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Aneeza

@Niza_Khanie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

anju, sweet heart, thnks a bunch🤗

yayyyyy, now our thread will be all offical looking!!!

radha, u can post the brief updae one in the compilation post, nd sara_armaan can choose any one of the three to put it in ur post for the quotes!!!

❤️

niza

Edited by neezy4eva - 14 years ago

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radt

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Awesome work Anju!!!!!!!

Keep it up!

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shweta.mayurfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

new update

cullens realize it's too late to run.they decide to face them.them emerge out of the thick forest one by one.two males and a female-laurent, james and victoria.

they wish to join them for a baseball game to which they agree.they were about to start for the game when suddenly wind blows and james gets bella's smell.

edward reads his thought and all stand up to protect bella. the three vampires decide to back off. edward tells everyone that james is a tracker and wont leave bella.

edward ,alice and emmet rush to the jeep with bella. edward starts driving like a maniac away from forks. bella doesnt approve of this and orders him to stop...........

hope you guys enjoy.
sorry for any errors

shweta.😊

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Miya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Bella convinces Edward to take her home so she can tell her dad she wants to go to Phoenix where her mother lives. This way Edward can protect her from James and Victoria.

Bella pretends to be angry on Edward in front of Charlie and runs out of the house saying she's moving away to Phoenix forever away from Edward.

Edward takes her to the Cullens house where they meet Laurent. Laurent tells Bella and Edward that James is the real leader of their gang and he is very dangerous. He says James will do anything to kill Bella.

The Cullens decide to hunt James down before he can reach Bella wihile ensuring Bella is at a safe distance from James and Victoria.

Precap: Edward, Carlisle and Emmet out to hunt down James.

PS: Sorry for the mistakes. A request to the next updater- do detail about how Vampires like james are killed. I found that very intriguing in the story.

Edited by -Miya- - 14 years ago

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radt

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

sorry for the late update...

but i'll compensate for it with a real long one!

here it goes!

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Alice and Jasper trick the tracker vampire James and drive Bella out safely to a distant hotel!

In a crowded human place ... detecting Pia's scent would be next to impossible.

Esme and Rosalie<although reluctantly> wear Pia's Overcoats to attract the tracker towards them and keep Pia out of harm's reach!

Abhey, Emmet and Rosalie run through the woods to mislead James.

Initially James is mislead.

But his smelling sense is just too powerful.

He suddenly detects a mixture of Vampirish-smell with Pia's odour.

He is angry and without losing a moment leaves to search for Pia.

As the tracker changed his course... Alice gets a Vision of a studio.

This by chance turns out to be the place where bella took piano lessons as a kid.

They're all worried.

Esme and Rosalie return to protect Pia's Father.

Edward, emmet and Carslile are still tracking James.

Pia suddenly recieves a call on her cell from her mother.

She is astonished to hear James on the Other end and asks what he's doing to her mother.

*contd*

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radt

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

James warns her to Reach the same studio that alice saw in her vision... ALONE.... if Pia wants her mother alive.

Pia is shocked but she agrees.

She moves out of the Hotel without Alice or Jasper noticing and is on her way to come face to face with death.

Pia says:- I have never given much thought to how i would die...

but dying in place of someone i love seems like a good way to go.

This place Forks/ Dehradun has given me so much that i would not mind dying already.

She moves into the studio with the only weapon she could think of... Pepper spray.

*contd*

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radt

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

As soon as she enters she realizes that James had tricked her and her mum is safe.

She is a bit relieved for her.

She sprays pepper into her eyes but he recovers.

He hits her hard ....... her head stikes the nook of a pillar..

then he presses her leg hard...

it bleeds....

he asks her to shout, cry call Abhey for help but she refuses...

Suddenly Abhey arrives on the scene....

He pushes James Away from Pia and runs to pia!

He apologizes for the delay... for her condition... for everything and is about to jump out of the window with Pia in his arms when James pulls him by his leg and both crash on the floor.

Bella is in pain... she's shivering...

James pushes edward far nd bites bella on his arm....

with his venomous teeth...

Edward jumps onto him...

The two vampires fighting...

one hurt Pia lying on the floor covered in blood in incrutiating Pain...

Waiting for the last moments of her life...

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Suman

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

Hey

Could you add me to your list please?

Im also a HUGE Twilight fan :)

And im already a fan on PKYEK

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Aneeza

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

radt, thnxs for the long update, we've nearly finished the whole of the first book!!!! we'll have a party when we start updating the second book/movie!!!

luv niza