AarYa SS 'Ek Ladki Bheegi Bhaagi Si'- Chapter-4, Pg-16 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

Firstly thank you for this very light-hearted, beautiful, amazing, awesome story! it's beginning to be a close second to MTB, I am still stubbornly holding onto my love for it but this one is running a strong race 😆. I loved it; I do not know how many times I read the update but a grin like a silly girl every time I do!

Keeping to the theme of the story, Aarti's exit from his office can be likened with a storm that quickly passes yet leaves undeniable evidence at its wake: Yash is still under her effect even after she is gone. Then he worries for her well-being in this weather, gives his surprised brother his car keys to drive them to safety. Here he shows his release of the mundane, he does not care for the car any longer as his concern for Aarti takes over.

Once outside Aarti is still reeling about his ogling her which only she seemed to have noticed as Paridhi comes to Yash's aid, here she subconsciously reveals her attraction to Yash to her sister, voicing what he made her feel. Sure he lusted for her but she did too and she pins his attraction down to lust because she cannot fathom that he may feel anything else for her in so short a time. Yet Yash's insistence that Prateek drive them to where they have to be dispels her notion that he is lusting for her because he is looking out for their well-being. We also see her headstrong nature and determination when she opts to go for the interview despite the odds. One of the traits that attracted Yash to her when she came to her sister's aid.

I loved the next scene the most! His parents' reaction to his news is priceless! "No Suraj he's not running a fever" 😆 I really love this characterization of them as modern open-minded parents! It's also easy to see the easy bond they share with each other as a family.

His parents are of course dumbfounded by this news! The fact that he wants to marry a girl after one encounter tells them the depth of his feelings without his having to say it, especially to his mother. Here again Yash surprises Prateek by choosing to go with his motorbike. I think his feelings for Aarti set him free, to express himself without boundaries, the first of which is taking a right on his motorbike. And we of course learn that he intends to take his wild lady for a uhm... possibly wild ride! 😆 😉 if it's a prelude to their marriage, no one will be getting bored! 😊

The Dubeys wonder just what the Scindhias want only to get the shock of their lives. Their wild daughter caught the attention of the Yash Scindhia in just one encounter for him to want to marry her. His decision about Prateek/Paridhi quickly decides her father's judgment on his responsible nature. The other being that despite what he does not doubt Aarti's tirade in his office was he still fell for her; meaning he loved who she really was at first sight.

Then Aarti comes home with her hilarious continued tirade! Oh I really was in stitches at this point! I also loved her change of adjectives and cringed on her behalf knowing she was giving herself away, showing just how much he affected her too. Here everyone realizes that this potent attraction is mutual. ❤️

Awww her reaction is so endearing when she stumbles on the Scindhias in their house! I loved and laughed hard at how Gayatri quoted her speech when introducing Yash! "Sorry I have habit of forgetting things" simply priceless humor! It also made Gayatri realize that Aarti is right for him, especially when she asserted her opinion of their proposal with her outfit.

Our chatterbox is of course tongue-tied when she faces her prince charming, uhm I mean hoity-toity 😆 While Aarti relaxes Yash by ruffling him up, he shuts her up and slows her down in a moment she might have said more things in compulsion.

Surprise, surprise! He wants to marry her! Who does he think he is? In wanting to teach him a lesson she gets taught one herself. Not only did it increase Yash's attraction for her but she thought they would reject her due to her wild nature only to learn that she will be free to express herself: surprised by this open minded (future) mother-in-law of hers.

The said lady's suggestion makes her think she may subconsciously be receptive to the idea of marrying Yash and now he suggests a bike ride! I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO THAT THE MOST! I know it will be hot for sure!

Di, thank you once more for this amazing treat, now I can patiently wait for my favorite MTB.


Tessa I won't reply on your comments on Aarti's characteristics. Because I have already stated them in the third chapter which is ready. And which I can PM you if you want. I'll have to make few changes in that. But otter than that that chapter is ready, I wrote it last June

I wanted to show loving and caring family of Yash's. You'll know why as the story will progress.

Aarti's scene with her father is one of my favorites

And the second one is Her trying to teach Yash and his family a lesson but poor girl ended up learning one and not to forget that now she'll have to face Shobha also once everyone leaves 😆

Frankly speaking after MTB, this one is becoming my favorite also. But these two stories are world apart. One is so heart touching and one is so lighthearted and full of romance. Aarti's character is so different in both stories so as Yash's.

Thank you is such a small word in front of your heartfelt comments. So I'll give you a tight. 🤗





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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: taahir004

Absolutely Beautiful and Vibrant Update


Thanks Taahir 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki



Tessa I won't reply on your comments on Aarti's characteristics. Because I have already stated them in the third chapter which is ready. And which I can PM you if you want. I'll have to make few changes in that. But otter than that that chapter is ready, I wrote it last June

I wanted to show loving and caring family of Yash's. You'll know why as the story will progress.

Aarti's scene with her father is one of my favorites

And the second one is Her trying to teach Yash and his family a lesson but poor girl ended up learning one and not to forget that now she'll have to face Shobha also once everyone leaves😆

Frankly speaking after MTB, this one is becoming my favorite also. But these two stories are world apart. One is so heart touching and one is so lighthearted and full of romance. Aarti's character is so different in both stories so as Yash's.

Thank you is such a small word in front of your heartfelt comments. So I'll give you a tight.🤗






yes oh please do pm me Di (pouting cutely)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
awesome update
loll yash fall in love with aarti at first sight 😉
prateek was really surprised seeing yash behavior 😲
oops yash disturb his parents romantic moment 😈
he gave biggest surprised to his parents 😃
so yash with with parents & prateek went to aarti's home
aarti's parents were surprised seeing them 😲
loll aarti ka toh popat ho gai sab ke samne 🤣
what a definition she gave to yash look 🤣
uff aarti thought yash lust in her
loll her plan backfire on her after hearing yash mom 😆
poor yash had very hard time seeing aarti in sexy avtar 😉
yash parents is really cool & understanding 🤗
now what aarti will say to yash?
precap look interesting yet little tense
continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Loved the update. Loved the way Yash's parents teased him but still decided to meet Aarti and her family. Liked the way Aarti's father was able to see Yash's characteristics within a few minutes of meeting him. Absolutely loved the way you written Aarti's character and how you were able to show the real her. Fantastic job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Folla

thanks for the PM amazing part super waiting to next part


Thanks Folla 😳


Originally posted by: SAI92

Gayatri dialogue made me so laugh not controllable


I'm glad that Gayatri's character made you laugh. She's going to be a sweet and caring MIL 😳



Originally posted by: sara1990

our JKR Aarti is back. I love it. Waiting for your next update


Thanks Sara

Yes our JKR is back with a bang 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Hoity-Toity lol this is something we say a lot here in Trinidad and I guess in the WI and Yes you used it correctly will comment more after I read again lol


Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Hi Nikki I enjoyed this update G3 she is so relaxed, and understanding in this ss . Prateek so comical his knows his brother well, Dubey ji made his Aarti spill the beans about her day knowing full well Yash is present, the scindhias accepted her as is the real deal not some pretend shy wall flower. continue soon


Yes Hoity-Toity is correct. Today they were showing the move "Sweet Home Alabama". In that the hero calls the heroine Hoity-Toity 😆. And immediately danced on my seat 😆

I like Gayatri's character in this SS also. Once again she's so sweet, caring and so understanding 😳
You'll get couple of more scenes like these on Gayu and Prateek.
Satyendra had no other option but to go with the flow as Aarti didn't gave him a chance to speak. 😆
But he was right when he said that they should meet the real Aarti and that's what exactly happened 😳

Thanks Sharlene 🤗



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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: lassekool

Awesome. Aarti's adjectives to describe Yash were so contradicting in a nice way. G3 is also different in the story. Waiting for the bike ride on his BMW sports.


Thanks so much for your comment 😳
Aarti is one confused girl in this SS 😆

Yes Gayatri is different in this story. She is a bit naughty but very understanding woman 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Zetter

Intriguing update, hun...Keep rocking ❤️



Thanks so much Zet 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Lincy_Lins

Beautiful Update Nikki Di 👏 👍🏼

This is one of my favourite SS 🤗
I just loved Aarti's character in this story very cute and naughty 🤣
The way she came in front of Yash n his family 😆
Waiting for next update Nikki di AarYa's Bike Riding
Continue soon di 😳


Lincy. 🤗

This has become one of my favorite SS also 😳

Sadly Aarti won't be cute and naughty anymore 😭. Cause from next chapter she'll be all confused as to what is happening with her and around her 😆

Will try to give you the bike ride after I update MTB 😳


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