh really? Aaj ager hum sahi time pe jungle mein nahi jate to abhay pia ko sab bata deta. Aaj ke baad raat ke 3 baje se pehle jungle mein koi nahi jayega.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
Hey friends, heres the next part-
Next Day-
At college-
Alisha and Abhay college mein entry karte hai.Pia tab kal raat ke barien mein sabko batane hi wali hoti hai. Par tabhi Abhay use hypnotise kar deta hai.
Kabir-What? Kal raat kya hua tha?
Panchi-Tum itne raat jungle mein kyun gayi thi?
Pia-Bas aise hi...Nind nahi aa rahi thi isliye jungle mein gayi thi.
Misha and Kabir notice karte hai ki Abhay ke aate hi Pia achanak chup ho gayi.
Abhay wehan se classroom jane lagta hai.Pia bhi use follow karti hai.
Pia (holding abhay's hand) -Kal raat tum gayab ho gaye the na
Abhay (looking at her face) -Bakwas band karo aur bakwas baatien kisise bhi mat karo
Pia (angrily) -Tum gayab ho gaye the and maine dekh liya hai.
Abhay (holding her shoulders) -Ager tumhe yeh yaad hai ki main gayab ho gaya tha, to koi purani baat kyun yaad nahi aa rahi hai?
Pia (confused) -What? Yeh tum kya keh rahe ho? Leave me
Abhay-Tum aaj alisha ke sath mere ghar par aa jana. Tumhe sab yaad aa jayega.
Pia-tum mujhe kya batana chahte ho?
Abhay bina answer kiya wehan se chala jata hai.

Shaam ko Pia and Misha Alisha ke sath uske ghar par jate hai. Misha woh purani haveli dekhkar dar jati hai. But pia ko lagta hai, jaise woh haveli usne pehle bhi kahi dekhi thi.
Alisha un dono ko pura ghar dikhati hai.Us ghar mein rakhe hue photos ko dekhkar pia shock ho jati hai.
Pia-Misha, pata nahi mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki maine yeh ghar pehle bhi dekha tha?
Misha-What rubbish? Hum to yehan pehli baar aaye hai.Isee pehle dad ne kabhi humein yehan aane bhi nahi diya
Pia-Par yehan rakhi hui har cheez se mujhe lag raha hai jaise mera is ghar se koi purana connection hai.
Misha-hmmm.Waise Alisha yeh ghar itna andhere mein kyun hai? Yehan se to suraj dikhta bhi nahi hoga.
Alisha-Meri puri family ko darkness mein rehna pasand hai.
Pia-Abhay ko bhi?
Alisha-nahi. Woh hamesha roshani mein hi rehta hai.
Misha-Yaar hum roshani and darkness ke barien mein kyun baat kar rahe hai? Hum kya vampires hai kya?

Abhay Pia ki baatien sun leta hai aur use sms karta hai- Kal subah 5 baje tumhare ghar ke terrace pe aa jana. Tumhe pata chal jayega ki tumhara is ghar se kya connection tha.
Pia use reply karti hai-Ok...
Misha-sis, ab tum yeh sms-sms khelna band karogi? Let's go to home. Werna aaj raat ke dinner mein dad hum dono ko khayenge. Bye alisha.
Alisha-bye Misha....Bye...Pia
Pia-Bye
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
hey good job again!!! this time 3 parts, huh?! nicely done. by the way my name is aarti :)

waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
Hey
awesome update
wonderful good suspence at the end
plz cont soon
jasmin
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
Hey friends, Thanks to you all😊
Heres the next part-
In Night-

Pia ko sapne mein baar baar wehin purani haveli and abhay dikhta hai. Akhir woh us nightmare se ghabrakar uth jati hai.

Pia (sweating) -Oh god mujhe woh haveli baar baar kyun dikh rahi hai?

Pia mobile mein time dekhti hai....5 am and woh terrace pe chali jati hai.Terrace se woh jungle ki taraf dekhne lagti hai. Thodi der baad woh piche mudkar dekhti hai to wehan Abhay hota hai.

Pia (scared) -Tum yehan? Tum kab aaye? Door to band tha na?

Abhay-Sukriti, kya tumhe kuch yaad aaya? Us purani haveli ke barien mein?

Pia (confused) -Tum mujhe sukriti kyun keh rahe ho? And please mujhe batado ki woh purani haveli baar-baar mein aankho ke samne kyun aa rahi hai? Main to wehan pehli baar gayi thi.

Tabhi achanak wehan misha aa jati hai.

Misha (confused) -Pia, tu khudse kyun baat kar rahi hai?

Pia-Akele keha? Abhay bhi to hai (turned back) Abhay?

Misha-Kehan hai abhay?

Pia-Misha i swear, abhay abhi yehin tha

Misha-Pia, calm down.


Pia ghar mein sabko batane ki koshish karti hai ki usne abhay se baat ki thi. Par misha ne bhi pia ko khudse baat karte hue dekha tha.

Pia-Dad, kya aapko lag raha hai ki main pagal ho gayi hoon?

Harshad-No...I know ki tum pagal nahi ho. Tumpar bas study ka zyada pressure aa raha hai. Isliye acha hoga ki tum study se thode time ke liye break lo aur kisi aur hobby mein busy raho. Isliye main tumhe yeh digital camera deta hoon....Tumhe photos nikalna pasand hai na. Aur is city mein to nature ki siwa kuch bhi nahi hai to isliye tum kuch din photography mein hi busy raho

Pia-Thanks a lot dad.

Harshad-Take care.


In College-

Pia and uska pura group ghumne ke liye Hollywood theme park jate hai.Pia wehan sabke photos nikalti hai. Baad mein pia nature ke bhi photos nikalti hai. Pia ka mood ab bilkul pehle jaisa ban jata hai.Shaam ko sab wapas ghar chale jate hai.

Pia's Room-

Pia sabhi photos computer pe dekhti hai. Har photo mein abhay hota hai. Pia wapas dar jati hai. Woh misha ko bulati hai.

Misha-What happened pia?

Pia-Misha, aaj maine nikale hue har photo mein abhay tha.

Misha-Par aaj abhay to humare sath nahi aaya tha.

Pia-Seriously. Tum uske photos dekho.

Isse pehle ki Pia Misha ko photos dikha sake, light chali jati hai.Misha candles jalati hai.Thodi der baar misha bhi downstairs chali jati hai. Pia hairs ko thik karne ke liye mirror ke samne aati hai, tabhi use mirror mein abhay dikhta hai. Woh piche mudkar dekhti hai to wehan really mein abhay hi hota hai.

Pia-Tum aaj park mein bhi aaye the na? Maine har photo mein tumhe dekha tha

Abhay-haa main wehan tha aur yeh hidden camera se mera video record karna band karo (stopped video recording)

Pia-Tumhe kaise pata chala ki maine video recording start kiya tha?

Abhay-Tumhari har baat mujhe pata hai.

Pia-Misha ke aate hi tum gayab kyun ho jate ho? Ager tum har jagah reh sakte ho to sabke samne kyun nahi aate?

Abhay-Kyunki jab tak mujhe kisi insaan ka blood nahi mil jata...tab tak main din mein sabke samne nahi aa sakta.

Pia-Matlab tum jab college aate the to kisika blood pikar....??? Tum aakhir ho kaun? Kyun insaano ka khoon pite ho?

Abhay-Misha aa rahi hai. Tumhe jaldi sab kuch bata dunga sukriti (holding her face).

Isse pehle ki pia kuch keh sake, Abhay wehan se chala jata hai.


Dinner time-

Harshad-So Pia, aaj hollywood theme park jakar kaisa laga?

Misha-dad, abhi bhi woh keh rahi hai ki usne wehan abhay ko dekha.

Harshad-matlab bhi bhi tum us raat ke barien mein hi soch rahi ho.

Pia-No dad...i am fine

Misha-No...you are not pia (Sadly) Dad ager hum sab kuch din ke liye kahin ghumne jaye to? Waise bhi studies, exams ki wajah se kahin ja bhi nahi pate. Hum sab friends Lonavala jaye?

Harshad- nice idea misha...Isse pia ka mood bhi thik ho jayega aur tum sab enjoy bhi kar sakoge.Par tum sab Alisha and Abhay ko bhi sath lekar jana

Pia-Kyun dad?

Harshad- because main chahta hoon ki, tumhare mann se abhay ka dar nikal jaye. Look pia, woh humari tarah hi ek insaan hai. Woh koi bhoot to nahi hai na.

Pia(thinking) -Dad, main nahi janti ki woh kaun hai? Par itna janti hoon ki woh insaan nahi hai...woh koi aur hai....shayad koi atma?


Next Day-

At College-

College mein Misha sabhi logo ko Lonavala chalne ke barien mein batati hai.Woh yeh plan Abhay and Alisha ko bhi batati hai.Woh sabhi dopehar mein lonavala jane ka plan banate hai.

Kabir-Hum sab mere car se chale jayenge

Abhay-Tum log jao. Main wehan kal tak pahuch jaunga.

Panchi-Par tum humare sath kyun nahi aa rahe ho?

Abhay-Aise hi.

Pia (thinking) -Kal tumhe sara sach batana hi hoga Abhay.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: t-mayur-sajan-j

Hey
awesome update
wonderful good suspence at the end
plz cont soon
jasmin


Thanks a lot😊 Ya...
I will update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: helloaamir

hey good job again!!! this time 3 parts, huh?! nicely done. by the way my name is aarti :)


waiting for the next part

Thanks a lot Aarti😊....Ya and ab daily 2 parts update karungi😃
I am sorry...Aarti 😊 Btw my name is Rashmi (not shefali goenka....because shefali goenka meri fav actress thi😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: sana_sajan

wonderfullllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll updates
good going................


Thanks a lot Sana😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
hey
lovely part
hope to find out the truth soon
want them to be together
jasmin
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: t-mayur-sajan-j

hey
lovely part
hope to find out the truth soon
want them to be together
jasmin


Thanks a lot Jasmin😊
Ya...Next part mein pura sach pata chalne wala hai.Infact main abhi next part hi likh rahi hoon😃
Don't worry...Main bhi chahti hoon ki dono ekdusre ke liye kuch special feel kare.

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