AarYa SS: Guard My Heart Part 2, pg 5

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Fandu
Very different and beautiful story. Arti Bodyguard, what a concept. Love your different choice of subjects for these awesome stories. Keep writing. Thank you.

thanks Fandu dear 😊

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Wow
Wow

Wow

And WOW ⭐️

Tessa I'll try to edit this comment when I find the right words to praise this story which has become my personal favorite from your collection. These days you all writers are giving me stories that are becoming my favorites from your individual collections 🤗

thanks Di, I love that you love it 😊

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: jhillyarya
I said you I just loved this concept.. and i want to give 5 ⭐️
You should great full to me that I choose this in the options you gave me 😡
jokes apart but it is something which is hard to describe. The total concept was so different.
I agree with B that if Aarti knew this skill before then that Prashant would get a nice result of the betrayal..
The most hilarious part was when Aarti was taking all the name with P.. (You forget me that i can shower you much more red emos 😡)
You gave the longest Os, not only that you gave a wonderful story which I loved to the core..
Poor Yash lost in the arm wrestling.. 😆
I wont mind to see what will be their daily life when the wife was a bodyguard 😉
I think you are intelligent to understand this 😆

thanks my crazy VD! 😆 yes, yes, the credit goes to you for suggesting that I write this one first 😛.

😆 I'm sorry but your name had to be there as it starts with P too! 😆😆 shower away madam ji! I will try to fulfill your wish VD of mine 😛😉😊

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: roserosey
Tessa That was one witty, Hotty, Smart OS 👏
aww...Lady bodygaurd that sounds too good but whom she is gaurding The Yas Scindiya Freakingly handsome 😉 uff ufff ufff...what a combination haha...poor him i thought he is strong too but no he jsut now how to smirk and with that he lost an arm wrestling match 😆 (ooohh...but i see in future aarti will teach him some moves for sure😆) i enjoyed their silly tiff a lot this is my most fav of the whole OS😉...

haha and i enjoyed their smart comebacks ...this is is so so lovely yet such a fun to see them have some real cat fight when all they feel for each other is undeniable attraction yet they r always locking horns especially arti only to brush away the signals of her heart ...oh but this Yash is enjoying it to the most it seems he likes it to see her wherever he goes 😉😆

As we all knew they r destined to be ...so destiny brought them together in such a wonderful way who r they to brush it off ...??? so now this love began in their life ...aarti cant run away and yash will not let her run away from him 😉...their journey began in not so good way but with time it turned lovely and sweet and now yash is making aarti admit that she loves him as she is still running from love from him her yashu ...

finally their love wins and aarti ended up having yash as her hearts bodygaurd... 😛

i think now god is gaurd his both angels heart s😛

thank u so much for such a lovely one Tess👏⭐️ and i think u r giving an extension to this 😆 so me waiting 😆

thank you my sweetest Rose! 😊 I am happiest that you liked it! yes, yes I will see what I can do 😉😆

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Rez

I want to read this ARM Wrestling chapter

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Tessa when we side we asked you to give us arm wrestling, we simple, innocent souls were expecting arm wrestling 😳.

Just kidding 😆. I finally caught my breath and now I can comment 😳

I didn't comment on the first chapter properly. Now let me do it.

When I said this OS is my most favorite from your collection well the truth is that most favorite is "Close Your Eyes" from your collection. But then that story is beyond any comparison that's why I didn't include it in the list.

Tessa you have a gift to write on any concept so efficiently that it leaves us in awe. I always wanted to write something on police, crime, criminals and all, but I can't as I don't have that ability in me to do justice with such theme. Yes it's the truth. There are certain things, themes that I can't write on.

But you have it in you and I praise you and your talent.

I've read so many stories here in our forum but I don't think I've read anything on Bodyguard and that also a female bodyguard, as hot as Aarti. Who made our strong and hulk Yash go weak in his knees.

She guarded his body in such a way that she ended up giving him her heart and soul.

When we forced you to give us second part on arm wrestling i knew you won't disappoint us. You asked me if this part is upto my expectations. Well when I asked you for second part, I never expected anything. Because if we expect and the writer couldn't give it to us then it leaves us a bit disappointed.

When we don't expect anything and the writer gives us more than we could ask for then it leaves us happy and satisfied. That's what you have done with the second part. Thank you for fulfilling my wish 🤗

Oh my what an arm wrestling it was 🤢

When Aarti suggested it I knew they'll go for strip arm wrestling 😉. I knew that she was letting him win. Girl is smart 😆

Who knew that one arm wrestling match would end up with them having triplets? 😳. It's better that they don't arm wrestle anymore or else I don't know how the government of India would be able to control the population of the country 😳

😆

LOVED it so much. Thank you so much 🤗

Edited by lovely_nikki - 9 years ago

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B-onesie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

🤔Erm Erm - gasp gasp 🤬

Strip arm wrestling, nogal 😉 what a novel idea. And they way they are going at it, no wonder there were multiple babies. It's going to be difficult to keep up the pace with 3 babies. But the Scindiya's can afford a nanny or two so they might just be able to continue their very amorous activities.

I have no more words for you☺️ You accepted the challenge and came out with flying colours. 👏

What say you Jhil?