AarYa OS: Art Piece

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww... what an emotional ride. Initially, I thought they parted ways bcoz of any misunderstanding as it s alwz Yash's passion to hurt Aarti by jumping to his own conclusions or to satisfy his ego n pride at times. But the real reason of the separation was so heart wrenching and my heart went out for him.
This is such an apt title for all your works so far. Each of them is an ART PIECE of its own kind. I wud rather suggest that you should rename all your works as art piece 1, Art piece 2, and so on.
Also, we amateur writers cn use the current titles for our petty works.Hihee... just kidding. Thank you so much for posting this at the apt time for I was turning insane bcoz of our almost nill forum activity.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great you posted it. Am I allow to copied /paste 😃, apparently yes.
From the moment Yash and Aarti near each other , Prashant was a non entity, despite trying to goad Yash and of course showing is ignorance of art did not help at all.
What passion you instilled in that OS; I like Yash in this, he was refreshing to see that he did not give up on Aarti but gave her space to heal and accept their new reality. He had shown a maturity that help them sustain the relationship; Aarti was not leaving just surviving until he breathe life into her.
An ode to hope and love.
I want to add , this is a masterpiece. I'll savor it again later. The way you captured the passion , the love and mostly the connection felt like intruding on the couple.
And Nikky is right the painting description added an emotional dimension to their bond
Edited by sass8 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank You for adding the description of the painting 🤗. I knew it must be related to their baby that's why I asked you to describe what was the painting about.

This painting made this OS all the more beautiful and meaningful for me.
Now it has become a true Art Piece in the real sense ⭐️

With this OS you gave me another reason to envy you. Your love for Art. Even in DA you had described a painting painted by Arpita. As far as I remember, you had described some painting in one of your other stories also (I don't remember which one). Since then I knew that you can study and love Art.

That's one of the reasons why I asked you to describe that painting in this OS.

Why I Envy you more now?

Because I also love Art. But I can only See it and Not Read it like you do.
You are one talented people Tessa ⭐️


Now copy-pasting my comment from my PM (I didn't change anything)...


I don't know why you don't want to post this OS in the main forum. I won't force you, but I'd definitely like to say that if you won't post it then your other readers will miss this work of Art... Oops sorry... They will miss this Art Piece...

Tess, as I said I'll be honest with my review then I'd like to point out something. I wish you had showed what that one particular painting was about. As per Yash they both had made that painting together, then it must've been something important and close to both of their hearts. I think a small description would have been perfect.

Think about it...

Now coming to the OS...

I am in L.O.V.E with this Yash. She gave up on him and their love, he never did. No I'm not blaming Aarti. She must have died a thousand deaths every moment she was away from him. I understand why she left him. Even he understood why she left him and gave her as much space as she wanted. Yet he still never gave up on her.

But enough was enough. He had to stake his claim and make his wife his once again. He had to remind her that they were in this, in everything together. Be it good or bad. Ups or downs. They were together in everything.

He went out to bring back his wife.
The first gaze, eye contact (even after three year) said everything. They knew they never stopped loving each other. All she needed was that one assurance that he needed her, as much as she needed him in every aspect of their life.

They lost their baby together, they needed to mourn the loss together. More than that she needed to vent out all that she had kept buried inside of her. He let her do that. She bared her soul to him. Just like that painting of hers that he had painted himself.

That nude painting where she was all bare, well (as per me) that bare painting represents that nothing should be concealed between them. From now on, Everything should be and is going to be as clear, as bare as that was painting.


Tessy, this is another masterpiece from you. An Amazing Art Piece.... ⭐️








Edited by lovely_nikki - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well written dear
It was really painful that aarya lost their baby
But after that aarti left yash as she couldn't give him baby
Thank god yash didn't sing the divorce papers
Yash love for aarti was really pure & so much passion
Even aarti love yash equally as much as yash do
Finally yash convince aarti to adopt baby

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I will leave the commenting to later, flu is killing me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I would say in masterpiece instead..
I will not say how much 🤢 🤢 🤢 it is but will say how much 👏 ⭐️ it is..

Though it was 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢

I said before also and saying again the most beautiful thing was the way you portrait the painting of the baby... It was incredible... It says what you are and what you are capable to write. It will never cross my mind the way you describe the one of the most beautiful scene..

Thank you NIKKI DI. You mentioned it..

The Art piece is indeed masterpiece..

I love Maliya's Dhamakedar Reentry.. 😉😆
Hope she will last long...


PS: I love you and your writing more than Malia.. Malia is cherry on top.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww beautiful os ,very emotional losing a child, I loved it, well done 👏
Edited by bongalisoo - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The Os is really an ' Art piece ' !!! You have weaved such 'magic' over the meeting of Yash/Aarti at the art gallery ! Superb story ,well written for an ' unwanted story' !!!! My Sincere Thanks to all our friends who have persuaded you to publish it ! Thanks a lot.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Os sis i loved it. Good job ladies for forcing Tessa to write an Os 😃.

Aww Aarti forgot about Prashant in Yash's presence now i get it why Yash was amused when Prashant placed his hands on Aarti 😆😛.

You cracked me up sis.

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