AarYa SS 'Shadows Of The Past'. - Chapter - 5, Page- 18 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni

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So rain still continues to play a major role here. Brought together as they were by spiritual forces, it was thunder that brought them back to their reality. They feel confused as they look at what they are told is their soulmate. They can feel the potent pull too but how can that be when they loved before? Yash even finds himself acting out of character and flirting with her. Two years ago they lost what they thought was their love true, was destiny giving them two years to heal and get ready to meet their soulmate true on the very date they lost their first love? Under the very same conditions, feeling the exact same fears; fears which link their destinies closer and force them to comfort and be the balm that the other needs... That very last paragraph is prove of it as Aarti lands unconscious in his arms...

Gayatri being a mother understand Aarti's fears, especially after learning her story. She is the one who explains her behavior to Ishita who I believe is Aarti's best friend and is therefore supposed to know her better. She again tells Pankaj and is right in her summation that Aarti is in no state to see anyone. She still looks out for her enough by asking Vidhi to bring a change of clothes.

She realizes what's happening here but does not want to be hasty. Before anything else Ansh has to get better in any case. Her first object is to support a distraught mother. Even without that factor they are link by the mere fact that they lost loved ones on the same day. For that reason she does not see Aarti for the stranger that she is and treats her like kin. She likes the traits Aarti displays in the way that she treats Palak; she also recognizes the ensuing bond.

That brings me to sweet little Palak. In her innocence she refuses to let Aarti wallow in her worries too much. She is the balm Aarti needs during this scary moment. She even makes her laugh through her tears. Hugging her makes Aarti feel like she's holding onto Ansh, holding him to life in her hopes for his recovery. Her fears decrease just a little bit more with Palak as her angel, her lashes that keep blinking new hope into her spirit. It is for Palak that she chooses to keep warm, and also chooses to laugh and not cry.

Palak however is not only a balm for Aarti but a confidence booster for her dad. Arpita's spirit gave him the will to operate and save an innocent life on the very day he could not save her own, Aarti's fears gave him the strength he required to save her son, and Palak's innocent conviction in his abilities gave him the confidence he needed. Then there was his team who realized his fears and gave him just that last push with their humor. Not forgetting Ansh who gave him an opportunity to regain his faith in his abilities by saving his life. With so much support it was bound to be a success and saving her son's life linked him to Aarti stronger than ever!

If Pankaj and Aarti are linked, does that mean they did not recognize each other due to distress and the rain? Or are they yet to learn that they share a connection despite being strangers?

I wonder what Vidhi's story is but it sounds like she faced pain too. Of course I feel that she and Pankaj will become each other's healing place just as AarYa would.

Also I feel like the dress Vidhi gave to Aarti will become symbolic for them. He gave it to his sister not knowing that destiny meant it to have a different owner... Just like Arpita's green saree, this dress will hold meaning for them. It is the dress in which he is now catching her from falling, also one in which he returned her life to her by saving her son. The wet clothes are gone and ruined just like their past, but this new dress marks a new beginning for them. One in which their past shadows begin to fade after pushing them into each other's arms.

Beautiful going Didu! Anxious for more! More than DV, I'm eager for this one.



Like I said in my last comment to you and Sassy that I had not planned to show rain playing major role in their life. But since Sassy and couple of other members pointed it out I had to rethink over it and now I'm loving the symbolism here. I still have no idea how I'll use it but let's see what I come up with in the future. I though have couple of scenes that I can use.

Their confusion is justified as they don't know how they are ending up doing things that they would never have imagined even in their dreams. Their love with their deceased partners is still deep and here they are finding getting attracted to each other in the first meeting itself.

Gayatri explained very well that maybe they learned that the other one also lost their spouse in the same accident could be the reason why they ended up hugging each other and why they have become each other's support (unknowingly and subconsciously). Aarti and Ansh has become his encouragement to do that surgery. Yash and Palak have become Aarti's hope that Ansh will alright.

Yes a bond has already formed between the four of them.

Not just them but between Gayatri, Vidhi and Aarti also.

Once again you are so right about Gayatri and Palak and the way they have become Aarti's support 👏

Tess Vidhi's dress was a last minute addition. In my original script, that I had shown Mario, I had shown that Aarti refuses to change. And Gayatri had only asked Vidhi to bring food. Then I don't know why I felt that I should show that Aarti changed her clothes and that Gayatri had asked Vidhi to bring them. So I added that scene and while writing I came up with this idea that I Yash had gifted it to Vidhi. Now here also I'll have to think hard what to show, though here also I have got a small scene in my mind. Let's see what I come up with st the last moment.

You are right about Vidhi, she too has gone through something in her life and Pankaj will become her support. Pankaj and Aarti have a past which will be revealed in the first half of the next chapter,
Like I've said before also that there are no main villains in this story. Yes they will come but their appearance will be very short.

The story is about Yash and Aarti feeling this strong attraction and about who will admit it first and then convince the other of the same. Yes their kids and Yash's family and Pankaj, Aman and Ishita will help them (not push them) and bring them together.

Sorry you'll have to wait a little for the next chapter as I have to deal with DV and MTB first. Not to mention the endless comments that I have to give...

Thanks once again Tess 🤗


Edited by lovely_nikki - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Lovely update. Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
It really feel like two souls recognizing each other after a lifetime of separation. 😊. How else to explain the pull betwen them and the easiness with each other member of the family gathering around Aarti and Yash to help them though difficult memories and hurt. The rain is adding a poetic feel to the story and so symbolic. I feel like its the link between the past (alas losing their better half😭), present (bringing Palak , Gayatri and Vidhi, the extended family to the hospital )and future (well that remain to be seen).
Palak is a gem and the way she innocently comforted Aarti was exactly what she needed to get through the scare of losing her son. Aarti automatically switch into mummy mode showing a kindness and a deep understnad of what a child need, to be accepted and not judge, so her suttering became unimportant. 😊Her confidence in her papa ability got through two adults; Aarti found herself trusting in these words and that things will be alright. As for Yash , he could not disapoint and the doubts he felt lower slowly, replace by a deep need to save Anch, Aarti boy; the woman who was shaking his life in a right way. I so love how Palak kind of dismiss him naturally to go do is job, sure that he would do it well. While Yash was with Ansh , sving him; Palak was meant to be with Aarti so she could accept Gayatri, Vidhi or Ishita help.
Like Tessa said Gayatri, immediately saw that something was happening between her son and Aarti but understood that the priority was helping the mother first. She treated her like her child and soothe her through.
It looks like both Gayatri children are going through a lot of pain. I feel for Vidhi pain and Pankaj guilt, and whatever their story is, I hope they too can find solace.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Emotional Chapter

Yet it held such depth
loved how Aarti and Palak bonded
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Rain the most important element in this story of Aarti and Yash's lives
and its still raining setting the atmosphere yet there is a soulful yearn and a the fact that both Prasanth and Arpita are bringing Yash and Aarti together to have a life with this very rain that has taken it away holds so much sentimental worth and yes bitter painful memories too

Aarti and Payal bonding is a great start
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

Emotional chapter

Aarya felt connection between them But was confused
Love the part where aarti & palak bond
Yash & his mom was shocked to see palak talking to aarti
As she never talk to strangers
Palak really gave comfort to aarti when she need it at this horrible moment
Yash told his mom abt prashant died in same accident & same day
Even told her seeing arpita but didn't tell her what arpita said abt him & aarti
Gayetri maa was so shocked know aarti also can see & talk to her husband like yash do
Thank god now ansh is out of danger but now aarti fainted
Hope everything will be good
Why aarti got confused seeing pankaj?
Continue plz



Thanks Manita for reading and commenting.

Yes AarYa are feeling this strong pull towards each other.
Even I love Aarti and Palak's scenes from this chapter and I enjoyed working on them. A bond has formed between them (between all characters) and now it'll only grow stronger



Nothing bad will happen now in this story (except for the past of AarYa)

I'll try to post the next chapter in a day or two 😳




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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: saf24

Fantastic job on the update Nikki. You were able to bring out the real emotions and inner conflicts Yash and Aarti are facing in such a situation.
Loved that their souls just gravitated to each other and they were able to
make it through the surgery. Looking forward to what is in store next.


Thanks Saf,

I loved working on this chapter so much. I myself was touched when I read the whole chapter after I finished it.

This was one of the toughest days of their lives after losing their beloved. And they made it through as they were surrounded by their loved ones and the pure souls of their lost loved ones.

Will post the next chapter in a day or two 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ksen

very emotional and intense part

every one's feelings and emotions were penned down beautifully
palak was very sweet and cute
looking forward for the next part


Thanks so much Ksen

Will try to post the next chapter by Tuesday 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: premap

Fab story , fab update ! Destiny playing a lovely 'game' in the form of tragedy , leading to Romance ! Extremely Interesting !


Thanks so much.
Yes destiny is playing all sorts of games with them. Be it tragic or uniting them with each other.

Romantic part is yet to come. But the attraction has definitely started 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAI92

like the well written script of this update




Thanks so much for the comments. I'll update the next chapter by Tuesday 😃

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