AarYa FF - Pangs of Separation- Epilogue on Pg-96 updated

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: palbhar
Looking forward to your new story!!!!!!!

Thanks a lot dear..for checking this one out...

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chitra_11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Lovely start Shanti...and loved all the beautiful lines of separation and true love. Will be keeping the tissue box besides me while reading...for the depth of emotion in your writing MAY keep feelings controlled but tears never lie...will be eagerly waiting for your next update.

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: chitsri65
Lovely start Shanti...and loved all the beautiful lines of separation and true love. Will be keeping the tissue box besides me while reading...for the depth of emotion in your writing MAY keep feelings controlled but tears never lie...will be eagerly waiting for your next update.

Thank you so much Chitra...

Will take my time to give sensible updates...since a lot of emotions will be involved..

Don't worry will try to bring in lighter moments of family so that you don't cry my dear...

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palbhar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Lovely update!!!!! Can't wait for next chapter!!!!!!

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jhil

@jhillyarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

this is really alovely strt.. hope th wall b/w ths two will remove soon, and i'll like to ahve pm for it also.. waiting for the nxt...

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Lincy_Lins

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Hey shanti di, I liked this story, beautiful update di...
continue soon..

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Ken309

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Heyy, lovely start.
do continue 😊

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caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Really nice Shanthi and I love this one too.. I always love your stories and always will..

Please PM me too. I don't wanna miss any of your stories specially this one.

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roserosey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

firstly shanthi can i expect many more serious ones from u in future shanthi ...i just couldnt describe my feeling now...i cried i cried for aarya,...dont take it otherwise if i say i like serious ones than naughty lighter moments...

best lines r wt u had written abt seperation of hearts ...👏...ur words r like a treasure for me...each and every day i m finding the depth of an emotion called love...

thank u so much for this lovely words...

and the tension brewing b/n them was really very much visible and very difficult to endure ...i suspect if u will ever reveal the dispute they had ...coz i m shocked to know why yash vowed never to love aarthi again...😭...but then dont he know how she is hurting from inside with his silence and ignorance which was too much to bear ...but still he finds it in him to hurt her this much for hurting him...

waiting to see how the barrier the had created themselves will get break down now...

perfect !!!...perfect!!!...shanthi⭐️

i love all the sayings u used in this update very much ❤️

thank u so much shanthi...(i m ready for more serious ones too )