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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Destiny-

Aluu hey sweety iloved ur updt well u know what i am planning to writa a FF but Ermm I am not too sure wheter people would like the Concept ]


I hope I just get a good reception for the story
BTW Please Pm me the next time around

Lekha



Hey Lekha,
Glad you liked the update😊
I'm sure your FF will be good, and am looking forward to read it, don't worry and just post it hun😳
Will deffo pm you next time I update which will be tmz.
Love Aluu😳
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Hey evryone, Without any ado here is the next chapter, Enjoy..

Chapter Eight

'Araina where are you, which car are you in.' Ronak had been driving for a while know and the phone had become silent as no one was speaking in that car, so he coulnd get any new update isn't he exact position of them. Suddenly someone spoke again.

'Yes sir I am nearly there, my exact position at the moment is near the valley beach, yes I will reach you in exactly ten minutes.' Spoke the driver.

Ronak realised he was very close to the beach, picking up his speed he reached the beach and saw a car which had just left from there. He was almost certain that it was the car Araina was in. He was slowly trailing behind them not making it to obvious. Ten minutes later the drive parked the car, and pulled Araina out from the back who had already swiftly put her phone away in her pocket but kept in on. Ronal larches a couple of feet away and also started to follow them. Entering the hut, it was extremly dark.

'Sir mein ladke ko ley ayahoon' Said the driver. Inside stood two people.
One was a very short man, who was proberly only five foot five, along side stood a girl, who was taller then the man but shorter than Araina.

'Good, Very good. Tie her up there on that chair.' the short man instructed. 'Good, you may go know' the driver left and didn't notice Ronak who was hiding behind a few boxes in the hut.

With the driver gone, there was only Ronak Araina and the two kidnappers.

Slowly the girl walked upto Araina and grabbed her hair tightly. Araina screamed in pain, were a ronak wanted to kill the girl for hurting his Araina.

'Araina Das, Twenty years of age, one sister and two brothers. Family friend with the Manhortras and the Rais.' spoke the girl.

Both Ronak and Araina were shocked at how she knew so much about Araina.

'yeh tum kaise jantee ho?' Araina asked whilst wincing in pain.
'Mein toh yeh bhi jante hoon ki you are an extra bit friendly with Ronak Manhortra. Why Araina? Tumhara boyfriend hai?' She screamed .

Araina was crying know in pain as the girl was yanking at her hair. She was also scared at how he knew so much about her.

The girl continued to yank Arainas hair and question her, whilst the man was laughing. Ronak know slowly walked the circumfernece of the hut and creeped up behind the mans back. He had picked up a metal rod which lay a a couple of feet behind the man. He got ready and smashd it in his head. The man fell on the floor unconsious. Ronak looked down at him, and placed the rod on the floor quietly so the girl wouldn't notice.

Ronak was confused at what to do, he couldn't hit the girl that would be wrong he thought. He slolwy walked upto the girl and yanked her back with her hair so she fell tumbling back on the floor. Angry, she got up to see who it was and saw Ronak giving her dirty looks.

'Ronak Manhortra, I should of guessed. Who else would of came to save this b**ch' she said in a full anger mode.

Riank angry at the use of her language, went up to her and slapped her hard. She walked back, thinking she would recieve help from her helper, but realised he lay on the floor unconsious. Bending down she tried to wake him up. Meanwhile Ronak went upto Araina and untied her from the chair. Pulling her up, she grabbed onto Ronak due to being scared out of her life. Ronak pulled her into a hard hug to try and calm her down. Araina held onto him for dear life. Whilst holding her her turned around and saw both the girl and the man had dissapeared. He took Arainas hand in his, and walked to the exit of the hut.

'Araina everthing is fine, look they've gone.' Ronak said to try and reassure her.
'Ronak if you hadn't come god knows what they would have done to me' Araina cried into Ronaks chest whilst hugging him again.
'Don't worry I wouldn't have let anything happen to you, Bas 'abb chup. Stop crying.' Ronak said.
'Ronak thanks for saving me' Arina wept.
'Shhh, I wouldn't have let anything happen to you Araina.' Ronak said.
'Ronak I love you' Araina whispered gently.
'I love you too Araina, I love you too' He said beck smiling.

Ronak had been planning for a few weeks now to tell Araina how he felt, but never got the time. But know, he felt over the moon.

'Chalo everyone must be worried.' Ronak said, taking Araina too his car.

'Araina you will never get Ronak, he is mine only mine' said the girl reapearing know.

Meanwhile Shashank and Prateeksha had a lovely drive and where walking on the edge of a cliff.
'Shashank thanks for such a lovely day. Aur yeh jaga kitne kubsurat hai.' Prateeksha said whilst smiling.
'No problem. Im glad you enjoyed it.' Replied Shashank.

Both continued walking, whilst chatting lightly. In these four months they both had become extremly close to each other. Prateeksha also felt that they where know a bit more than friends. But she didn't say as she didn't know what Shashank felt.

Suddenly Prateekshas heel broke causing her slip and tumble backwards. Before she could fall off into danger, Shashank grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him.

'Prateeksha tum teek ho?' Shashank asked.
Not being able to speak Prateeksha nodded, and looked into his eyes. Both kept the eye lock google until Prateksha's phone started ringing. Looking away, she got her phone out and saw unknown flashing.

'Wohh, phirsee.' She muttered to herself.
'Who is it?' asked Shashank.
'Woh pata nahin. Koin pareshaan kara hai.' she said with a scared look on her face.
'Muje doh.' Shashank said.

'Hello' he said in angry tone. As soon as the person heard a man voice, they put the phone down.

'Phone rak deyaa. Kyon hai?' he asked Prateeksha.
'Pata nahin, magar koin admee hai. Chooro, let's go home' She said.

Both Shashank and Prateeksha left for Shashanks house.

Back with Araina and Ronak, that had left the valley and were now infact nearing home.

Taking hold of Araina's hand Ronak lightly kissed it.
'Araina how long ago did you fall in love with me?' Ronak asked.
'Pata nahin, but the first time I saw you, I surly fell for you.' Araina said whilst blushing.

Ronak smiled. They reached the Manhortra house, and both got out of the car. Araina was walking ahead inside when Robak grabbed her hand and oulled her toward himself.

'Today is the best day of my life. I found my love on Valentines day!' Ronakbsaid, whilst Araina was blushing.

Taking the bracket of his hand which he was wearing, he pulled Arainas hand forward and tied it on her hand, making sure it wouldn't fall.

'Araina this the last memory I have of my mum. I've had since the day I was found from the Manhortra's. I was only six when my mother left this world, so can remember much about her, but this is one the most prized possesions I own. Take care of it, an consider it as my mothers blessings for this relationship' Robak said whilst rubbing the bracket.

Araina was touched and kissed the bracket.

'Don't worry, I will guard it with my life.' Araina said.

Both hugged one last time and walked inside the house.

Shashank and Prateeksha had not arrived yet so where still unaware of the Araina situation.

Walking inside, Araina saw evryone present with worried looks.
'Arainaaaa!' Screamed Suhaani who was the first to see her.
Everyone saw Araina with Ronak, and felt relieved. One by one evryone hugged her. Sitting down she told everyone what happened an how Ronak saved her, leavig the love confession bit out.

Millind got up an walked to Ronak taking him in a hug.
'Tumne meri chote se 'gudiaa' ko bachia. Thanks'
'no problem Bahia.' ronak replied.

Evryone sat done and had a famiy chat. They also decided to not tell prateeksha and Shashank anything, as everything was alright know.

Meanwhile in the car, both PraSha were listening to songs and stealing glances from one antoher evry so often. The next song came on.
'this is my favourite song' Both said at the same time. Smiling Shashank put the voice up.

Teri Ore: Singh is Kinng

Dil kho gaya,
Ho gaya kisi ka,
Ab raasta mil gaya,
Khushi ka..
Aankhon mein hai khwab sa,
Kisi ka..
Ab raasta mil gaya,
Khushi ka..
Rishta naya rabba,
Dil chu raha hai,
Kheeche mujhe koi dore, teri ore..
Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore, hai rabba
Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore..
Aaa..
Aaaaa
Khulti fizaein, khulti ghatayein,
Sar pe naya hai aasaman,
Chaaro dishayein, hass ke bulaye,
Yu sab hue hai meharbaan..
Haann..
Hume to yahi rabba,
Kasam se pata hai,
Dil pe nahi, koi zor, koi zoerReri ore, teri ore, teri ore, hai rabba
Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore..
Ek heer thi aur tha ek raanjhan,
Kehte hai mere gaon mein,
Sacha ho dil to,
Sau mushkilen ho,
Jhukta naseeba pao mein,
Ho ho
Aanchal tera rabba,
Falak ban gaya hai,
Ab iska nahi, koi ore, koi chore..
Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore, hai rabba
Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore..
Dil kho gaya,
Ho gaya kisi ka,
Ab raasta mil gaya,
Khushi ka..
Aankhon mein hai khwab sa,
Kisi ka..
Ab raasta mil gaya,
Khushi ka..
Rishta naya rabba,
Dil chu raha hai,
Kheeche mujhe koi dore, teri ore..
Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore, hai rabba
Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore..

As the song finished, Shahank pulled up in his houses drive. Getting out the car, Prateeksha was still humming the song.


Entering the house they saw evryone chatting in the living room. Both Prateeksha and Shashank smiled and went and joined in.

The evening continued and Both Prasha and Arnak were giving glances to one another.

Chapter Nine... Family holiday time. A lot of romance on the way.

That's it for know. Hope you all like it. So I'm going to be putting up a Pm list on the first page but I want to make sure everyone who wants to be on it is. Son anyone who isn't just drop a comment and say. Oh and Pms will be sent out later, busy at the mo.

Cooment and press the like button. Enjoy...

Love Aluu
😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
reserved ...... for the moment😳

Edit:
hey Aluu Awesome Chapter hun Ahem what a save Ronak made šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
And I loved the entire chapter
BAaki ka 😳
Finally Got A story for my FF Finally
I's something similar to High School Musical
Edited by -Destiny- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Awesum update ..šŸ‘šŸ‘
Luved it so very much ..
continue soon ..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Destiny-

reserved ...... for the moment😳

Edit:
hey Aluu Awesome Chapter hun Ahem what a save Ronak made šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
And I loved the entire chapter
BAaki ka 😳
Finally Got A story for my FF Finally
I's something similar to High School Musical



well your first, must be a great feeling šŸ˜‰
and Ronak had to save the day, couldn't let his Araina get into any troublešŸ˜‰
glad your liking it, more of 😳 scenes on the way on tw family holidayy. I like Hsm cannot wait to read it, drop me a pm when you've posted it.
Tc hun😊
Love Aluuuu😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dew-drop

<font color="#000066">Awesum update ..šŸ‘šŸ‘
Luved it so very much ..
continue soon ..!
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Glad you liked it, and Im feeling really generous so I think I might update tmz as wellšŸ˜‰
Love Aluuu😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey Aluu!
lovedā¤ļø it ! great part and teri ore is my fav song to!
loved the praSha and arNakā˜ŗļø scenes keep updating!
wating 4 ch 9~
fiza
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: lalmirch28

hey Aluu!

lovedā¤ļø it ! great part and teri ore is my fav song to!

loved the praSha and arNakā˜ŗļø scenes keep updating!

wating 4 ch 9~

fiza



hey Fiz
glad you liked it. Along with you, me and Prasha also love teri ore the song. Glad you liked the Prasha and Arnak scenes. I think I might update tmz as well.
Get your ff posted asap too.
Love Aluu
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Alu that was an awesome update!

I loved both the parts forgot to unreserve 😳 whoops!

But they were really good loved the way Raukan saved Ariana and then the PraSha's drive very nice!

Can't wait for the next part

Cont soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikita_88

Alu that was an awesome update!

I loved both the parts forgot to unreserve 😳 whoops!

But they were really good loved the way Raukan saved Ariana and then the PraSha's drive very nice!

Can't wait for the next part

Cont soon!



Thanks nikita for liking it😳 it's fine you didn't unreserve. At least you liked both parts😊 Ronak had to save Araina and I'm glad you liked Prasha drive. More of them scenes on the way. Update for the next part is sooner than expected šŸ˜‰
love Aluu😳

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