Originally posted by: billieberry
First of all *holding ears*isya dear, am really sorry for such lateness
I am πfor not catching up earlier but glad am almost thereπ
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Superb update isya dear, really love itπβοΈπ
Poor yash he had to go back without Aarti, so sadπ
OMG!!! Prashant is a monster devil, he drugged her nd torturing her mercilessly, and he deserves a worst death. π‘π‘
I knew it Gayatri was misled about Aarti by python claiming to be yash's friend such a monsterπ‘
So sad yashji missing his aartiji, but as kids said she will come only naπ
Glad Aarti was able to escape but not without being hurt, poor soulπ,
Priyanka was forced too, Yash u rock man he played drama in mandap nd they were able to escapeπ,
Aarti made it to SM, an emotional reunion with yash, kids nd Aarya divine marriage
Superb action isya, what a fight yaar, me loved it nd prashant margaya lol!π
The last part Aarti lost her memory oh no... but as precap lot of romance haina?ππ
Fantastic dear, u re great isya nd am loving future of the voice.π
Chapter 20
Wow! Beautiful hot write up isya dearβοΈβοΈβοΈ
Mrs.yash scindia, a point of correction for doctor, love d sceneπ
Poor gayathri she is feeling guilty, loved yash nd d family confrontation about d truthπ
Shobha ma, she had to introduce herself but Aarti felt connected with her, nice, like d scene nd d way everyone came to visit herπ
Lovely poem isya, great job mukku dearπβοΈ
My favorite yash Aarti hospital scene, doctor nd patient hehehe so cute, but he told her I'm your husband, thanx to shobha ma for explaining before.ππ
"Maa kehte hain.. All relationship started with Dosti... Friendship... Toh Mujhse Dosti Karoge? Will you be a friend of mine? "So cute d way she asked
Nice welcoming by d cutie pies, nd with d help of pratik he helped his gundi babhi to survey d house a little.ππ
Poor kids, felt sad for them they miss their angel, but they re very understanding, love how paypal gave ansh an assurance that their mumma will get well soon. So innocent kidsπ
Vidhi nd prateek are really naughty, love their conversation with yashπ.
Aarya bedroom scene was fabulous, beautifully written, d dressing
scene was superb dearπβοΈ
Mid night scene was romantic, and morning scene can't handle nd yash wants to help Aarti take a shower he so naughtyπ
D bleeding scene nd d wrist kiss was awesome lovely but Aarti is
conscious to stay away from her lovely /dangerous patni though she is liking his sweet nature.π
Precap sounds interesting, running to read d next part
Chapter 21
Wow!!! Superb write up isya dear
First part so cute d bedroom romance, naughty yashji and Aarti omg!!!
Please don't EAT me ! Aap human ho na?? no he is a romantic vampire heheheπ€’π
Meri bhagwan ki kasam, she has started her nonsense again what her
problem,π‘ glad yash came on time nd warned herπ
Aww! d garden scene was beautiful isya, lovely dear, cute family time,ππΌ
poor ansh he misses his mumma very much. And paypal innocent souls they re teasing their yash papaπππΌ
Aarti felt like visiting her parent nd yash wants to surprise her wow! He
told Gayatri his feeling so nice, mother son bonding really niceβοΈβοΈ
Love yash and prateek bonding nd the brotherly teasing. Prateek wants
to meet paridhi so nice nd he is going to be d lead chef for d ladies lol!π
Saree scene with yash so romantic, yash is funny nd naughty omg! Your
dangerous man is here... Wake up! If not you'll be full naked" naughty husband cute kiss nd eye lock, yash tying her saree was perfect nd his gift so beautifulπβοΈ,
Gayatri is awesome struck with her beauty so is our yashji that why he never fail to romance with his wifeππ
Love Aarti nd Gayatri conversation, Aarti openly tells her how yash is
being naughty nd he always wants a kiss hehehe, so true Gayatri is right where will he get one if not from herππ(Meππ)
The surprise is here, shobha nd Dubey ji, ansh miss his grandparent
aww!, poor prateek he misses paridhi's presence.
Dinner scene was beautiful, bua got irritated thank God she left before
she starts her taunting sessionπ
Last part was emotional dear, Aarti doesn't know what happened to her
poor girl, maybe gradually,
Ansh questions were so touching, they all broke down seeing ansh
conditionπ, glad yash is there to handle the situation.π
Really amazing isya, love every bit of d update.β€οΈ!!
more comment to come π³, glad am catching upπ
yay!! congratulations for d new thread dear! u rock nd continue rockingβ€οΈπ€!!