Fiction - 'Saudagar!' Chapter - 5, Page - 21 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Interesting prologue can't wait for more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats on the new story. Very interesting start and looking forward to the updates.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetha03

Congo for the new story...😊

Read the prologue and waiting to read the story...


Thanks so much 😳

First chapter will be up in few days as right now I'm concentrating on my other story that I want to finish before that 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Thanks for the pm 😊

Congrats on the new story 😊
Nice Prologue 😊
Waiting for you to begin 😊


Thanks so much Sharlene 🤗

Let me deal with Phechaan first then I'll start posting the chapters of this story 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mbakwe

Wow! I cant wait for this story. Kip it up


Wow! So I finally made you break your silence 🥳

I know that lately you've been silently reading my stories. Finally you commented and that also your very first comment is on my new story. You've made me so happy 🥳

Hope you'll stay here and read not just my but other writers stories also 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Interesting Prologue.. but very cunning of YOU 😳

You didn't write the names of That Saudagar and his Sauda lol 😉😆
Waiting for part one 😉


Arey Baba! PV forum mein, where Yash and Aarti rules, agar stories AarYa par nahi hogi to kis par hogi? 😆


Wanted to spice things up for readers that's why I didn't mention any names 😳. One of my friends had suggested it, 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Intence hmm I'm waiting for first chapter eagerly I too want to write something intence but you know na how silly and innocent Soni is😳
You don't tell his name di OK I will wait update soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations on your new story

The Prologue
Its Captivating its so Interesting and I'm already hooked
there is such a vast avenues to explore on this subject
now I wonder will he marry her if he has to come to that
or will he make sure she becomes even more helpless so she has no
other choice but to turn to him
okay I'll be waiting for this story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni

shall I comment? 😛

That was actually my initial thought 😆 ...

Well lets see how she'll survive him and how he'll conquer her😲


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

Very interesting concept

Plz continue


Thanks Manita

Updating in few minutes 😳

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