Arya OS ~ Success or Defeat in Love ???final part on pg.21-26/10 upd

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR
Ooh Dear.. This is something new and extremely interesting from you !! 👏👏👏

So all I know is Yash is trying to fight with himself right now with whatever he had done past 3 years to Aarti that had made her ran out of his life with the unborn Aayu !! 😭😭 It's seems like he's undergoing a great torture !

All the flashback was nicely written !! 👍🏼 I could feel the pain and my heart was breaking as my reading continues.. 💔

The last bit signalled me something.. 😛 I'm well sure it's a success soon !! 😉 😳

Great one !! Can't wait for the next one to come !! 😉

haha u got signal dear great 😆
sure i will try to... to makeit success hih...
thank u so much ishu sweetu 😳😳

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Zetter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: maha9

thank u so much zetter sweetu 😳

My pleasure Dear 🤗

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Abie10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: maha9

thank u so much dear 😳😳

U welcome dear!😳

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Sri_Radha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Edited my comment on pg-6 dear😃

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Congrats for new story maha👏 👏
Great update maha dear👏
Aarya moments were heartbreaking..💔.Poor of them...Yash and kids suffered 3 years without aarti and aayu.😭.Where as aarti and aayu also gone lonely without them..😭
Poor aayu😭..Did he know about his brother and sisters...Yash also regretted what he did to aarti
Waiting for their love to be succeed
Looking forward for their meet😳
Continue soon
Thanks for pm🤗

thank u radha dear 😛😛
i am so happy to see this sweet response

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Shashi1984

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Hey! It's superb! 👏👏👏 You have showed a new twist. Aarti goes from his life as he blamed her to take the position of Arpita in his life. Yash is repenting now 😭, but he reacted without thinking of the effects 😡and that caused him to live a painful life, where Aarti and Aayu were not with him. Because of his anger the kids also are suffering. They have to live without their mumma.

Waiting to see if he will be able to find Aarti and Aayu or not. Thanks for the PM.

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: taahir004
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now that was magical

thank u sweetu 😳

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jayshu17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

WOW!!!Amazing and emotional update dear👏⭐️

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ANU

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: maha9

thank u so much for your long and sweet comment anu dear 😳
hmm about success or defeat i have to.. decide.. pray i should give the best ok 😉

not only pray dear..i'm 200% sure that u'll give the best😃🤗...

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hi dearies 😉

First of all sorry for the delay in updating my ff My Family My Wealth... i hope u understand buddies so i am updating my OS which is ur favorite too 😉
but dont worry my ff will be updated in 2-3 days.. i assure it ok 😛

and also I think i need to clear some confusion 😃

I know everyone was more worried for kids than yash.. and also aayu knows about his siblings but arthi has managed a lie to aayu... how can arthi leave her pyaari kids... she left them wth yash for the only reason they have to be safe and also yash should be happy as he considers them as his world ( till the moment arthi left sm she did not know yash loved her ... ) and about the kids u will come to know in this part !!!

part 2

The kids left the room after bidding good night...

yash felt the jasmine scent move away from him as arthi left with aayu to sleep.. even if he did not want to sleep, his body and mind needed rest so he went to the shelf and took his favorite yellow saree...

want to know why .. bcoz it makes him feel as if arthi is near him and her side wont be empty too.. so he used to hug her saree and sleep.. not only this even aayu has a special collection which no one knows...

There is a small room which is hidden and known only to yash.. it was
previously used to store arpita's belongings but now it contains lots and lots of gifts for aayu... every festival or celebration, yash used to buy for arthi and aayu and store it safely.. he still had the hope someday even it may be years arthi will come back to him... even when yash buys anything for kids ..aayu will also get something. like this goes the love of yash which is waiting to outburst ...

now lets know of aayu's story...

after arthi left yash she went to her friend rita's house in california...coming to rita, her life is a exact copy of arthi's.. her first
love left her after 2-3 months of marriage but the only good thing that
happened in her life is.. she had no baby and then she left to california for her job and her life goes on !!! she is a very good friend to arthi and helped her at the right time else no one knows waht would have happened to arthi and aayu..

so after reaching her house arthi started helping in her job and they had a nice development with arthi's art skills...

aayu: mumma i want to see papa... i want to see bhaiya and di.. when will they come to see me ??

arthi: u will see them when time comes beta !! mumma's promise to u

aayu: sachhii mumma ..

arthi: muchii (and pinched his nose ) now go to sleep.. ( tears were hiding in her eyes but she cant express it in front of aayu)

aayu: ok mumma .. you are so sweet. (and kissed her)

rita was watching all this with so much pain... after aayu slept hugging his bear, arthi came out..

rita: why r u punishing that little baby also arthi... how long can u answer his questions saying they have went to study at a different place... and i bet you yash loves u a lot.. how many advertisements came after u left..

arthi wanted to continue but rita continued.. " and those 3 kids will it be
enough if u sent them letter messages gifts alone ? they need their mumma ... only u can make them smile even if yash is with them "

yes arthi used to send letters and messages often to the kids to bring atleast a little smile ...but she is alert in hiding the address so that yash cant trace her place...

arthi: but when time comes i will join with my family.. how can i leave my
jaans forever.. and so aayu will also get his family...

rita: that is what i am aslo asking.. when will that happen ?

arthi left without replying her question...

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aayu: papa dont u love me and mumma ? why u left us alone ?

yash: no beta papa loves u a lot and ur mumma is my life.. how can i hate
you..said yash hugging his sweet aayu..

aayu: ok papa i have to leave mumma is calling bye and ran away..

yash: aayu wait please...

the dreams came to an end...this is the daily dream yash gets but fails to catch his face everytime... and elders say day dreams will come true so did yash had the hope to get his life back one day or the other..

it was a sunday.. the kids were waiting for a day out... and also their
special gift used arrive on sunday.. guess what ?? yes its the message from arthi..

prateik brought the letter to the kids,,,

prateik: here is your gift ... are u ready to read it ? and haan there is a
gift also with it

kids: yes chachu !!! give it to me...

the kids read it with joy and opened the gift..it contained a sports car for ansh, barbie dolls for paypal...

the excited kids ran to yash with their gifts..

kids: papa papa look here mumma has sent us these gifts..

yash: wow all r so cute like my babies !!!

kids: papa take us out today na.. please

yash: ok bachoo !!! papa will come in 5 minutes.. be ready !!!

so yash and the kids started to roam out.. first they went to a park .. had lots of fun... the only thing they missed was their mumma and little brother..

next was a mall !! their favorite place

first they went to icecream stall ...

ansh: papa i want chocolate icecream..

palak: i want butterscotch and payal wants strawberry..

yash: and arthi ji what do...(yash was reminded of the days when they used to come with kids and absent mindedly called her too)

ansh: papa mumma is not with us...you forgot ah ??

yash: yes ansh so r all ur orders over ..

kids: yes papa but a small voice said.. for me ??

everyone turned to see a little boy smiling.. and its none other than the boy yash saw in the beach.

yash smiling: of course for u too beta ... what do u want ?

ayu: ayu wants hmm mango flavour..

yash: done beta. wait a minute i will be back..(and yash got their orders )

yash: here u r .. enjoy !!!

kids: thank u papa.. and thank u uncle.. said ayu

yash: ayu this is ansh palak and payal my kids...

ayu: hi i am ayu and nice to meet u bhaiya and di...

a familiar voice was heard and it was ayu's mumma... " so again u have started ur naughty work again.. why did u ask ice cream from this uncle.. u could have asked mumma na "

ayu: mumma u only allowed me to get icecream from uncle yesterday and so why should not i ??

mumma: u have become talkative nowadays...ask sorry to uncle

yash: its ok ji.. they r small kids only ... btw my kids are also naughty like this.. and i am yash

mumma: hi i am smita... hmmm where is their mom ?

kids: mumma is not with us aunty. yash stopped them and left aside with
smita...

smita: where did their mom go ? any family problem

yash: yes and i was not able to stop her and tell how much i loved her.. so
she left me with these kids.. but i also have a son with her.. when she left
she was pregnant with my baby.. still now i have not seen him and he is the age of your ayu.. so he looks like my son to me..

smita gave a sad expression and continued.." so you did not search for her these years.. "

yash: there could be no place i left to search but my wife is so adamant if she takes a decision.. thats why she is hiding from me..

smita: i will surely pray for u. be brave for ur kids yash ji..

when they felt a shadow of a person eavesdropping their convo but disappeared when yash turned..

and kids were calling so they left..

smita: did u have a yummy ice cream kids...

kids: yes !!! very tasty !!!

smita: so ayu can we leave..its time to go home...

ayu: no mumma some more time please i like yash uncle so much and here is my bhai and di so please give me few more minutes..

smita: ok only 30 min more ayu then u should come..

the kids had a great fun rounding the whole mall and yash bought a small car for ayu... then ayu left with smita to home..

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at night..

aayu was playing with his toys and arthi sat beside him..

arthi: aayu have this milk and then play...

aayu: ok mumma and drank the milk..

arthi: good boy my raja beta !! ok play for some time and come to sleep ..

aayu: sure mumma aayu will do whatever his mumma says with a wink..

arthi gave a kiss on his cheek and left..

after she left, aayu wanted to get some toy and he went to the room where the boxes are kept...

but to his luck the toy he was searching for was not found in any of them so he went to the next room and started searching in that boxes when a small cover hit his little hand..

excited to know what it is ...aayu took it out and unwrapped it to find
something shocking..

what do u think got stuck in aayu's hand ??? 😉

next part will be the final part of this OS 😛
i hope i have done upto your expectation and ofcourse there are sevaral twists awaiting in the last part.. so hit like and give your response soon 😆

even if i have done wrong please specify it i wont object to it 😊

Edited by maha9 - 11 years ago

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