AarYa SS: For Her Only - Part 2, pg 4, Part 3 (final part), pg 7

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cuteariya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

OMG what a plan aarya made to trap that bas***d prashant 👏
that beast thought he can get any women but idiot didn't knew what he will get it 👏
loll prashant got embarrassed in front of everyone when he was naked 🤣
oh I just love that part at least he got what he deserve 👏
finally the beast got what he deserve aarya made perfect plan 👍🏼
but Im not happy that beast got only 10 yrs prison
that janwar should get torture for raping those womens 😡
even his families was so disgusted by him
but aarti's dad helped them
wow prateek even got married to paridhi 🤗
at least aarya & their families didn't punished prashant families bcoz they were innocent😃
wow aarti become famous 😃
awe aarya got 4 kids in 1 time 😆
this was so prefect in aarya life 🤗
yash was there in everyway with aarti bcoz of him aarti got justice & beautiful life 🤗
plz epilogue milegi? 😳

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Fandu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

It was nice to see that Prashant received what he deserved. What a brute. I am glad to see with the help of Yash she was able to lead a good life and start a Centre to help other girls in similar situations. Ah love their family. Another great SS. Thank you.

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roserosey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

that was Mindblowing Tessa👏⭐️

oh no that Prasanth couldnt take rejection from aarti so he tried to destroy her as his ego was by her poor girl i cant even imagine what she has to go through she she has it in her to fight of the devil that is scaring her her thougts and her heart too

oh Tessa u showed the mute fight of an innocent girl who initially chose to live in her own world where she chose not to react speak feel ...but then with the entry of Yash though it may be by accident(may be we meet our soulmates accidentally)he brought the best out of her with his kind and true warm nature ...he is so admirable by his nature though initially aarti cringed she deep down knows that he is made for her ...u know their confession brought tears in my eyes ...i m so overwhelmed with the love they had for each other

life offers us the toughest challenges but then it also offers the strength to face them 😊

Now finally yash got her justice and she made peace with what had happened to her and ofcourse prasanth ...i feel somwhere even prasanth regretted for ruining the lives of so many innocent girls but then he deserve more than this punishment and i hope he will be a changed man soon

Aarya...their love ❤️...bless them to be together forever with their miraculously happened Four munchkins😉😆...oh my girls r just like arthi witty and poor boys r being scared by their cooked up stories😆🤣

Thank u for the wonderful inspiration and hope u gave through ur this fiction Tessa🤗

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Jodhu
Awww d final parts were icing on d cake.i feel true love n romance in d air around me with this update.wish all men were like yash.ok ok i knw i m gettng too greedy.anyways awsm update.so this adds yet another feather to ur hat.keep it up darlz

thank you so much for such high praise Jodhu! ☺️ don't know where to look anymore 😆. I am happy you loved the ending!

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Busi
Wow wow wow wow wow sis the updt was awesome. I love prashant's punishment. I love they way Aarya kissed in front of PRASHANT. This is a fairy tale it more romantic than Romeo and Juliet novel. Am bowing down for you sis.

so many wows? ☺️ I am pleased you loved the ending sweetie 😊. I am so humbled that you even attempt to compare this with Shakespeare's work! he is a true genius whose work has spanned generations! It cannot be rivaled but I am touched by the compliment all the same 🤗. THANK YOU!

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: ksen
read both the parts together
it was amazing
loved it
finally prashanth got punishment
aarya got married and had four kids
well written story
thanks for the pm

aww you read two updates in one go? I'm so touched! thanks ksen dear 🤗

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
That was great writing Tessa 👏 ⭐️
Everything were present justice for Aarti and all the victims Prashant, Aarti stood up for herself thus healing herself mentally, she was able to move on with the love of her life Yash on to a brilliant future. Opening a home for rape victims not only giving back to society but also helping in her healing because she understand their pain, and humiliation. Fertility drug four kids very realistic 😆
Again I must say loved it good job 👍🏼

thanks Sharlene, you are so quiet, really hope you're okay 🤗. you have mentioned all the points I wanted to bring through which helps me see I was successful in showing them. I appreciate your insightful comments as usual! thank you! 😊

lol yes I wanted to make the four babies more realistic so brought in the fertility drug angle 😆

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Jodhu
wow wow wow just wow.they kissed in front of prashant.that was an epic scene n hilarious.i m still gasping that they had 4 kids in one go.aarya hit a 4 in 1 ball itself.loved ur portrayal of d kids as well.
paypal r macho girls while ansh n aayu r artistic.seems like switching their souls like in a fantasy film.
and abt aarya s first nite,*censored*😆prashant nude in front of media 😲ufff thnk god this was just a written descripton.else i wud hav been long dead by nw.shud i say time n again that u r more than just awsm tess hmmm????👏😆

thank you Jodhu! I am glad you loved Prashant's payback! he had to get as good as he gave! lol yes I wanted to portray an opposite family in which the girls are tough and the boys are sensitive. Prashant was only seen by his colleagues but the media angle would actually not have been bad 😆. as for AarYa romance 😳.

your praises continue to flatter me and make me blush nonstop! thank you so much dear ☺️