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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Tess you know that I was only pulling your leg, right?

And Bee is going on a trip? For how many days?

Tess, Abie was also laughing at Sharon's scene from Phechaan😆

I forgot to tell her that you nearly choked on your food after reading my comment😆


yes I know you were kidding, I was being sarcastic!

She will travel back home on Thur, I suppose she will only come here again on Fri...

Oh yes, that scene was hilarious! I love jealous Aarti 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Tessaloni


yes I know you were kidding, I was being sarcastic!

She will travel back home on Thur, I suppose she will only come here again on Fri...

Oh yes, that scene was hilarious! I love jealous Aarti 🤣


The moment Abie commented I thought of you and your reaction 😆

Now I'm tempted to show more on her but I have all the rest of the chapters already ready

But after writing this chapter now I'll have to add few things in the chapter with their confrontation. Maybe in one of those scenes I can add Sharon to make Aarti jealous 😉

Let me seriously think about it as that girl is Dynamite 😆

I wish Sassy too reads this chapter soon so that we get to see her reaction also 😆





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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki



The moment Abie commented I thought of you and your reaction😆

Now I'm tempted to show more on her but I have all the rest of the chapters already ready

But after writing this chapter now I'll have to add few things in the chapter with their confrontation. Maybe in one of those scenes I can add Sharon to make Aarti jealous😉

Let me seriously think about it as that girl is Dynamite😆

I wish Sassy too reads this chapter soon so that we get to see her reaction also😆






is that my cue to feign surprise because you will be making changes? 😛 but I won't mind more of Sharon though 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

Lazy Bee, all packed for your trip tomorrow?

Leaving on the Redeye Wednesday morning, not tomorrow. But as I have to be at the airport at 6 I want to get to bed early tomorrow night.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Tess I'll have to make the changes cause when I wrote the confrontation chapter that time I had not planned to show Aarti's Journey in the competition. Now I have shown so many things in it that their confrontation will look incomplete and messed up.
So this time I have no option but to make changes

Which I LOVE to do Btw 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki


The moment Abie commented I thought of you and your reaction 😆

Now I'm tempted to show more on her but I have all the rest of the chapters already ready

But after writing this chapter now I'll have to add few things in the chapter with their confrontation. Maybe in one of those scenes I can add Sharon to make Aarti jealous 😉

Let me seriously think about it as that girl is Dynamite 😆

I wish Sassy too reads this chapter soon so that we get to see her reaction also 😆


Did you sent it to me?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: B-onesie


Leaving on the Redeye Wednesday morning, not tomorrow. But as I have to be at the airport at 6 I want to get to bed early tomorrow night.


oopsy! Sorry Honey-Bee, in my defence I'm not feeling well 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Tessaloni


oopsy! Sorry Honey-Bee, in my defence I'm not feeling well 😳

Where are you going Bee?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Tess I'll have to make the changes cause when I wrote the confrontation chapter that time I had not planned to show Aarti's Journey in the competition. Now I have shown so many things in it that their confrontation will look incomplete and messed up.

So this time I have no option but to make changes

Which I LOVE to do Btw😆


I KNOW!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Sassy I've PMed you and Bee the next chapter of Phechaan. You can read it whenever you get time.
I don't need full feedback just feedback on one character named Sharon 😆

I want to see your reaction on her. 😆

If you want I can send you her scenes separately so that you won't have to read the whole chapter when you don't have time 😃
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