Collision of expectations - Epilogue - page 28

suhaaana

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Posted: 10 years ago

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part 1

how rude of yash
I seriously thought that he will be a little calm and will actually behave but he is such a jerk
how rude to say not to come downstairs

I feel pity for aarti
her parents r just good for nothing
how can parents be so insensitive to one child..
and burden thing is just so common..

lovely contrast of personalities

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annirogc

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Posted: 10 years ago

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congratz for new story , intresting start

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ksen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

interesting start

loved it

waiting for the next part

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caller123

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: suhaaana
prologue is so nice Kate
I like yash character a lot
aloof types

Thanks a lot Suhana. 😃

About Yash. You will see that he's having different shades in this story.

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caller123

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: suhaaana
part 1

how rude of yash
I seriously thought that he will be a little calm and will actually behave but he is such a jerk
how rude to say not to come downstairs

I feel pity for aarti
her parents r just good for nothing
how can parents be so insensitive to one child..
and burden thing is just so common..

lovely contrast of personalities

Yup he was rude on her. He just don't want this marriage and thinks Aarthi just don't fit to his society.

Her parents😡 There are parents like that. Burden. Yup it's common as most of the house holds girls are treated as burdens.😕

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caller123

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: annirogc
congratz for new story , intresting start

Originally posted by: alekhika20
Nice,cont soon.
Waiting

Originally posted by: ksen
interesting start
loved it
waiting for the next part

thanks dearies..🤗

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Folla

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Posted: 10 years ago

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thanks for the PM and congratulation for the new SS

the update was fantastik and the story is so interstiong so excited to read the next part update soon dear

i think yash well take care of aarti and that's well make diffrence in thier relation 😛

waiting the next part

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saf24

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Congrats on the new story. Loving the concept and the update thus far. Really curious to see what Yash will do next. Fantastic job as always

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Fandu

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Posted: 10 years ago

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A great start. I loved the first chapter. Please update soon, can't wait to read the next chapter. Thank you very much. Mandy

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Congrats on the new ss

Enjoyed the update both the characters Yash and Aarti are well written can realate Yash a young man who wants to achieveso much in his life has his goals which does not include a family, he is arrogrant stragith forward at least he told Aarti the truth so she knows what to expect. Poor Aarti looking, hoping expecting love so good of her to decide to live independent she does not deserve Yash's rude behaviour. Looking forward to the next update.

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