AarYa FF : Hold Your Heart. Epilogue: Page 131

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Folla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

thanks for the PM dear an amazing part i loved this part so much so excited to next part

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ksen

@ksen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Amazing part
Loved it
Waiting for the next part eagerly
Thanks for the pm

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

hey jhill..

I usually follow less stories due to less than and whatever I follow are on geet forum..
but this is the first aarya FF I am leaving so long reviews...
hope u don't mind ...

waise I wish u write something on gf too..

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Very nice loving the story

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arathiyash

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Wow!! an another wonderful update!!!
but initially i too thought that Payel and Palek were twins...but now since their bdays are not falling on the sane date am confused on it!!!
are they really twins??

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nirmala

@nirmalac99

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

@4,

Payal and Palak are a very good besties...Loved the way Palak connects with Payal so much and understands tat she 2 deserves the love and affection of the both parents...lol poor yash got the best surprise....

Edited by nirmalac99 - 10 years ago

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nirmala

@nirmalac99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

@5,

So many beautiful things happened in this part...Enjoyed reading it....

Pari s best chachi...She understands Payal's feeling and Yash's feeling, then their need for a complete family...Gonna catch wat ll happen wen a fan directly faces his favorite...

Edited by nirmalac99 - 10 years ago

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Taahir

@taahir004

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Superb Update

So Arpita wants Yash to help her win her bet and he has to make any girl fall for him that Arpita chooses but it also seems the girl she chose is very different from other girls and already there is major difference between Aarti and Arpita like the very first time Yash got hurt Aarti cleaned his wound when she saw blood yet Arpita been his girlfriend did not even come forward and now she is angry , she was suppose to happy that Yash loves her yet she wants to play a dangerous game

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nirmala

@nirmalac99

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#189

@6,

This update s unexpected...Loved tat u showed some of their college days, yikes....

Yash and Arpita both r spoiled brats in their earlier days...Loved Aarti's pyaari dhamki towards yash...Am eagerly waiting for the next update...

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roserosey

@roserosey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#190

thats a fabulous twist jhil !!

ooh...so this is how yash and aarti got to know each other ...and omg !! this arpitha is such a spoiled brat ...just so ziddi and whats that silly wish 😡... haha but m selfish so glad that thats how yash got diverted to aarti...😉

aarti mujhe she is like tomboy...she just know how to carry herself and protect herself and such a carefree yet responsible girl...hmm...its time that someone enter her lonely life ...so here its double dhamaka buaji ang yash entered her life ...

hopefully she will experience the taste of love ...😛

amazing writing jhil ...👏

with each update u r making me so eager !! to read the next !!great going jhil !!👏