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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmm lovely update Nikki dear! They both had desire for each other. How much Aarthi tried to get away from Yash because he was known as womanizer she couldn't at last Yash asked her to marry him.
So Yash is the puppeteer and Aarthi is the puppet.

Waiting for the next part Nikki!😳😳
Edited by caller123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Bharthi you are my first commenter 🤗
But you forgot to hit the like button 😭

Thanks for your assuring words 🤗

Bharthi even I felt that its sensuous that's why I took the guts to post it 🤢

And what makes you think that Aarti will become the ultimate PUPPETEER? 😉


That's because I somehow feel that you will bring in the true essence of our Aarti...the Aarti who holds the key to Yash's heart and soul!!!!!😉


p/s have hit the Like button!!!!
Edited by palbhar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Nikki...a slow killer which involves readers. Sensuously written for pulse to quicken 😃..Well written.👏

I expect a few chapters on this...provided...I repeat...provided...your update doesn't eat up time for us to wait anxioously. You rock as a Puppeteer and readers as puppet😆

I was about to go to sleep when I saw yours and Bharthi's comments, so couldn't stop myself from replying 😳

Chitra my heart was beating so fast (like Aarti's ) while writing and posting this 🤢

I'll definitely try to convert it into SS after I finish BOY, as I want to show Yash's Casanova nature and why Aarti agreed to marry him and what'll happen after their marriage 😳

Till then my puppets will have to bear this puppeteer 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: palbhar


That's because I somehow feel that you will bring in the true essence of our Aarti...the Aarti who holds the key to Yash's heart and soul!!!!!😉


p/s have hit the Like button!!!!

Well lets see how right you are 😉
And thanks for hitting the button. You always do. But I know that you were lost in this chapter that's why you forgot 😆



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

I was about to go to sleep when I saw yours and Bharthi's comments, so couldn't stop myself from replying 😳

Chitra my heart was beating so fast (like Aarti's ) while writing and posting this 🤢

I'll definitely try to convert it into SS after I finish BOY, as I want to show Yash's Casanova nature and why Aarti agreed to marry him and what'll happen after their marriage 😳

Till then my puppets will have to bear this puppeteer 😉



Am very sure this OS will rock with the hint given above...grt...will wait...and dear Good night! Sleep well !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG Nikki!🤢🤢 That's what it is . Sensuous! Increase out heartbeats through out the reading.🤢
Aarti couldn't help but play to his moves like a puppet. but let's see at the end how puppet becomes puppeteer!😉 Aarti is so cute with the answers she give to his questions.😆 She was hiding her beauty from him but at the end she was also attracted.😳😳 Eeeks you taste like chocolate!🤢🤢

He asked her to marry him and yet again she obeyed!


Nikki you are too good.👏👏
Edited by Abie10 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited my comment ..the first one to read yours!!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
awesome update expecting more chapters...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for the update
awesome as usual
i know yash will be Puppeteer...
did he really loves aarti or just for ...?😆
plz continue as SS
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nikki this was simply fantastic. Very vivid descriptions which came together beautifully. The feelings experienced by by both Yash and Aarti were superbly articulated. Loved the update and can't wait for what is to come next.
In my bais opinion lol I would loved it if you converted it to a SS but it's all up to you as I know this takes time and effort.

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