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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: kmfan_2
A peep into the update before you sent the PM was enough to distract me...😳

not recommended at all...for me😛

Any way I was here for another reason...😃

Coming to the update...it was a teaser "a good one" of what one could expect in the next few...😊

As far as Yash becoming the puppet is concerned...I have no doubts that most husbands become a puppet eventually...they are left with no option!!!😆

Shanti posted it then I realized that I didn't proof and edit it. So got delayed in sending PMs. And you read it without any pics which spiced it up 😆

Opps sorry I forgot to mention the disclaimer which I did in the first part. And forgot about it when the actual scene happened 😆

Are you sure that it's the reason why Yash will become a Puppet in the end? It could be something else aslo 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: caller123
Hmm lovely update Nikki dear! They both had desire for each other. How much Aarthi tried to get away from Yash because he was known as womanizer she couldn't at last Yash asked her to marry him.
So Yash is the puppeteer and Aarthi is the puppet.

Waiting for the next part Nikki!😳😳

Thanks Kate.

I was afraid that you'll find it a bit explicit, which it is, frankly speaking.

They both desired each other. Poor Aarti the harder she tried to stay away from him, the closer she was getting to him and finally succumbed into his desires.

And we've yet to see who the Real Puppet will be in the end 😉

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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

dis was it? ooh ok den it was still nice 😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Abie10
OMG Nikki!🤢🤢 That's what it is . Sensuous! Increase out heartbeats through out the reading.🤢
Aarti couldn't help but play to his moves like a puppet. but let's see at the end how puppet becomes puppeteer!😉 Aarti is so cute with the answers she give to his questions.😆 She was hiding her beauty from him but at the end she was also attracted.😳😳 Eeeks you taste like chocolate!🤢🤢

He asked her to marry him and yet again she obeyed!

Nikki you are too good.👏👏

Abie I'm glad you loved it, especially after the changes that I made in it.

My heart was pounding along with Aarti's while making those changes 🤢 😆

Our simpleton finally (and readily) became the Puppet in the hands of the very person she was trying so hard to keep herself away from 🤢

Even I loved Aarti's answers and reactions, especially her chocolate cake comment was 🤢

And like a good and obedient P.A she obeyed her boss order to marry him 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr
Superb update...

Thanks for reading and commenting 😛

Originally posted by: g.vani
awesome update expecting more chapters...

Thanks for reason and commenting. And I'll write it into an SS if time permits it 😛

Originally posted by: goldenmoon
awesome

Thanks Dona 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: Leevi05
thanks for the update
awesome as usual
i know yash will be Puppeteer...
did he really loves aarti or just for ...?😆
plz continue as SS

Thanks Leevi for the appreciation

Yash had a strong attraction for her. Now was is love or lust, well right now even I'm not sure about that 😆

Even I'm tempted to convert it into an SS, but if and only when I'll get time 😛

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: saf24
Nikki this was simply fantastic. Very vivid descriptions which came together beautifully. The feelings experienced by by both Yash and Aarti were superbly articulated. Loved the update and can't wait for what is to come next.

In my bais opinion lol I would loved it if you converted it to a SS but it's all up to you as I know this takes time and effort.

Thanks Saf.

I kept writing it and the images and words kept pouring in. And you all appreciated my first attempt at something so different from my other works, well my efforts paid off.

Saf everyone wants me to convert it into an SS. Even I'm tempted to do it. Right now I've very rough idea along the story line. When it becomes concrete, I'll definitely convert it 😛

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: nan0102
another amazing update from our talented writer,,i love it,,and the precap is just🤢can't wait for the next update,,

Thanks Nan for the appreciation of my work

And I agree the precap is 🤢. I'm lucky that I got the exact pics of AarYa to match the precap 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Tanvi.narula
Yet againt an awsome update 4rm d brilliant writter..
Sensously n beautifully written.. Nd bleve me di its just wonderfull n not at all vulgar... U hav explained the emotions with such intricate details with such beauty...
S m a very greedy person i wud luv if u decide 2 turn into a ss, though the decision shud b urs.. See now u hav bcum d puppeter n v d readers ur puppet.. 😆..
Eagerly waiting 4 next update.. 😃

Thank You so much Tanvi for appreciating and praising my work 🤗

Tanvi after writing it, even I felt that its Sensuous and not Vulgar, and I'm happy that many of you agrees with me.

And you are not the only greedy person, even others (and me also) wants it to be converted into an SS 😉 😆