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prachidalmia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#661

lovely update

looking forward for aarthi's part of the story

looking forward to know what happened in past that made aarthi trust yash blindly

looking forward to know how and when they feel in love

once again some things should be confide between husband and wife so i still think that the aarthi's part of story should not be told infornt of the whole family

however the other family members should be educated by yash with only needed details

looking forward for the next update

update soon

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#662

Originally posted by: maha9
First of all sorry and congrats dear 😳
sorry for being too late in commenting on ur lovely update and congrats for your grand come back sweetu 🤗

and thank u for responding us with such a cute emotional update dear 👏 why do u think u have not done upto expectation ?? this is simply superb dear ⭐️⭐️⭐️ but my only hatred goes towards ... as u know the evil monsters of this show 😡😡😡 i will kill them if they r in my hands dear 🤢

now coming to your update 😉

really you have a great stupendous talent sweetu 🤗🤗🤗
everybody cant perform such emotional parts like u dear... u melt my heart with ur lovely touching words !!!

g3 deserves to be proud of her yash 👏👏👏 truly nobody cant become like yash dear.. he is a simply honorable person and when g3 praises him the dubeys should learn how to respect their children !!!

dubey ... the name of a most evil human kind 😡😡😡 how is he treating his own daughter !!
and shoba on top of that.. she does not deserve to be a mother at all !!! she is a devil and how dare she says arthi should marry a person who is widower or some stupid... just bcoz of what that prashant did and said... they believed the entire fault is on arthi.. their own daughter...
now i feel like hitting them stones and even possible burn alive in fire 😡😡😡

now coming to ammaji and her stupid lalla..
i am wondering whether a person can spin such a stpry so well and make those evil dubeys believe it.. just tear that mouth which put arthi in bad situation... and he did marry arthi also...😡 OMG i cant imagine how many troubles tortures he did to arthi !!! and all this serves as a mean for dubey to taunt arthi 😭 i want to hug that poor soul sweetu

Dr. kiran a superb psychartist 👏👏👏and her thoughts regarding arthi's future is great dear 😉
she is the needed person for her to come out of this terrible life and yup she is still doing it..

but i am worried nobody no person had the softness in their heart for arthi and listen to dr's advise 😭

g3 is so great for doing all this to arthi dear.. she is great person but why did arthi agree to marry that devil 😡😡 did that stupids pressurize her 😡 sure they must have did it and another possibilty is arthi thinks herself immoral now and wants yash to have a happy life without her.. why arthi ? u could have asked yash once 😭 he would have not let her live a hell life till now ..

but all this time the only thing that is staying so pure is arthi's trust on yash 👏👏👏 so good to see arthi wanting the closeness and comfortation from yash and what did she show in her mobile 😲😲
so it means arthi has already seen yash and fell in love and respect... great dear..
now i am waiting to hear the rest of the part from arthi's side and what torture that stupid gave to her 😡😡
till now her life was hell but after this.. it will be beautiful with yash 😳😳😳 i am sure of it sweetu..

thank u so much for such a cute touching update dear !!! everytime my hearts falls for yash and arthi.. their happiness makes me happy and their sadness makes me to be sad.. that much we r connected with arya dear..
love you sweetu 🤗

I'll reply on this next week (after 14th), as I'm busy with next MTB update and a surprise 😉

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#663

Originally posted by: RA17

OMG Riya, you are so right. Charmi, I and Mukti and freaked out so badly when PV was about to end 😆. I can still freak out, if something like that happens again 😆. Cause I know that you are there to handle and support me 🤗. Loved your shayari, my Shayar 👏
Coming to the update...

You are right once again about the Kalyug. Dubey's, being Aarti's parents, can't even feel their daughters pain. Kiran's advice is not going to have any effect on people like Dubey's and Amma and her lalla 😡

Riya Yash won't turn into a hulk. Even if he's angry, he won't show it to Aarti or Gayatri. He'll take out his anger and frustration in a different manner.

Sorry dear for missing your comment and not replying on it earlier

hmm looking forward to new yash actually as you know my faith in aarti has proved it right so wanna see yash at his best😉

well coming to freaking all i can say sweetheart you are Freakin Awesome😳

n hey dare you say sorry bach bache ke ek hockey dungi rakh ke 😡

how abt my this shayari😆

I'll reply on this next week (after 14th), as I'm busy with next MTB update and a surprise 😉

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#664

Originally posted by: prachidalmia
lovely update
looking forward for aarthi's part of the story
looking forward to know what happened in past that made aarthi trust yash blindly
looking forward to know how and when they feel in love
once again some things should be confide between husband and wife so i still think that the aarthi's part of story should not be told infornt of the whole family
however the other family members should be educated by yash with only needed details
looking forward for the next update
update soon

I'll reply on this next week (after 14th), as I'm busy with next MTB update and a surprise 😉

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charmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#665

Awesome chapters till now di...

I so want u to continue soon

I am not able to comment long..sorry..very busy with school

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#666

Promo Scene from page one

This scene will come at the end of this chapter which is in the below post.

Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#667

Removed For Personal Reasons 😃

Edited by lovely_nikki - 8 years ago

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#668

Special Note (Don't miss it)

The whole cafe scene was in my mind since a very long time. Finally I wrote it.

Well friends how was it?

It might seem like a filler chapter, but this chapter was for Yash's and Aarti's character build-up.

In this chapter I've shown Yash's nature. How he acts impulsively, like when he jumped into that pool.

How he jumps to conclusion, like when he got angry and bashed the couple, that little girls parents, for their negligence, (though he was not wrong)

How he mellows down immediately and regrets and feels guilty of his actions, like when he apologized to that girls parents, when he saw them in that hug.

How he takes actions to protect some. Like when he blasted the staff of that cafe, and threatened to shut them down, if they don't take safety measures.

This chapter focused on Aarti's and Aakash's relation also. It showed how and why Aarti trusts Yash. And how much she loves him.

This chapter also showed a little bit of Aakash's life story and his nature. His side of the story will be revealed in parts in the upcoming chapters. How he also suffered at the hands of Satyendra Dubey, who almost ruined his parents and his life. All this will be shown later, after the whole truth comes out.

I hope that you all agree with me for the points that I've shown in this chapter. And please I'd love to know which scene, which sentence, which dialogue you liked in every chapters. As I write whatever comes into my mind.

You can also write on something which you didn't liked or agree with. It'll also help me a lot in future also.

And once again I won't reply on any comments before 12th November, as I'm working on a surprise for Monday the 11th of November, which is a very special day for me. Hope you won't mind.

A special request to all the silent readers, it's ok it you don't want to comment, but if you read my stories, please do Hit the Like Buttons. As it takes so much effort to work on an single chapter. So your hitting the button means a lot to me. It'll be like you are appreciating my efforts.

So don't forget to Hit the Like Button and keep on reading my scribbles.

Love

NIKKI.

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caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#669

Well done Nikki! A great update yar!👏

Love the way Aarthi told about Aakash to others. All should know about it as they said so many bad things about her and doubted her.

They all should know about it.

Love the way Aarthi shouted and stopped them as they all should know her story too.

I just love the scene where she started to tremble and where Yash consoles her. It really touched me.

It's not a filler to me Nikki as I got to know about Aakash and Yash's past.

No wonder Aarthi started to trust Yash so much.

True if a man can save another without thinking about his life he can be trustworthy.

So their love started from there. From that incident. Truly they were meant to be.

I'm waiting to read Aarthi's past wonder whether I would be able to read it as it would be more painful.

Awesome work Nikki!⭐️

Just loved it to the core.❤️

Thank you so much dear!

Edited by caller123 - 11 years ago

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Abie10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#670

Ah, another fab update Nikki.👏👏👏 Yash is so hurt for not been able to understand and see the pain in Aarti's eyes behind her mask. But he's someone who believes what's at present in front of him and join to conclusion. That's what happened when he was angry after hearing Aarti-Aakash phone convo and also the pool side when he was furious(which was right though).

Aarti did try to stop him from going and brings him back to listen to her part of the painful mess. Yes mess because that's what prashant and her parents turned her life into.😡😡 Loved how she begins with how even she was unaware of his proposal. Her family would have fixed her marriage even hers without asking her.😡 But that scholarship came as a blessing for her as her dad will do anything for his so called status. And she again tells him hers and Aakash's relationship. Then to the day that planted that undying trust for yash in her. This was indeed a valid reason to give her the reason to trust this yash. Someone who jump in the water and save some kids life and then went all furious on the parents for their neglecting the child to blasting the Cafe people for childrens safety can't be a bad human.

Gayatri reading their eyes asked all to leave but Aarti knows her reasons why she want all to hear her story because in some ways all blamed her for lots of things.😭

Thanks for the update Nikki. Waiting for the next chapter.🤗

Edited by Abie10 - 11 years ago