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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow what a life Yash has with his parents that explains everything but that doesn't excuse him of the way his treating Aarti, OMG Aarti gave birth and didn't tell Yash, again Yash is doing wrong by forcing Aarti to marry him but In the end it will be for the best cause it will force Yash to realize he loves Aarti and they could be really happy together, and with Aarti's mom moving in Aarti will have someone on her corner that k owns her well and can help lovely update👏 continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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B a great story so far. The reality has kicked in and the cracks have started to show in the relationship. Yash needs to grow up and start behaving maturely when things don't go his way. It is one thing to be in a common law relationship and totally a different story to be married with the child. I don't know if he is ready to take this on and if he thinks that by forcing Arti into marriage by blackmailing her is going to be the answer and he is going to have things his way he has another thing coming to him. It is going to be interesting to see how life is going to shape up for them. Waiting to see how you deal with their relationship. Eagerly waiting for the next update. Continue soon. Thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Their live was kind of perfect there in America, but seriously i don't just know what mr bipolar ass dude yash expect from aarti, to be his wh**e??? service girl or prostitute (one time, he act as though he loves her, the other i don't know what to say) despite knowing he does not believe in love, aarti gave him her body, her soul and her everything which lady will do that even after all that that chicken yash rejected her over and over again.
Well i get and understand from his own perspective how he feel about love but not withstanding he should have respected aarti, shouting on her during the vacation shows he got no respect for the poor girl, and like he said he can't allow any guy to do what he's doing to aarti to his sisters, which mean he knows what he's doing is very very bad. Awww baby payal is now the reason her parents had to get married

am not surprise he blackmailed her, because he had no respect for her virtue from the start, now poor aarti is stuck on is rollercoaster ride, well kudos to her too, cause she made her self look cheap, she brought it on her self before, so she gonna deal with it, mtcheeewww, am just glad she has a mother who understand and loves her unconditionally, and doesn't criticize her

superb, update soon and pretty please aarti's heart must no melt easily to fall for yash, he should at least suffer and feel the pain she also went through


interesting chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thought I reserved but apparently I didn't 😛
so things in New York were so beautiful, Aarti knew she was living in a bubble and that it would burst at any moment. Yash chose to ignore the glaring fact that she expected forever and wanted to keep her on his terms. it's so funny that it came as such a shock that she was making plans for her future. what did he expect her to do? stay on with the little he was giving her? really?

and then he loses it when he finds out what she is planning to do... of course she would want to move on with her life because he is not giving her a reason to stay beyond the physical... she is a woman in love, at some point she needs more than just sex, she yearns for true commitment.

but when he lashes out at her to the point of violence, she learns just why he is so against commitment. his parents' relationships are messy and contain so much pain, betrayal, and deceit. what reason does he really have to believe in love? can Aarti who has a completely different background really stay with him after finding this out?

I therefore do not blame her for keeping his daughter's existence hidden. he was just going to blame her for trapping him and would have resented her for it. yes she wanted love but not one that would force him to go against his believes. he would never have acknowledged his love and would always have blamed her for trapping him, and that would have become his crutch.

but he was hurt finding out he was a father. it must have been hard to stay away from her when everything in him screamed to be with her. but in leaving him, she cemented his warped views about love. she did not really love him if she still left? really how selfish and arrogant can you get! she allowed so much simply because she loved him and he kept on taking but never gave back. the fact that he got angry at the thought of that happening to his sisters speaks volumes but he is so arrogant he never really took a moment to think about his part in this mess.

and now the poor baby has been wronged so much! boohoo! 😡 this is the perfect excuse to chain him to her like he always wanted! he refuses to acknowledge why that is and stubbornly holds on to his views about love and commitment. how unforgivable to blackmail her with something so intimate and private just to get his way! what a bas***d! yes I am just a little angry, can you tell?

don't get me wrong, I am not condoning Aarti's actions. she knew her behaviour was wrong and that she let him trample on her dignity more than once. but she was just a woman in love who thought she glimpsed love in him that he would return eventually. all the signs were there, he missed her when she was away, he was possessive of her, and he treated her like a queen and spoiled her.

there was a point where enough was enough though and she cut all ties when she realized there was no future. it was wrong to keep his baby from him but his reaction justifies even that. she may love him but with how he is behaving, I will be surprised if she does not lose her respect for him, as for trust that's going to be hard. how will she ever share that part of herself with him knowing he could use it against her in the future?

I don't know what you have planned for them but I want Aarti to make him work for her forgiveness! I will be quite disappointed of she does not! 😡

I will just briefly mention the good parts in the update. I love the bond he shares with Gayatri, she understands him so well simply because she knows why he is the way that he is. I also love how they realized that Shoba was an important part of Aarti's life, that she really had no one but her and invited her to stay; Yash supported Gayatri in this and he still thinks he does not love Aarti? how confused is this guy?

oh almost forgot! father daughter first meeting was penned beautifully! I could feel his emotion as he held Payal in his arms. here is a being who completely holds his heart for just being, nothing more because being is everything in this case; even then things he has yet to realize! ❤️

thanks for making my blood pressure increase with this update Honey-Bee, that's needed once in a while! 😆

loving the story though, no doubt about that!
Edited by Tessaloni - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
@love undeniable nice story pls continue soon eagerly waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Bee 😳

I'm finally trying to write my opinion for Mario's SS "Love Undeniable".

I feel that both Aarti and Yash stuck between the games of Heart and Mind.

I'll try with Aarti as I don't have much to say about her the way I have to say about Yash.

Aarti being stuck between the games of Heart and Mind.

Aarti knew her parents loved each other. So for her, love was eternal cause her mother still loved her father.
With this feeling she fell in love with Yash. At first she dreamed that their love will also be eternal like her parents. But Yash made it clear for her that he didn't believed in love and that he would never marry her or anyone else.

She should have left him there and then. Her Mind warned her to Run. But her Heart made her follow Yash and do all those things that would only break that Very Heart in the End.
Her Heart was ready to get shattered but was not ready to live without Yash.

The only time her Heart and Mind worked together was when Yash ruthlessly and mercilessly asked her to leave. She listened to both and left him.



Bee, I know I am in minority here but I don't feel anger towards Yash. All I feel is pity and sympathy for him.

His father abandoned his mother (Radha) and married some other woman (Gayatri). He was bound to feel betrayed by his father. When a child needs his father the most, that father was living with his other family. With a wife whom he didn't even love.

Gayatri loved him and protected him like her own son. But that mothers image was shattered bitterly when he saw her with other men.

Can we blame him for not trusting in Love anymore?

He sure does know how to love. Cause his love for his sisters is so pure and genuine. He was in love with Payal the moment he saw her and held her. So yes he knows what love is. But then this love is brotherly and fatherly love. Not that of a lovers.

That's not his fault cause in his mind lovers leave and even if they stay then they betray their partners. That is the only *Love* he saw between couples. It is only natural for him to feel that one day Aarti too would leave him and break his heart and trust.

Yash being stuck between the games of Heart and Mind.

I'm sure in his heart he knows that he is in love with Aarti. Had always been. But his Mind is stopping him to acknowledge and accept that love and when a person is not able to reach within his own heart he writhes like a fish when it is taken out of water.

He has been in love with Aarti since the very beginning. Or else why would he be so possessive of her? Why would he have a live-in relationship with her? That also not for days or weeks but for so many months. And then when their trip is about to come to an end, he overhears her talking about future, a future that does not include him.

He pours his past in front of her and then literally throws her out. He could have stopped her. In his heart he knew that if is stops her she would but once again his Mind stops him and makes him feel like Aarti left him just like his father left his mother.

When he sees her again, she is with their newborn daughter. Yes he was excited to see them but then she hid this news from him.

We can't blame Aarti here as how could she tell the man who heartlessly threw her out that she was pregnant with his child? Chances were high that he would have rejected the baby also.
Here her Heart knew that Yash would accept the baby along with her. But this time she listened to her Mind which warned her of another catastrophe.

Yash then goes to confront her. I knew he must have had marriage in his Mind when he went to her but her aloofness hurt his ego which was once again controlled by his Mind and not by his Heart.

His Mind came up with the only available way to make her to marry him and that was to blackmail her with those pictures.
Here I wanted Aarti to challenge him and call his bluff. I felt that with the time that she had spent with him, she had seen how protective and possessive he was of his sisters. A man who would do anything to protect his sisters would never malign a woman's image with whom he had been living like a couple.

But her Mind reminded her that he is the one who was okay with Aarti living with him without marriage but his sisters should be chaste and pure before marriage. So Aarti had reason not to trust him with those pictures.

I'm curious to know how he will realize that what he feels for Aarti is nothing but love and that she had always been faithful to him or else she would have leaked his family history the day he threw her out.

That time also his Heart had trusted her that she won't reveal anything to anyone or why else he would have told her about it? But once again his Egoistic Mind came in between and clouded his judgment.


At this point they both, yes they both need to sit and evaluate what and where did they go wrong. Making decisions based on their ego or pride or weakness is not going to take them anywhere but to a path of destruction and more destruction which is not good for either of them nor for their family, especially Payal.

Let's see how much time they take to realize what is important and what is not 😳


Based on what I have assumed I'm loving this story.

I may have missed some points in my comment as I didn't comment on time. But I think I have covered main points.










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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovely_nikki


Hey Bee 😳

I'm finally trying to write my opinion for Mario's SS "Love Undeniable".

I feel that both Aarti and Yash stuck between the games of Heart and Mind.

I'll try with Aarti as I don't have much to say about her the way I have to say about Yash.

Aarti being stuck between the games of Heart and Mind.

Aarti knew her parents loved each other. So for her, love was eternal cause her mother still loved her father.
With this feeling she fell in love with Yash. At first she dreamed that their love will also be eternal like her parents. But Yash made it clear for her that he didn't believed in love and that he would never marry her or anyone else.

She should have left him there and then. Her Mind warned her to Run. But her Heart made her follow Yash and do all those things that would only break that Very Heart in the End.
Her Heart was ready to get shattered but was not ready to live without Yash.

The only time her Heart and Mind worked together was when Yash ruthlessly and mercilessly asked her to leave. She listened to both and left him.



Bee, I know I am in minority here but I don't feel anger towards Yash. All I feel is pity and sympathy for him.

His father abandoned his mother (Radha) and married some other woman (Gayatri). He was bound to feel betrayed by his father. When a child needs his father the most, that father was living with his other family. With a wife whom he didn't even love.

Gayatri loved him and protected him like her own son. But that mothers image was shattered bitterly when he saw her with other men.

Can we blame him for not trusting in Love anymore?

He sure does know how to love. Cause his love for his sisters is so pure and genuine. He was in love with Payal the moment he saw her and held her. So yes he knows what love is. But then this love is brotherly and fatherly love. Not that of a lovers.

That's not his fault cause in his mind lovers leave and even if they stay then they betray their partners. That is the only *Love* he saw between couples. It is only natural for him to feel that one day Aarti too would leave him and break his heart and trust.

Yash being stuck between the games of Heart and Mind.

I'm sure in his heart he knows that he is in love with Aarti. Had always been. But his Mind is stopping him to acknowledge and accept that love and when a person is not able to reach within his own heart he writhes like a fish when it is taken out of water.

He has been in love with Aarti since the very beginning. Or else why would he be so possessive of her? Why would he have a live-in relationship with her? That also not for days or weeks but for so many months. And then when their trip is about to come to an end, he overhears her talking about future, a future that does not include him.

He pours his past in front of her and then literally throws her out. He could have stopped her. In his heart he knew that if is stops her she would but once again his Mind stops him and makes him feel like Aarti left him just like his father left his mother.

When he sees her again, she is with their newborn daughter. Yes he was excited to see them but then she hid this news from him.

We can't blame Aarti here as how could she tell the man who heartlessly threw her out that she was pregnant with his child? Chances were high that he would have rejected the baby also.
Here her Heart knew that Yash would accept the baby along with her. But this time she listened to her Mind which warned her of another catastrophe.

Yash then goes to confront her. I knew he must have had marriage in his Mind when he went to her but her aloofness hurt his ego which was once again controlled by his Mind and not by his Heart.

His Mind came up with the only available way to make her to marry him and that was to blackmail her with those pictures.
Here I wanted Aarti to challenge him and call his bluff. I felt that with the time that she had spent with him, she had seen how protective and possessive he was of his sisters. A man who would do anything to protect his sisters would never malign a woman's image with whom he had been living like a couple.

But her Mind reminded her that he is the one who was okay with Aarti living with him without marriage but his sisters should be chaste and pure before marriage. So Aarti had reason not to trust him with those pictures.

I'm curious to know how he will realize that what he feels for Aarti is nothing but love and that she had always been faithful to him or else she would have leaked his family history the day he threw her out.

That time also his Heart had trusted her that she won't reveal anything to anyone or why else he would have told her about it? But once again his Egoistic Mind came in between and clouded his judgment.


At this point they both, yes they both need to sit and evaluate what and where did they go wrong. Making decisions based on their ego or pride or weakness is not going to take them anywhere but to a path of destruction and more destruction which is not good for either of them nor for their family, especially Payal.

Let's see how much time they take to realize what is important and what is not 😳


Based on what I have assumed I'm loving this story.

I may have missed some points in my comment as I didn't comment on time. But I think I have covered main points.



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update sis i loved it. Tnx 4 d pm. Yash is a clever dimwit. I loved the stunt he pulled to get married Aarti. Prashant his an ass Aarti is not brook. Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: B-onesie


I guess i will have to be patient than BM😉

yes you have to wait has you are an bad influence sis look i haven't even unreserved in a month but i still love u sis. Awesome chapters sis i loved them both. Chi that dimwit doesn't respect Aarti i should kick his ass.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well i should put on 3d shades so i can see AarYa has a married couple Journey has you do what you got to do.

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