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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 7 years ago

#141

Hi Nikki I finally got a chance to read this update 😆

I loved it another awesome update of fine story telling the emotional past of Yash and his Mother Maya ⭐️ please update soon I want to know more about Maya's and Yash's life before she died, Janki and her kids also her brother and his family.

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Divya333

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Posted: 7 years ago

#142

Nice update...finally Maya found her happiness...hope this happiness lasts long... Waiting for next update

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#143

Hey Everyone thanks for reading and commenting on this chapter 🤗

I've read all comments but I couldn't reply on them individually as I'm sort of busy.

I'll be busy till mid-August after that only I can give you all the next chapter of Saudagar. Hope you all will be patient till then.

See you all in a couple of weeks.

Nikki 🤗

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sass8

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Posted: 6 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Hey Everyone thanks for reading and commenting on this chapter 🤗
I've read all comments but I couldn't reply on them individually as I'm sort of busy.

I'll be busy till mid-August after that only I can give you all the next chapter of Saudagar. Hope you all will be patient till then.

See you all in a couple of weeks.

Nikki 🤗

phew feel less guilty for not posting the other story Pauper feedback yet 😉... I still have a few days then

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 6 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Hey Everyone thanks for reading and commenting on this chapter 🤗
I've read all comments but I couldn't reply on them individually as I'm sort of busy.

I'll be busy till mid-August after that's only I can give you all the next chapter of Saudagar. Hope you all :Pwill be patient till then.

See you all in a couple of weeks.

Nikki 🤗

Hi Nikki no problem I also am busy these days

Looking forward to the new.chapter

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 6 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Hi Nikki no problem I also am busy these days
Looking forward to the new.chapter

just checking in for any new updates 😆

and to keep the forum active

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 6 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: cuteariya
nikki 😭

Hey Manita,

I'll try to update the next of this story by early next week. The chapter is almost ready. I've to work on few little details.

Also I'm trying to finish Phechaan first so that I can focus on this and other stories,

Thanks for being patient with me. 🤗

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 6 years ago

#148

Posting the next chapter

But in thr next page

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Posted: 6 years ago

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Yash and Aman, along with Suraj, were anxiously waiting for the doctor to come out and tell them what was wrong with Maya. When Yash couldn't take it anymore he went near the door and was about to knock when he heard the doctor say, "Maya you should tell your family about your health...

Then he heard Maya's voice, "No I can't. They won't be able to bear it, especially my Yashu...

"But Maya sooner or later they are going to learn about it then why not today? The more you delay the more it will delay your treatment and the more it will become painful for them. They have got to know...

"No doctor I can't tell them. It will tear them apart. They all will be shattered. The one thing that I can't bear to see is to see my son in pain. In the Sixteen years of his life, I have not given him anything but pain and suffering. It will only increase if he learns about my...

"About what? And Yash was in the room followed by Suraj and Aman. "What are you both talking about? Maa..l... You... what's going on in here? What is it that you are hiding from me.

Dr. Gupta looked at Maya who vehemently shook her head. Yash noticed it, "Maa I want to know what's wrong with you. He was now shaking with anger and fear. Fear of the unknown.

"I'm sorry Maya but he must know. I know he is very young but he is your son. He is strong enough to face the fact that you have got cancer. Dr. Gupta said the last line looking at Yash.

Yash angrily grabbed the doctors collar, "I don't like such kind of jokes. My mother is a strong woman she can't have...

"It's true... They heard Maya's soft whisper, "Yash... it's true that I'm suffering from stage-3 cancer...

Note...

The next couple of chapters will show another important yet painful phase of Yash's life.

Especially after he learns about Maya's illness. It will be the toughest phase and it will be equally tough for me to work on those emotional scenes.

I'll try my best to give you the best as you all deserve nothing less.

See you all soon with the next chapter. Till then take care.

Nikki...