AarYa OS: My Prissy Love - Page 2

Indeed PRISSY 😆

The way her mother said, "you want Aarti" said it all, in a disbelief hurtfull way. Poor child, negleted by her mother because she was a brain, no wonder she was prissy and unprepared for being someone wife not to mentionned guarding herself from further hurt after how he parents and sibling treated her, like a oddity. Her mom earn the bad mother award of the year. 😕 for making her child feel this low. As for dad, not much can be said about one who can ignore his child because he lost his love. pity.
Well played , Yash, not only he saw behind the facade but taunt her until she relent😆. I love how he pushed her out of her confort zone. So funny how he teased her like a predator and yet in a non threatening way. I really like how their joining naturally flow ,words were unecessary as their body did the talking, you could feel the deep love between them. And what a sweet change from hurt childhood to a fullfill woman with unconditional family love and acceptance.
Another winner. ⭐️

Bumping so that it will be easy for me to find it when I read it and comment on it next week after posting DV chapter 😃

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Tess, I Won't apologize for being late in commenting😳

Still Sorry

Coming to this OS...

What does a little girl or a small child wants? Love and affection of their parents. Same thing Aarti wanted and desired. She saw her siblings getting it, but not her. She wondered why she never got her parents love and affection? Was she adopted?

At the tender age of sixteen she learnt the harsh reality that the woman whom she thought was her mother, well she was her stepmom, who was jealous of this young girl and despised her, cause her real mother was her fathers first and real love.

I wonder if her father really loved her mother, cause if he did, he would have never abandoned the child of the woman whom he claimed to love!

But this little girls small word had shattered down. To make herself strong, to protect herself from anymore hurt, she build around herself a huge wall. A wall which was impenetrable and unbreakable. She thought by building this wall she was safe and no one could hurt her. How could anyone when she didn't allow anyone to come close to her? When she couldn't trust anyone anymore in her life?

But she had no idea that there was this one person who could see her hiding behind this wall. This one person who could see beyond it. Who could see her.

She got the shock of her life, along with her so-called mother and sister, when Yash came with his family to ask for her hand in marriage. She couldn't believe that a man, any person can love her! That she too was lovable.

Though Aarti married Yash, She tried her best to hide once again behind that wall that she had built around her. She didn't allow him to come close to her, with the fear that he will see her and will reject her, like everyone else had done with her. What this poor soul didn't know was that he had already seen the real her and that's why had fallen for her and married her. Yash's love was so true that he gave her rhe space that she needed from him. She had accepted his family as her own. Yash knew that now she too have to see him standing on the other side and accept him the way he had accepted her.

Slowly, one by one, all bricks of that unbreakable wall had started to fall down and she could see him for what he was. The day of the party, when he presented her with that dress, she wore it cause deep down she had started to take a step towards him. When he put that pearl necklace round her neck and then left her in front of that mirror, for rhe first time in her life she saw the real Aarti, cause she was looking at herself through Yash's eyes.

His eyes, that didn't leave her for a single second and was telling her what was coming in her life. She was shy but not scared as she too wanted the same. Yet a small part of her was afraid if she could trust her heart.

Yash showed her that she can trust her heart as much as she can trust him.

Tess, I so loved their consumation scene. Not because it was love making scene or that Malia wrote it, but because you have written it so aesthetically⭐️. I got goosebumps reading it.

Yash was so possessive and passionate. He didn't give her time to think cause once she starts to think, she will hide behind that wall. He wanted to break that wall and he was breaking it as he was making her his. He was rough, but his roughness only showed his desire, his passion, his love, which was for her. Only for her.

By looking into her eyes, he was sort of telling her that now the last piece of this wall was down. Now she was his and he was hers. Now there were no secrets, no impenetrable wall between them. It was his way of telling her that from now on she can't hide from him. From now on, it was not just her, but it was them, both of them in anything and everything.

She could be as Prissy as she wants for rhe world but for him, she was his Aarti and only his.

I so loved this OS. I wish I could analyze this OS the way you are capable of doing. All I can do is⭐️

and she says she can't analyze

A fascinating OS ! You have brought out the insecurity of a child who is neglected by her parents. These children lose their confidence and faith in Life but fortunately for Aarti she has diverted her energy to hard work and doing well in her studies and career !!! Well written OS . Thanks

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